Mastering Appeal Writing Methods

 
WRITING APPEAL
ARGUMENTS
Learn how to use the appeal writing method: IRAC
Identifying the Issue(s): rewrite and recognize
Listing the rules
Analyzing the facts
Concluding with the desired outcome
Review tips on writing clearly and persuasively
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LESSON OBJECTIVES
An appeal argument should clearly list the following:
The issue on appeal
What the VA did wrong or failed to do in making their decision,
citing objective evidence to support your argument
What will satisfy the appellant (what does he/she want)
What does the appellant want VA to do?
**If possible, limit argument to 2-3 paragraphs for each issue
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BEFORE WE BEGIN
All appeals should be accompanied by an appeals argument prepared
by the representative.
This includes:
Supplemental Claims (21-0995)
Higher Level Review (21-0996)
Appeals to the BVA
 
(10182)
*Remember there is a difference between argument and evidence
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BEFORE WE BEGIN
Prior to writing an appeals argument, you must review the claims
file to determine:
The reason why the benefit was denied
What evidence/action is needed to grant the benefit
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BEFORE WE BEGIN WRITING
Kendall Johnstone was recently granted a 0% service-connected
rating for headaches. She wants to appeal the rating. The rating
decision states the following: 
We have assigned a noncompensable evaluation for your headaches based on:
     • With less frequent attacks
A higher evaluation of 10 percent is not warranted unless there are characteristic
prostrating attacks averaging one in 2 months over the last several months.
Why was the benefit (increased rating) denied?
What evidence/action is needed to grant the benefit?
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BEFORE WE BEGIN WRITING
IRAC stands for:
 
