Enhancing Your Answer for Mock Exam Question 3: Tips and Strategies
Explore tips on improving your response for Mock Exam Question 3, which requires you to discuss the attractions of Idube Camp, the duties of trainee guides, and qualities of a good safari guide. Discover ways to garner additional marks by adding purposeful sentences, enhancing content quality, and addressing key elements in your answer.
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Marginal Gains: Language Question 3
2 How can i easily get 1 or 2 more marks in question 3?
3 Mock Exam Question 3 Imagine you are the Head Guide, Chris (Peter s boss). You are responsible for training the safari guides. When a group of new trainee guides arrives at the camp, you give a talk to prepare them for what lies ahead. In your talk, you should: describe the range of attractions Idube Camp and the area around it have to offer and how these might appeal to guests explain what being a trainee guide is like the kind of activities they will be asked to do and what they should and should not do as trainees suggest what makes a good safari guide, the challenges of the job and the personal qualities they will need to develop. Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer, and up to 10 marks for the quality of your writing.
4 How most of you started: Welcome to Idube camp, I am Chris. Guests really love to visit Idube because it's a perfect wilderness. ... What's good about this? How could you get a couple more marks?
5 Marginal Gains: Add a purpose sentence Welcome to Idube camp, I am Chris. Guests really love to visit Idube because it's a perfect wilderness. Purpose: You are responsible for training the safari guides. When a group of new trainee guides arrives at the camp, you give a talk to prepare them for what lies ahead. So what sentence could you add to sum up this purpose?
6 Marginal Gains: Add a purpose sentence Welcome to Idube camp, I am Chris. Guests really love to visit Idube because it's a perfect wilderness. Purpose: You are responsible for training the safari guides. When a group of new trainee guides arrives at the camp, you give a talk to prepare them for what lies ahead. So what sentence could you add to sum up this purpose? Eg) As head guide, I'll be responsible for your training, so I want to start preparing you today.
7 How else can i get more marks in question 3?
8 Mock Exam Question 3: DETAIL + DEVELOPMENT In your talk, you should: describe the range of attractions Idube Camp and the area around it have to offer and how these might appeal to guests Lots of you wrote something like this: At Idube camp, our guests can take part in exciting safari drives and guided walks. They can see amazing wild animals on these trips. One popular attraction is also our bush dinner nights, where visitors can sample delicious food in a romantic spot. Which parts of the mark scheme does this hit? What else does it need to do?
Mock Exam Question 3: DETAIL + DEVELOPMENT 9 In your talk, you should: describe the range of attractions Idube Camp and the area around it have to offer and how these might appeal to guests At Idube camp, our guests can take part in exciting safari drives and guided bush walks. For guests this is a rare chance to see amazing wild animals in their natural habitat. The walks in particular make guests truly feel like they are in the African wild, seeing details that others won't. (Don't worry, you'll be trained to run these activities as safely as possible.) Another popular attraction of Idube are our bush dinner nights, where visitors can sample delicious food in a romantic spot. The setting under the stars away from main camp gives them a real sense of isolation and peace, so you will work hard to maintain this atmosphere of tranquility for them too.
10 How else can i get more marks in question 3?
11 Recap: How can you make marginal gains next time?
12 Marginal gains Q3 reminders: 1. Add a purpose sentence to the opening. 2. Find four ideas for each bullet point. 3. Extend each idea with a specific DETAIL from the text. 4. Extend one or two further by DEVELOPING in a sensible way yourself.
