Mastering the Art of Writing Effective Letters of Recommendation

Writing Effective Letters of
Recommendation of Trainees
Jennifer Kogan, MD
Ilene Rosen, MD
Barbara Wagner, MS
Objectives
1
. Describe your 
responsibility
 when writing a LoR.
2
. List 
essential features
 that should be present in a LoR.
3
. Describe 
common mistakes
 
to avoid
 when writing a
LoR.
4
. 
Tailor a LoR
 based on performance level.
What types of letters of
recommendation are
you asked to write?
What are your greatest
challenges writing letters
of recommendation?
Fantasy Land of LoR
“ A wondrous place . . . Where people have
excellent interpersonal skills and about a tenth
of the inhabitants are among the finest I have
ever worked with, and almost all are in the
upper quarter.”
         Friedman RB. Fantasy land. N Engl J Med. 1983;308:651-3
LoR Problems
Expectations not defined
No agreement on the adjectives
Inherent selection bias
Reliability and validity dubious
Shortened exposure to trainees
Objectives
1
. Describe your 
responsibility
 when writing a LoR.
2
. List 
essential features
 that should be present in a LoR.
3
. Describe 
common mistakes
 
to avoid
 when writing a
LoR.
4
. 
Tailor a LoR
 based on performance level.
What is Your Responsibility
Trainee
Reader
Institution/Recruitment
Society/Profession
Yourself
Writing the Letter
LoR
Constructive criticism NOT required/expected
Acceptable to include your subjective opinions more
than you would in an evaluation
Evaluation letter or reference letter
Balanced letter expected
Getting Started
Commit enough time
Meet with the candidate
Review candidate’s CV/personal statement
Talk about their accomplishments
Know what they are applying for/career goals
Decide if it’s letter you feel comfortable writing
Read sample letters
Ask for feedback on your letters
Don’t ask learners to write their own letter
Objectives
1
. Describe your 
responsibility
 when writing a LoR
.
2
. List 
essential features
 that should be present in a LoR.
3
. Describe 
common mistakes
 
to avoid
when writing a LoR.
4
. 
Tailor a LoR
 based on performance level.
Three Important Components
Assessment of learner’s strengths
Based on first hand experience
Assessment of future performance
Applicant’s distinguishing features
Essential Features
 
Formal approach
Careful word selection
Honest/authentic
Specific, objective data
Information you would want to know
Relevant and germane skills/characteristics
Short and clear
Fair/in good faith
Larkin GL. Acad Emerg Med. 2001;8:70-3
Wright SM. JGIM. 2004;19:588-93
Format Instructions
Use official letter head
Address letter  (e.g. “Dear XXX”)
Include student’s AAMC ID and ERAS letter ID
Ensure learner’s/candidate’s name spelled
correctly throughout
1-1 1/2 pages
Sign letter (sign printed copy and scan or use
electronic signature)
Save as PDF
Paragraph 1: Provide Context
Applicant’s name in first line
Purpose of the letter
Who are you?
How do you know the trainee?
In what capacity did you work together?
For how long?
What were key learner responsibilities?
Did trainee waive right to read letter?
Paragraph 1: Example
I have been asked to write this letter of recommendation
on behalf of Ima Star who is applying for an Internal Medicine
residency. I have been a rheumatologist for 15 years and
fellowship director for 5. I have worked with
Ima for two weeks during her Rheumatology elective during
her fourth year of medical school. During this elective,
Ima independently evaluated and presented two new
consults daily in addition to two follow-up presentations. She also
worked with me in the office on multiple occasions.  As such, I feel
as though I am able to accurately comment on her capabilities.
Ima has waived her right to view this letter.
It is with utmost enthusiasm
that I write
It is with great pleasure that I
write
Paragraph 1: Example
I have been asked to write this letter of recommendation
on behalf of Ima Star. I have been a rheumatologist for
15 years and fellowship director for 5. I have worked with
Ima for two weeks during her Rheumatology elective during
her fourth year of medical school. During this elective,
Ima independently evaluated and presented two new
consults daily in addition to two follow-up presentations. She also
worked with me in the office on multiple occasions.  As such, I feel
as though I am able to accurately comment on her capabilities.
Ima has waived her right to view this letter.
Family Educational Rights
& Privacy Act (FERPA)
Federal law (1974) protects privacy of student
education records
Applies to 
students
 