Issue
 
Rule
 
Analysis
 
Conclusion
Though this method is not mandatory, it will help keep your argument organized
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IRAC APPEAL WRITING METHOD
Locate the rating decision that addresses the veteran’s issue
The issue is already presented to you in a numbered list in the decision
being appealed and is phrased in terms of “entitlement to” the issue
The rating decision will also include the reasons for the denial
Why are the reasons for denial important?
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IDENTIFYING THE ISSUE
Some of the most overlooked/misstated issues are:
Earlier effective date of a rating vs increased rating or earlier effective date for service
connection
Example: Veteran appeals 50% rating for PTSD. Is awarded 70% rating after 3 years in appeals,
but only as of exam date. Continues appeal asking not for 100%, but earlier date of 70% rating.
Separate ratings vs increased ratings
Example: you cannot receive a rating higher than 40% under the diagnostic code for a certain
condition based on limitation of motion, but you also have neuropathy that should be rated
under another diagnostic code
Disagreement with the creation of an overpayment vs Request for a waiver of an
overpayment
You may have both issues in an appeal, but they are very different arguments: the fact that you
never owed anything v. telling VA it was not your fault/you have a hardship so you should not
have to pay
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IDENTIFYING THE ISSUE
Same types of claims will typically use the same rules, some of which will
be stated in the rating decision
However, there are many exceptions in veterans' law, which the rating
decision may leave out
After identifying the issue, you can either:
Start with the facts, and match up which rules apply to those facts, or
Start with every possible rule, and see if the facts support that rule
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RECOGNIZING THE RULE(S)
Issue is entitlement to compensation with aid and attendance. Veteran
is service connected at 100% for loss of use of the arm, hypertension,
and erectile dysfunction.
The rules are:
Veteran must need aid and attendance of another person
For at least two activities of daily living
Due solely to service-connected conditions
And the rating for compensation purposes generally needs to be at least 100%
Now we can review the rating decision and the claims file to see which
rules VA thought the veteran did not meet, based on the evidence
presented
.
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STARTING WITH THE RULE
If the rating decision does not tell you a lot, starting with the facts may be
easier
Issue is service connection for a right shoulder joint condition denied
due to no event in service.
Facts: 
Veteran claims he injured his shoulder during combat mission in
Afghanistan. Post-deployment health assessment shows complaint of upper
extremity problem after deployment. Veteran was activated Guard member
and did not have a separation physical. Right shoulder arthritis diagnosed
10 months post service.
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STARTING WITH THE FACTS
In this example, the facts lead you to the rules:
Combat veteran presumption can apply and presume event in service
(38 CFR 3.304)
While STRs do not show diagnosis/injury, post-deployment assessment is
consistent with veteran’s complaints
Arthritis was diagnosed within one year of veteran’s release from active
duty. If veteran had at least 90 days continuous active service, chronic
condition presumptive rule should apply to show nexus
(38 CFR 3.307 & 3.309(a))
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STARTING WITH THE FACTS
A non-meritorious appeal fails to meet the necessary criteria for a grant –
no way to argue or change the facts.
Examples:
Pension when the veteran has no wartime service
DIC when the veteran and spouse were divorced at the time of death and
have no children
Service connection cases where the veteran does not have the claimed
disability
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NON-MERITORIOUS APPEALS
If there are no facts to support the applicable rules, you 
MUST
 explain this
to the client and suggest how the evidence can be improved or suggest
either not appealing or withdrawing the appeal.
Per NVS Policy & Procedure, 
the client must sign 
if withdrawing the
appeal, not the service officer, even though VA rules allow it.
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WITHDRAWAL OF APPEALS
If you have facts that support the client’s claim, compare them with the
previous rating
But don’t spend too much time discussing the reasons the veteran’s claim
was previously denied
Compare:
The veteran’s claim was previously denied because no event in service was established
and no nexus to military service was established.
The veteran’s current right shoulder arthritis was found to be a favorable finding in the
previous rating dated September 1, 2020 that denied service connection due to a lack of
in-service incident. The injury in service should have been conceded since it occurred
during the veteran’s combat service, as evidenced by the veteran’s post-deployment
assessment of 3/1/2005.
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ANALYSIS/ARGUMENT
You may have the same analysis/argument for multiple issues. If VA did not
find the veteran’s service records, that failure of the duty to assist will likely
impact all claims for service connection.
Example:
The issues of service connection for hearing loss, tinnitus, PTSD, and
bilateral knee condition should all be resolved by VA requesting the
veteran’s full service record and re-adjudicating the claim. Previously, only
the records of his first period of service were obtained, but service treatment
records from 2010-2013 were not obtained.
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ANALYSIS/ARGUMENT
Reasonable Doubt (38 CFR 3.102)
a.k.a. Benefit of the Doubt
Should only be used when the evidence is approximately equal on both sides (equipoise)
If the evidence is 51% or more on the veteran’s side, you don’t need to argue benefit of
the doubt
Allows you to say the evidence is equal so the tie should go to the veteran.
Benefit of the doubt should not be cited routinely and never in non-meritorious cases.
If you believe that benefit of the doubt applies to your claim:
Discuss the evidence in FAVOR of the claim
Discuss the evidence AGAINST the claim
Explain that the evidence is in EQUAL BALANCE “for” and “against” the claim
so VA should grant the claim.
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COMMON ARGUMENTS
Failure of the duty to assist (38 CFR 3.159(c))
A DTA error is a failure during the processing of the reviewed decision to
properly apply the provisions of 38 CFR 3.159 for gathering evidence. This
can include omitting development or failing to request certain examinations.
Remember, a HLR or BVA appeal can only identify previous DTA errors
State that records have been identified but were not obtained, or a medical
opinion is warranted because the evidence meets the threshold for providing
an exam in 38 CFR 3.159(c).
Common reasons that records are not obtained: wrong name, wrong address,
did not find all duty periods
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COMMON ARGUMENTS
Inadequate medical exam/opinion (38 CFR 3.326)
Once VA provides a medical exam or opinion, that exam or opinion must be adequate
Common reasons exams are inadequate:
did not consider positive evidence of record
did not consider veteran’s lay statements
did not complete all required tests (especially in musculoskeletal claims)
did not consider all theories of service connection
relied on results of one examination versus the disability over time
did not give reasons for opinion
did not review all records
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COMMON ARGUMENTS
Cite to the CFR and general principles such as duty to assist, adequacy of
exams, secondary service connection, etc.
Also cite to the M21-1 if it helps you, at either the RO or the Board of
Veterans Appeals (BVA).
VA Office of General Counsel Precedent Opinions and court cases can
also be helpful.
No need to go overboard, one good citation that helps you is better than
three that may or may not.
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CITATIONS
Your conclusion should ask for an outcome based on the analysis of the
rule and the evidence
You may ask the VA to:
Grant the benefit
Restore the benefit
Provide additional development such as requesting records, providing an
examination or medical opinion
Decide an issue that was missed by the RO
Re-statement of veteran’s argument, if no merit
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CONCLUSION
You can ask for more than one outcome:
For example, you can ask for VA to grant the benefit, or if there is not
sufficient evidence to immediately grant, correct a duty to assist error
and then re-adjudicate the claim.
You can also ask for more than one development task to be completed:
such as obtaining federal records, requesting a new opinion based on
those records, and considering a new theory of the claim.
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CONCLUSION
Example Conclusion:
The veteran meets all criteria of service connection: he has a current
diagnosis of right shoulder arthritis, an in-service injury during combat,
and a nexus to military service. The veteran’s right shoulder arthritis was
diagnosed in December 2009, within a year of his release from active duty
in February 2009. Service-connected compensation should be granted on a
presumptive basis for right shoulder arthritis according to 38 CFR
3.309(a). 
 
