Mastering Introductory Phrases and Clauses in Grammar Lessons
Week 19
Introductory phrases and clauses + more
with
“My Girl” by The Temptations
Grammar Lesson:
Introductory words
(transitions & names) and
Introductory clauses
(dependent
clauses)
need commas after them
IF
they appear
before
the
independent clause
in
the sentence.
An
independent clause
will have a
subject (normally a noun)
and
predicate (a
verb)
and will be a
complete thought
.
Examples:
Introductory words/Transitions
Bill,
will
you
please
play
that song again
?
Furthermore,
I
would like
a higher volume
.
Introductory clauses (dependent clauses)
(fragments)
These will most likely begin with prepositions or adverbs such as:
although, when, because, though, after, before, if, until, etc.
Before
you
play that song
,
[understood you]
please
tell
me the artist
.
Though
I’ve never heard of him
,
I
like
his sound
.
Note:
If these phrases come
AFTER
the independent clause, they do not need a comma.
[Understood You]
Please
tell
me the artist
before
you play that song.
I
like
his sound
though
I’ve never heard of him.
Independent clause
(complete sentence)
Subject in blue
,
predicate in green
, and
completion
of the thought is underlined.
I
like
to listen to loud music
.
#MentorSentenceMonday
When it’s cold outside, I’ve got the month of May.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why does
“outside” have a
comma after it?
What is the
independent clause in
this sentence?
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
Well I guess you’d say that my girl makes me
feel this way, even if it’s a cloudy day.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, add a
comma conjunction
plus another
COMPLETE
sentence
to the end of this
corrected sentence
to transform it into a
compound/complex
sentence
.
Correct:
Well, I guess you would say that my girl makes me feel this way even if it’s a
cloudy day.
Grammar Rule
:
You must add commas after introductory clauses and words
IF
they are in front of the independent clause.
Compound:
Well, I guess you would say that my girl makes me feel this way even if it’s a cloudy day, so please don’t
take my sunshine away.
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
1.
Whenever I’m feeling sad I go out and soak up the sunshine.
However I should probably warn you that too much sun exposure
can cause cancer.
A.
No change
B.
Add a comma after
sad
C.
Add a comma after
However
D.
Add a comma after
sad
and a comma after
However
2.
Mr. Moody studies show a link between positive moods and
sunshine, so get yourself outside! If you don’t get enough
sunshine, feel down.
A.
No change
B.
Add a comma after
between
C.
Add a comma after
Mr. Moody
and add a subject to
“feel down”
D.
Add a comma after
Mr. Moody
and
between
D. Because “However” is an introductory word and “Whenever I’m feeling sad” is a introductory clause. All
introductory words and clauses need a comma
.
C. Because “Mr. Moody” is an introductory word. “Feel down” is not a complete sentence.
You can’t have an introductory clause paired with an incomplete sentence.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
I’ve got a sweeter
song than the birds in
the trees.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
The month of May
just walked in the
door.
Simile:
the comparison of one thing to
another thing of a different kind using
like, as, or than
to make the description
more vivid.
Personification:
Giving inanimate
objects human characteristics.
Link to song
Week 20
Ways to combine sentences + more
with
“Lampshades on Fire” by Modest Mouse
Grammar Lesson:
To avoid run-on sentences, you must combine two independent clauses by using a
comma
conjunction
(
F
or,
A
nd,
N
or,
B
ut,
O
r,
Y
et,
S
o…
FANBOYS
) or a
semicolon
. You can also separate the
independent clauses by using a period and starting a new sentence.
Examples:
Comma Conjunctions
I
am learning
to play the guitar
, but
it
is
very hard for me
to memorize the chords.
Semi-colons
If I knew how to play the guitar well,
I
would sign
up for
the talent show;
that
would be
an amazing experience.
I
love
listening to music
, but
I
hate
to dance.
Note
that you don’t need a comma when the
conjunction isn’t followed by a complete sentence.
I
love
listening to music
and
dancing.
#MentorSentenceMonday
Well, the lampshade was on fire; the room lit up,
and we ran to the next town.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Imagine this sentence
broken into 3 different
sentences. How would
it sound?
Why do you think the
writer chose to
combine using a
semicolon first then a
comma conjunction?
Why not repeat one
twice?
Why do you need a comma
after
well
?
Link to Song
#TransformItTuesday
We pack up again, we head to the next place.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence by adding punctuation.