at
 
all schools receiving funds
under an applicable program of the U.S. Department
of Education
Gives students the right to consent to disclosure of
any part of their “educational record” by the
educational institution or one of its employees
FERPA and LoR
LoR 
are
 considered an education record if
faculty writes letter in role as faculty member
letter is about student’s tenure at school
Provides students with right to access LoR and
complete applicant file
Waiving FERPA
Majority of schools/programs ask (some require)
trainees to waive access to LoR
Once waived, trainee has no right to review LoR
Explicitly state in your letter trainee has made
written waiver
No specific laws applicable for residents/fellows
BUT: most programs/employers prefer trainee
waives right to review letter
Paragraph 2: Most Relevant Skills
Clinical letter
Medical Knowledge
Intellectual ability
Patient care skills
Analytic skills
Technical skills
Research letter
Skill formulating
research question
Ability to select
methodology
Data collection and
interpretation skills
Scientific writing
Grant funding
Paragraph 3:
Other Relevant Attributes
Interpersonal skills
Professionalism/Integrity
Character
Work ethic/attitude to learning/initiative
Sense of responsibility
Communication skills
Personality
Leadership skills
Remember
Be specific
Quantify and compare
Address requirements of the position
Personal attributes/special interests that make
candidate unique
Beware of what you leave out
Use Impact Words
What words do you like
to see in a letter?
Use Impact Words
Enthusiastic
Shows initiative
Self- directed
Confident
Self-assured
Articulate
Observant
Intelligent
Efficient
Highly organized
Effective
Dedicated
Committed
Motivated
Team player
Collaborative
Empathic
Humanistic
Mature
Sincere
 
Leader
Integrity
Paragraph 4:Summary
Summarize overall findings
Repeat unique favorable attributes
Bottom line recommendation (quantify if can)
Overall fit for the position/institution/program
Offer for contact
Example
Compared to the other students I have worked with in
my 15 years as an attending on the consult service, Ima
is outstanding (top 10%). I wholeheartedly recommend
her to your residency program without any reservations.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you desire
additional information.
Secret Language of Clinical Letters
Rank Words
Outstanding
Excellent
Very good
Good
Solid
Appropriate for level of
training
Recommend
Wholeheartedly
Enthusiastically
Without reservation
With confidence
With pleasure
With comfort
Strongly
With reservation
Do not recommend
Don’t Forget to Edit!!!
Keep it to 1 to 1 ½ pages
Proofread and spell check
Especially pronouns (ask)
Re-read for gender bias
Gender Bias
Length
Emphasis
Women: strong work ethic/ training/ teaching
Men: research and ability
Adjectives
Men standout: superb, outstanding, remarkable
Women: minimal assurance
Gender stereotype: lovely, compassionate,
nurturing
 Trix and Psenka (2003)
Objectives
1
. Describe your 
responsibility
 when writing a LoR
.
2
. List 
essential features
 that should be present in a LoR. 
3
. Describe 
common mistakes
 
to avoid
 when writing a
LoR.
4
. 
Tailor a LoR
 based on performance level.
Common Mistakes:
Letters that Hurt
Common Mistakes:
Letters that Hurt
List wrong specialty/position being applied for
Too short or too long
No specific examples
Gender bias
Reiterate information available elsewhere
Excessive focus on how the writer knows applicant
without describing accomplishments
Common Mistakes:
Letters that Hurt
Mention age, race/ethnicity, marital status,
children, physical characteristics
Personal anecdote
Struggles
Objectives
1
. Describe your 
responsibility
 when writing a LoR
.
2
. List 
essential features
 that should be present in a LoR. 
3
. Describe 
common mistakes
 