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CONCLUSION
Why is clear writing important?
So the reader understands it the first time they read it – rater or judge has
many claims to decide and limited time
It can save time in claim/appeal process and eliminate unnecessary
hearings, letters, telephone calls
Should help the reader find and understand the information
Which is better?
The veteran’s service treatment records show onset of her conditions.
The veteran’s separation physical of July 2004 shows diagnoses of
hypothyroidism and bilateral carpal tunnel syndrome which began during
active service.
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CLEAR WRITING
Elements of clear writing
Logical organization
Short sentences
Short paragraphs
Common, everyday words
Active voice
Use of headings
Reading ease
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CLEAR WRITING
Tools for clear writing:
Spell Check
Grammar Check
Readability: Gunning-Fog Index
www.gunning-fog-index.com/index.html
Texts for a wide audience generally need a fog index less than 12. Your fog
index may be a bit higher due to VA jargon.
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CLEAR WRITING
Ensure you’ve addressed all the issues, looked up rules that apply, cited to
pertinent evidence, and asked for an outcome
Cite to evidence in the file to make it easy for the reader to find and easy
to support your argument
Short and clear arguments are more persuasive than long and confusing
arguments
Remember to keep tone pleasant and professional; never insult or be
derogatory towards VA in your arguments
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FINAL THOUGHTS
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Learn how to effectively utilize the IRAC method when writing appeal arguments, including identifying issues, listing rules, analyzing facts, and concluding with desired outcomes. Discover essential tips for writing persuasively and clearly, ensuring your appeal arguments are compelling and well-structured. Prepare comprehensive appeal arguments covering key aspects such as the issues on appeal, VA errors, appellant's desires, and desired VA actions for successful appeals.

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  1. WRITING APPEAL ARGUMENTS

  2. LESSON OBJECTIVES Learn how to use the appeal writing method: IRAC Identifying the Issue(s): rewrite and recognize Listing the rules Analyzing the facts Concluding with the desired outcome Review tips on writing clearly and persuasively 2

  3. BEFORE WE BEGIN An appeal argument should clearly list the following: The issue on appeal What the VA did wrong or failed to do in making their decision, citing objective evidence to support your argument What will satisfy the appellant (what does he/she want) What does the appellant want VA to do? **If possible, limit argument to 2-3 paragraphs for each issue 3

  4. BEFORE WE BEGIN All appeals should be accompanied by an appeals argument prepared by the representative. This includes: Supplemental Claims (21-0995) Higher Level Review (21-0996) Appeals to the BVA (10182) *Remember there is a difference between argument and evidence 4

  5. BEFORE WE BEGIN WRITING Prior to writing an appeals argument, you must review the claims file to determine: The reason why the benefit was denied What evidence/action is needed to grant the benefit 5

  6. BEFORE WE BEGIN WRITING Kendall Johnstone was recently granted a 0% service-connected rating for headaches. She wants to appeal the rating. The rating decision states the following: We have assigned a noncompensable evaluation for your headaches based on: With less frequent attacks A higher evaluation of 10 percent is not warranted unless there are characteristic prostrating attacks averaging one in 2 months over the last several months. Why was the benefit (increased rating) denied? What evidence/action is needed to grant the benefit? 6

  7. IRAC APPEAL WRITING METHOD IRAC stands for: Issue Rule Analysis Conclusion Though this method is not mandatory, it will help keep your argument organized 7