2. Next, rewrite this
compound sentence
to transform it into a
complex
sentence
.
Correct:
We pack up again, and we head to the next place. Or…
We pack up again; we head to the next place. Or…
We pack up again. We head to the next place.
Grammar Rule
:
“We pack up again” and “we head to the next place” are two independent clauses that must be
combined using a semicolon, comma conjunction, or separated with a period to avoid run-on sentences.
Compound/ Complex sentence example:
Once we burn everything up, we pack and head to the
next place.
Link to Song
#TestPrepThursday
Though a trip to Mars
would mean never
returning to
Earth over
200,000 people have
applied and submitted
their application videos.
No one knows if Mars
One will be
successful,
but
there’s something
appealing about getting a
fresh start on a
new
planet people will have
a
whole new world to mess
up again.
D. Because the conjunction
“and” doesn’t need a
comma when it doesn’t
combine two independent
clauses, and “Though a
trip..” is an introductory
clause that needs a comma
after it.
C. Because you need to
combine 3 complete
sentences.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
Earth, over 200,000 people have
applied, and submitted
C.
Earth over 200,000 people have
applied and submitted
D.
Earth, over 200,000 people have
applied and submitted
2.
A.
No Change
B.
successful; but / new planet, people
C.
successful, but / new planet; people
D.
successful, but/ new planet, people
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
He is a
party pooper
who
makes us think about
why we should be
responsible.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
The lampshade is
on fire
(meaning from the song)
Idiom:
An expression whose meaning is
not predictable based on the individual
meanings of the words that make up
the phrase.
Metaphor:
A non-literal representation
of a way to vividly describe something.
Or
Extended Metaphor
because the
song uses this expression to represent
destroying our Earth and burning up
fossil fuels.
Link to Song
Week 21
Parallel Structure + more
with
“One Love” by Bob Marley
Grammar Lesson:
All things in a list must follow the same grammatical pattern to form
parallel structure
. If the list is combined into one sentence, each item
must be separated by a comma.
Examples:
Parallel Structure:
Music
gives
life
to
the
soul
.
Dance
offers
movement
to
the
heart
.
Instruments
deliver
sound
to
the
mind
.
Parallel Structure Sentence:
I love to
try
new
instruments
,
play
fresh
music
,
and
learn
fancy
chords
.
V
V
V
adj
adj
adj
N
N
N
#MentorSentenceMonday
Let’s get together; let’s feel alright.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
How are the
words in this
sentence
parallel?
Why do you
need a
semicolon
here?
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
I hear the children crying, “One Heart," and
I saw the children write, “One Love!”
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, add a
introductory clause
in front of the corrected sentence to transform it into a
compound
/
complex
sentence
.
Correct:
I
hear
the
children
crying
, “One Heart,” and
I
see
the
children
writing
, “One
Love!”
Grammar Rule
:
All word parts of the list must be parallel.
Complex:
When I’m out in the streets
, I hear the children crying, “One Heart,” and I
see the children write, “One Love!”
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
Peacebuilding has
accelerated with
modern
technology social
networking and
telephones.
Media can
be used as both a
negative force or a
positive power.
D. Because you need to
separate the list with
commas and you must add
an adjective to
“telephones” to form a
parallel sentence.
A. Because the sentence
is parallel with matching
adjectives and nouns.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
modern technology, social
networking, and telephones.
C.
modern technology, social
networking, and cellphones.
D.
modern technology, social
networking, and mobile
telephones.
2.
A.
No Change
B.
Add a comma before
or
C.
Add a comma after
or
D.
Change
power
to a noun
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
One
heart.
One
love.
One
more thing.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
Who has hurt all mankind just to
save his own beliefs?
Repetition:
Repeats the same word
or phrase to make an idea clear and
create unity throughout a piece of
writing.
Rhetorical Question:
A question you ask
without expecting an answer. A question
to prove a point.
Link to song
Week 22
Colons and Dashes
with
“You Can’t Always Get What You Want” by The
Rolling Stones
Grammar Lesson:
Though technically interchangeable in most cases…
use
a
colon (:)
before a list
use a
dash (--)
before a “wait for it, wait for it” explanation and as a
SUPER comma when you want the pause to be dramatic.
Examples:
Colon Example:
The following skills are needed for
bass players
:
desire to play, willingness
to practice, and drive to succeed.
Dash Examples:
There’s really only one thing I’m looking
for in a good bass player
—
passion.