to avoid
 when writing a
LoR. 
4
. 
Tailor a LoR
 based on performance level.
Troubleshooting the “Problem Letter”
Say No
Cannot write letter positive enough to be
helpful
Have little/no recollection of applicant
NOTE: Can be remedied by
Keeping copy of all evaluations
Keeping copies of presentations
Face to face
D
on’t have time
When You Can’t Write A Great Letter
Disclose beforehand
Limit criticism to one paragraph late in letter
Phrase criticism affirmatively
When You Can’t Write A Great Letter
Note impressive improvements/response to feedback
Over the course of his time with me, Justin developed more
sophisticated differential diagnoses and plans for his patients
.”
“It took a while for Justin to get his research projects started, but he
now has an oral abstract and a poster presentation, and I think
going forward he will make important contributions to the field.”
Focus on what was accomplished (EVEN if accomplishments
were expected)
Justin was punctual and always read about his patients.”
When You Can’t Write A Great Letter
Highlight previous successes
Repeat details from CV/academic record
Put interpersonal skills (3rd paragraph) as 2nd
paragraph for more academically weak candidates
Examples
Her teaching will improve once she gains a higher
level of confidence….”
His fund of knowledge will improve as he continues
to read about his patients….”
“I’m confident that her interpersonal skills will
improve as she gains more experience working on
a team….”
“He readily accepts and incorporates feedback
regarding his need to work on….”
Legal Perspectives
Don’t disclose information without written permission
Ask trainee to waive right to access
Only share factual, truthful statements made in good
faith
Never disclose private (i.e. medical) information
Review negative comments to make sure they are
accurate and factual
Top 10 List for Effective Letters
 
1.
Authentic: based on 1
st
 hand knowledge
2.
Honest: accurate; avoid exaggeration or hyperbole
3.
Relevant: describe important skills/attributes
4.
Specific: provides examples to support praise
5. 
 
Confidential: avoid unnecessary disclosure
6.
Appropriate detail /length
7.
Technically clear: avoid unnecessary jargon
8. 
 
Use the right code words
9. 
 
Personalized: Tailor comments for the applicant
10. 
 
PROOFREAD, PROOFREAD, PROOFREAD!!
Questions
Practice
 
 
1.
Read each LOR
2.
Use worksheet to list
LOR strengths/flaws
3.
Revise LOR
 
Ima Star
Justin Soso
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  1. Writing Effective Letters of Recommendation of Trainees Jennifer Kogan, MD Ilene Rosen, MD Barbara Wagner, MS

  2. Objectives 1. Describe your responsibility when writing a LoR. 2. List essential features that should be present in a LoR. 3. Describe common mistakes to avoid when writing a LoR. 4. Tailor a LoR based on performance level. Penn Mark graphic

  3. What types of letters of recommendation are you asked to write? Penn Mark graphic

  4. What are your greatest challenges writing letters of recommendation? Penn Mark graphic

  5. Fantasy Land of LoR A wondrous place . . . Where people have excellent interpersonal skills and about a tenth of the inhabitants are among the finest I have ever worked with, and almost all are in the upper quarter. Friedman RB. Fantasy land. N Engl J Med. 1983;308:651-3 Penn Mark graphic

  6. LoR Problems Expectations not defined No agreement on the adjectives Inherent selection bias Reliability and validity dubious Shortened exposure to trainees Penn Mark graphic

  7. Objectives 1. Describe your responsibility when writing a LoR. 2. List essential features that should be present in a LoR. 3. Describe common mistakesto avoid when writing a LoR. 4. Tailor a LoR based on performance level. Penn Mark graphic

  8. What is Your Responsibility Trainee Reader Institution/Recruitment Society/Profession Yourself Penn Mark graphic

  9. Stakeholder Trainee Responsibility Help advance as far as s/he can go Provide useful data to select best/ appropriate candidate Help get learners to best places possible Gatekeeper to patient safety Honesty/integrity and your reputation Reader Institution/ Recruitment Society/Profession Yourself

  10. Writing the Letter LoR Constructive criticism NOT required/expected Acceptable to include your subjective opinions more than you would in an evaluation Evaluation letter or reference letter Balanced letter expected Penn Mark graphic

  11. Getting Started Commit enough time Meet with the candidate Review candidate s CV/personal statement Talk about their accomplishments Know what they are applying for/career goals Decide if it s letter you feel comfortable writing Read sample letters Ask for feedback on your letters Don t ask learners to write their own letter Penn Mark graphic