  8. IDENTIFYING THE ISSUE Locate the rating decision that addresses the veteran s issue The issue is already presented to you in a numbered list in the decision being appealed and is phrased in terms of entitlement to the issue The rating decision will also include the reasons for the denial Why are the reasons for denial important? 8

  9. IDENTIFYING THE ISSUE Some of the most overlooked/misstated issues are: Earlier effective date of a rating vs increased rating or earlier effective date for service connection Example: Veteran appeals 50% rating for PTSD. Is awarded 70% rating after 3 years in appeals, but only as of exam date. Continues appeal asking not for 100%, but earlier date of 70% rating. Separate ratings vs increased ratings Example: you cannot receive a rating higher than 40% under the diagnostic code for a certain condition based on limitation of motion, but you also have neuropathy that should be rated under another diagnostic code Disagreement with the creation of an overpayment vs Request for a waiver of an overpayment You may have both issues in an appeal, but they are very different arguments: the fact that you never owed anything v. telling VA it was not your fault/you have a hardship so you should not have to pay 9

  10. RECOGNIZING THE RULE(S) Same types of claims will typically use the same rules, some of which will be stated in the rating decision However, there are many exceptions in veterans' law, which the rating decision may leave out After identifying the issue, you can either: Start with the facts, and match up which rules apply to those facts, or Start with every possible rule, and see if the facts support that rule 10

  11. STARTING WITH THE RULE Issue is entitlement to compensation with aid and attendance. Veteran is service connected at 100% for loss of use of the arm, hypertension, and erectile dysfunction. The rules are: Veteran must need aid and attendance of another person For at least two activities of daily living Due solely to service-connected conditions And the rating for compensation purposes generally needs to be at least 100% Now we can review the rating decision and the claims file to see which rules VA thought the veteran did not meet, based on the evidence presented. 11

  12. STARTING WITH THE FACTS If the rating decision does not tell you a lot, starting with the facts may be easier Issue is service connection for a right shoulder joint condition denied due to no event in service. Facts: Veteran claims he injured his shoulder during combat mission in Afghanistan. Post-deployment health assessment shows complaint of upper extremity problem after deployment. Veteran was activated Guard member and did not have a separation physical. Right shoulder arthritis diagnosed 10 months post service. 12

  13. STARTING WITH THE FACTS In this example, the facts lead you to the rules: Combat veteran presumption can apply and presume event in service (38 CFR 3.304) While STRs do not show diagnosis/injury, post-deployment assessment is consistent with veteran s complaints Arthritis was diagnosed within one year of veteran s release from active duty. If veteran had at least 90 days continuous active service, chronic condition presumptive rule should apply to show nexus (38 CFR 3.307 & 3.309(a)) 13

  14. NON-MERITORIOUS APPEALS A non-meritorious appeal fails to meet the necessary criteria for a grant no way to argue or change the facts. Examples: Pension when the veteran has no wartime service DIC when the veteran and spouse were divorced at the time of death and have no children Service connection cases where the veteran does not have the claimed disability 14

  15. WITHDRAWAL OF APPEALS If there are no facts to support the applicable rules, you MUST explain this to the client and suggest how the evidence can be improved or suggest either not appealing or withdrawing the appeal. Per NVS Policy & Procedure, the client must sign if withdrawing the appeal, not the service officer, even though VA rules allow it. 15

  16. ANALYSIS/ARGUMENT If you have facts that support the client s claim, compare them with the previous rating But don t spend too much time discussing the reasons the veteran s claim was previously denied Compare: The veteran s claim was previously denied because no event in service was established and no nexus to military service was established. The veteran s current right shoulder arthritis was found to be a favorable finding in the previous rating dated September 1, 2020 that denied service connection due to a lack of in-service incident. The injury in service should have been conceded since it occurred during the veteran s combat service, as evidenced by the veteran s post-deployment assessment of 3/1/2005. 16

  17. ANALYSIS/ARGUMENT You may have the same analysis/argument for multiple issues. If VA did not find the veteran s service records, that failure of the duty to assist will likely impact all claims for service connection. Example: The issues of service connection for hearing loss, tinnitus, PTSD, and bilateral knee condition should all be resolved by VA requesting the veteran s full service record and re-adjudicating the claim. Previously, only the records of his first period of service were obtained, but service treatment records from 2010-2013 were not obtained. 17