The best thing I’ve learned from music
–
to
reluctantly narrow it down
–
is discipline.
Also notice the parallel structure in this list
#MentorSentenceMonday
You can’t always get what you want, but you can get
what you need—which usually ends up being better.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why is there a
comma
needed
before “but?”
Why does the
writer choose
a dash instead
of a comma?
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
Here is a list of the things I want money fame
and looking good.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, add a
introductory clause
in front of the corrected sentence to transform it into a
complex
sentence
.
Correct:
Here is a list of the things I want: money, fame, and good-looks.
Grammar Rule
:
Use a colon before lists and separate lists with commas. Keep the list parallel.
Complex:
Since you are asking, here is a list of the things I want: money, fame, and
good-looks.
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
John prefers to talk rather
than listen. When he was
little, his mother used to
constantly nag him to
listen,
she still does: but
John just
has too much to say.
However studies show that
listening—whether that be
in your professional or
personal life
is the most
important skill to learn.
B. Because this phrase
must be separated from
the main sentence since it
can stand alone, and B is
the only option that
completely does that.
C. Because you need a
comma after introductory
words, and “whether that
be in your professional or
personal life” needs to be
separated from the main
sentence.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
listen—she still does—but
C.
listen, she still does but
D.
listen she still does, but
2.
A.
No Change
B.
Add a comma after
however
C.
Add a comma after
however
and
add dash after
life
D.
Add a dash after
however
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
At her feet was a
footloose
man
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
When you want something from
someone, help that person get what
he or she wants.
Idiom:
An expression whose meaning
is not predictable based on the
individual meanings of the words that
make up the phrase.
Paradox
: a statement that contradicts itself.
Link to song
Week 23
Appositives + more
with
“Don’t Worry, Be Happy” by Bobby McFerrin
Grammar Lesson:
Appositives
give more information about the subject of a sentence. If
appositives are extra information that can be removed from the
sentence, they are set aside by commas.
Examples:
Appositive at the
start of a sentence:
A bold innovator,
Paul McCartney
started a new style of music.
Appositive in the
middle of the sentence:
Paul McCartney
,
the lead guitarist for the
Beatles,
is a legend.
#MentorSentenceMonday
Bobby McFerrin, a singer and song writer, tells us to
not worry.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why does the
writer add in
the phrase, “a
singer and song
writer”?
Link to Song
Why is it set
aside with
commas?
#TransformItTuesday
“Don’t Worry, Be Happy” a song with a happy
beat is a classic.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, rewrite this sentence by transforming it into a
simple sentence
with NO
appositive.
Correct:
“Don’t Worry, Be Happy
,
”
a song with a happy beat,
is a classic.
Grammar Rule
: If appositives are extra information that can be removed from the
sentence, they are set aside by commas.
Simple
: “Don’t Worry, Be Happy” is a classic song with a happy beat.
Link to Song
#TestPrepThursday
She felt exhausted
and
anxious common
symptoms of depression
every
time she
overbooked herself. An
experienced physician
Dr. Smith recommend
having a positive
attitude and learning to
say no to alleviate stress
C. Because “common
symptoms of depression”
is extra information that
can be removed from the
sentence—an appositive
set aside by commas. You
don’t need a comma
conjunction in this
sentence.
C. Because “An
experienced physician” is
an appositive at the start
of the sentence giving
more information about
Dr. Smith. You don’t need
a comma before “and”
because you aren’t
combing two sentences.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
and anxious common symptoms
of depression, every
C.
and anxious, common symptoms
of depression, every
D.
and, anxious common symptoms
of depression, every
2.
A.
No Change
B.
Add a comma after
physician
and
before
and
C.
Add a comma after
physician
D.
Add a comma before
and
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
Like the birds that sing in the trees,
don’t worry-- be happy.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
He’s such a
Scrooge
; he seems to
want to be unhappy.
Simile:
the comparison of one thing
to another thing of a different kind
using
like, as, or than
to make the
description more vivid.
Allusion:
an expression designed to
remind the reader of a prior knowledge
from history, culture, or literature.
*From
A Christmas Carol
Link to Song
Week 24
Avoiding comma splices + more
with
“Feel Good Inc. ” by Gorillaz
Grammar Lesson:
Commas should never be used to splice (join) together run-on sentences
or compound sentence elements. Don’t use commas where they aren’t
needed, or it will result in a
comma splice
.