  12. Objectives 1. Describe your responsibility when writing a LoR. 2. List essential features that should be present in a LoR. 3. Describe common mistakesto avoid when writing a LoR. 4. Tailor a LoR based on performance level. Penn Mark graphic

  13. Three Important Components Assessment of learner s strengths Based on first hand experience Assessment of future performance Applicant s distinguishing features Penn Mark graphic

  14. Essential Features Formal approach Careful word selection Honest/authentic Specific, objective data Information you would want to know Relevant and germane skills/characteristics Short and clear Fair/in good faith Larkin GL. Acad Emerg Med. 2001;8:70-3 Wright SM. JGIM. 2004;19:588-93 Penn Mark graphic

  15. Format Instructions Use official letter head Address letter (e.g. Dear XXX ) Include student s AAMC ID and ERAS letter ID Ensure learner s/candidate s name spelled correctly throughout 1-1 1/2 pages Sign letter (sign printed copy and scan or use electronic signature) Save as PDF Penn Mark graphic

  16. Paragraph 1: Provide Context Applicant s name in first line Purpose of the letter Who are you? How do you know the trainee? In what capacity did you work together? For how long? What were key learner responsibilities? Did trainee waive right to read letter? Penn Mark graphic

  17. Paragraph 1: Example It is with utmost enthusiasm that I write I have been asked to write this letter of recommendation on behalf of Ima Star who is applying for an Internal Medicine residency. I have been a rheumatologist for 15 years and fellowship director for 5. I have worked with Ima for two weeks during her Rheumatology elective during her fourth year of medical school. During this elective, Ima independently evaluated and presented two new consults daily in addition to two follow-up presentations. She also worked with me in the office on multiple occasions. As such, I feel as though I am able to accurately comment on her capabilities. Ima has waived her right to view this letter. It is with great pleasure that I write

  18. Paragraph 1: Example I have been asked to write this letter of recommendation on behalf of Ima Star. I have been a rheumatologist for 15 years and fellowship director for 5. I have worked with Ima for two weeks during her Rheumatology elective during her fourth year of medical school. During this elective, Ima independently evaluated and presented two new consults daily in addition to two follow-up presentations. She also worked with me in the office on multiple occasions. As such, I feel as though I am able to accurately comment on her capabilities. Ima has waived her right to view this letter.

  19. Family Educational Rights & Privacy Act (FERPA) Federal law (1974) protects privacy of student education records Applies to studentsatall schools receiving funds under an applicable program of the U.S. Department of Education Gives students the right to consent to disclosure of any part of their educational record by the educational institution or one of its employees Penn Mark graphic

  20. FERPA and LoR LoR are considered an education record if faculty writes letter in role as faculty member letter is about student s tenure at school Provides students with right to access LoR and complete applicant file Penn Mark graphic

  21. Waiving FERPA Majority of schools/programs ask (some require) trainees to waive access to LoR Once waived, trainee has no right to review LoR Explicitly state in your letter trainee has made written waiver No specific laws applicable for residents/fellows BUT: most programs/employers prefer trainee waives right to review letter Penn Mark graphic

  22. Paragraph 2: Most Relevant Skills Clinical letter Medical Knowledge Intellectual ability Patient care skills Analytic skills Technical skills Research letter Skill formulating research question Ability to select methodology Data collection and interpretation skills Scientific writing Grant funding Penn Mark graphic

  23. Paragraph 3: Other Relevant Attributes Interpersonal skills Professionalism/Integrity Character Work ethic/attitude to learning/initiative Sense of responsibility Communication skills Personality Leadership skills Penn Mark graphic

  24. Remember Be specific Quantify and compare Address requirements of the position Personal attributes/special interests that make candidate unique Beware of what you leave out Penn Mark graphic

  25. Use Impact Words What words do you like to see in a letter?

  26. Use Impact Words Dedicated Committed Motivated Intelligent Team player Collaborative Confident Self-assured Empathic Humanistic Mature Sincere Enthusiastic Shows initiative Self- directed Articulate Observant Leader Integrity Penn Mark graphic

  27. Paragraph 4:Summary Summarize overall findings Repeat unique favorable attributes Bottom line recommendation (quantify if can) Overall fit for the position/institution/program Offer for contact Penn Mark graphic