  18. COMMON ARGUMENTS Reasonable Doubt (38 CFR 3.102) a.k.a. Benefit of the Doubt Should only be used when the evidence is approximately equal on both sides (equipoise) If the evidence is 51% or more on the veteran s side, you don t need to argue benefit of the doubt Allows you to say the evidence is equal so the tie should go to the veteran. Benefit of the doubt should not be cited routinely and never in non-meritorious cases. If you believe that benefit of the doubt applies to your claim: Discuss the evidence in FAVOR of the claim Discuss the evidence AGAINST the claim Explain that the evidence is in EQUAL BALANCE for and against the claim so VA should grant the claim. 18

  19. COMMON ARGUMENTS Failure of the duty to assist (38 CFR 3.159(c)) A DTA error is a failure during the processing of the reviewed decision to properly apply the provisions of 38 CFR 3.159 for gathering evidence. This can include omitting development or failing to request certain examinations. Remember, a HLR or BVA appeal can only identify previous DTA errors State that records have been identified but were not obtained, or a medical opinion is warranted because the evidence meets the threshold for providing an exam in 38 CFR 3.159(c). Common reasons that records are not obtained: wrong name, wrong address, did not find all duty periods 19

  20. COMMON ARGUMENTS Inadequate medical exam/opinion (38 CFR 3.326) Once VA provides a medical exam or opinion, that exam or opinion must be adequate Common reasons exams are inadequate: did not consider positive evidence of record did not consider veteran s lay statements did not complete all required tests (especially in musculoskeletal claims) did not consider all theories of service connection relied on results of one examination versus the disability over time did not give reasons for opinion did not review all records 20

  21. CITATIONS Cite to the CFR and general principles such as duty to assist, adequacy of exams, secondary service connection, etc. Also cite to the M21-1 if it helps you, at either the RO or the Board of Veterans Appeals (BVA). VA Office of General Counsel Precedent Opinions and court cases can also be helpful. No need to go overboard, one good citation that helps you is better than three that may or may not. 21

  22. CONCLUSION Your conclusion should ask for an outcome based on the analysis of the rule and the evidence You may ask the VA to: Grant the benefit Restore the benefit Provide additional development such as requesting records, providing an examination or medical opinion Decide an issue that was missed by the RO Re-statement of veteran s argument, if no merit 22

  23. CONCLUSION You can ask for more than one outcome: For example, you can ask for VA to grant the benefit, or if there is not sufficient evidence to immediately grant, correct a duty to assist error and then re-adjudicate the claim. You can also ask for more than one development task to be completed: such as obtaining federal records, requesting a new opinion based on those records, and considering a new theory of the claim. 23

  24. CONCLUSION Example Conclusion: The veteran meets all criteria of service connection: he has a current diagnosis of right shoulder arthritis, an in-service injury during combat, and a nexus to military service. The veteran s right shoulder arthritis was diagnosed in December 2009, within a year of his release from active duty in February 2009. Service-connected compensation should be granted on a presumptive basis for right shoulder arthritis according to 38 CFR 3.309(a). 24

  25. CLEAR WRITING Why is clear writing important? So the reader understands it the first time they read it rater or judge has many claims to decide and limited time It can save time in claim/appeal process and eliminate unnecessary hearings, letters, telephone calls Should help the reader find and understand the information Which is better? The veteran s service treatment records show onset of her conditions. The veteran s separation physical of July 2004 shows diagnoses of hypothyroidism and bilateral carpal tunnel syndrome which began during active service. 25

  26. CLEAR WRITING Elements of clear writing Logical organization Short sentences Short paragraphs Common, everyday words Active voice Use of headings Reading ease 26

  27. CLEAR WRITING Tools for clear writing: Spell Check Grammar Check Readability: Gunning-Fog Index www.gunning-fog-index.com/index.html Texts for a wide audience generally need a fog index less than 12. Your fog index may be a bit higher due to VA jargon. 27

  28. FINAL THOUGHTS Ensure you ve addressed all the issues, looked up rules that apply, cited to pertinent evidence, and asked for an outcome Cite to evidence in the file to make it easy for the reader to find and easy to support your argument Short and clear arguments are more persuasive than long and confusing arguments Remember to keep tone pleasant and professional; never insult or be derogatory towards VA in your arguments 28

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