  28. Example Compared to the other students I have worked with in my 15 years as an attending on the consult service, Ima is outstanding (top 10%). I wholeheartedly recommend her to your residency program without any reservations. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you desire additional information. Penn Mark graphic

  29. Secret Language of Clinical Letters Recommend Wholeheartedly Enthusiastically Without reservation With confidence With pleasure With comfort Strongly With reservation Do not recommend Rank Words Outstanding Excellent Very good Good Solid Appropriate for level of training

  30. Dont Forget to Edit!!! Keep it to 1 to 1 pages Proofread and spell check Especially pronouns (ask) Re-read for gender bias Penn Mark graphic

  31. Gender Bias Length Emphasis Women: strong work ethic/ training/ teaching Men: research and ability Adjectives Men standout: superb, outstanding, remarkable Women: minimal assurance Gender stereotype: lovely, compassionate, nurturing Penn Mark graphic Trix and Psenka (2003)

  32. Objectives 1. Describe your responsibility when writing a LoR. 2. List essential features that should be present in a LoR. 3. Describe common mistakesto avoid when writing a LoR. 4. Tailor a LoR based on performance level. Penn Mark graphic

  33. Common Mistakes: Letters that Hurt Penn Mark graphic

  34. Common Mistakes: Letters that Hurt List wrong specialty/position being applied for Too short or too long No specific examples Gender bias Reiterate information available elsewhere Excessive focus on how the writer knows applicant without describing accomplishments Penn Mark graphic

  35. Common Mistakes: Letters that Hurt Mention age, race/ethnicity, marital status, children, physical characteristics Personal anecdote Struggles Penn Mark graphic

  36. Objectives 1. Describe your responsibility when writing a LoR. 2. List essential features that should be present in a LoR. 3. Describe common mistakesto avoid when writing a LoR. 4. Tailor a LoR based on performance level. Penn Mark graphic

  37. Troubleshooting the Problem Letter Penn Mark graphic

  38. Say No Cannot write letter positive enough to be helpful Have little/no recollection of applicant NOTE: Can be remedied by Keeping copy of all evaluations Keeping copies of presentations Face to face Don t have time Penn Mark graphic

  39. When You Cant Write A Great Letter Disclose beforehand Limit criticism to one paragraph late in letter Phrase criticism affirmatively Penn Mark graphic

  40. When You Cant Write A Great Letter Note impressive improvements/response to feedback Over the course of his time with me, Justin developed more sophisticated differential diagnoses and plans for his patients. It took a while for Justin to get his research projects started, but he now has an oral abstract and a poster presentation, and I think going forward he will make important contributions to the field. Focus on what was accomplished (EVEN if accomplishments were expected) Justin was punctual and always read about his patients. Penn Mark graphic

  41. When You Cant Write A Great Letter Highlight previous successes Repeat details from CV/academic record Put interpersonal skills (3rd paragraph) as 2nd paragraph for more academically weak candidates Penn Mark graphic

  42. Examples Her teaching will improve once she gains a higher level of confidence . His fund of knowledge will improve as he continues to read about his patients . I m confident that her interpersonal skills will improve as she gains more experience working on a team . He readily accepts and incorporates feedback regarding his need to work on . Penn Mark graphic

  43. Legal Perspectives Don t disclose information without written permission Ask trainee to waive right to access Only share factual, truthful statements made in good faith Never disclose private (i.e. medical) information Review negative comments to make sure they are accurate and factual Penn Mark graphic

  44. Top 10 List for Effective Letters Authentic: based on 1st hand knowledge Honest: accurate; avoid exaggeration or hyperbole Relevant: describe important skills/attributes Specific: provides examples to support praise Confidential: avoid unnecessary disclosure Appropriate detail /length Technically clear: avoid unnecessary jargon Use the right code words Personalized: Tailor comments for the applicant 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. PROOFREAD, PROOFREAD, PROOFREAD!! Penn Mark graphic

  45. Questions Penn Mark graphic

  46. Practice Ima Star Justin Soso 1. Read each LOR 2. Use worksheet to list LOR strengths/flaws 3. Revise LOR Penn Mark graphic

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