Examples:
In
correct
use of commas:
Being in a band is
fun, and
cool.
I’m in a
band, you
should try it.
Correct
use of commas:
Furthermore,
I
would like
a higher volume.
Though
I’ve never heard of him
,
I
like
his sound.
I
love
listening to music
, but
I
hate
to dance.
I love playing
,
singing
,
and drumming.
#MentorSentenceMonday
Like the wind, love is free and forever.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why isn’t a
comma
needed
here?
Link to Song (clean version)
Why is a
comma
needed
here?
#TransformItTuesday
The windmill is for the land, it will turn forever.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct
compound
sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, add an introductory clause in front of the corrected sentence to transform it into a
compound/complex
sentence
.
Correct:
The windmill is for the land, and it will turn forever.
Grammar Rule
: A comma cannot splice together a run-on sentence.
Compound/Complex:
Being earth-friendly, the windmill is for the land, and it will
turn forever.
Link to Song (clean version)
#TestPrepThursday
Interestingly, wind exists
because
the sun
unevenly heats the
Earth.
Farmers once used
windmills to grind
grains,
and pumping
water.
A. Because “Interestingly”
is an introductory word
and needs a comma after
it.
B. Because you only use
commas before
conjunctions when you
are combining two
complete clauses. Also,
you must keep a list
parallel.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
Interestingly, wind exists,
because
C.
Interestingly wind exists because
D.
Interestingly wind exists because,
2.
A.
No Change
B.
grains and pump water
C.
grains, and pump water
D.
grains and, pump water
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
The city is breaking down on a camel’s back.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
Don’t stop the
ship
. Get in; we
are your
captains
. Watch us
navigate
.
All of these words bring to mind the sea and sailing.
Metaphor:
A non-literal
representation of a way to
vividly describe something.
Link to Song (clean version)
Word choice: Why does the writer choose these words?
Week 25
Indefinite Pronouns + more
with
“Everybody Dance Now” by C&C Music Factory
Grammar Lesson:
Indefinite Pronouns
are words which replace nouns that are indefinite or vague in number.
These pronouns must
match in number
with the rest of the sentence.
Examples:
Always
Singular
Everyone
needs to bring
his or
her
guitar to practice.
Somebody
left
his or her
mic
last practice.
Always
Plural
Both
of
them
are in the band.
Several
of the
girls
like to
sing.
Singular
or
Plural
All
of boy
s
are
great signer
s
.
Though they messed up the
song,
all
is
forgiven.
#MentorSentenceMonday
Everybody needs to move his or her feet on the dance
floor once in a while.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why is “his or
her” used
instead of
“their?”
Link to song
Why isn’t a comma
needed before the
conjunction
or
?
#TransformItTuesday
Everybody needs to get their butt out in the
dance floor!
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, transform this
simple sentence
into a
compound sentence.
Correct:
Everybody needs to get his or her butt out on the dance floor.
Grammar Rule
: “Everybody” is singular therefore “their” must be changed to singular. Also, you
can’t be “in” a dance floor, so the preposition must change to “on.”
Compound:
We are at prom, so everybody needs to get his or her butt out on the
dance floor!
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
They give
everybody tips on
how to improve
their
health by
dancing more.
Few follow their
advice though.
B. Because “everybody” is
singular, so you must use
the singular “his or her.”
A. Because “few” is
plural, so you must use
the plural “their.”
1.
A.
No Change
B.
everybody tips on how to
improve his or her
C.
them tips on how to improve his
or her
D.
everyone tips on how to improve
their
2.
A.
No Change
B.
Few follow his or her
C.
Few follow them
D.
Not each follow their
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
I’m
b
ack with the
b
ass; hear
it
snap
!
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
Dancing carries away
stress and delivers a
replacement of fun.
Personification:
Giving inanimate
objects human characteristics
Hint: Two in one here!
Alliteration:
Repetition of letters or
sounds at the beginning of words
Onomatopoeia
: A formation of a
word that makes the sound it’s
associated with.
Link to song
Week 26
Ambiguous and Vague Pronoun References + more
with
“All That She Wants” by Ace of Base
Grammar Lesson:
Ambiguous and Vague Pronouns
leave
antecedents
and the message of
the sentence unclear or vague.
Examples:
Incorrect:
The
girl
took her dog to the concert;
she
liked giving everyone big wet kisses.
Aaron became good friends with Larry
after
he
helped
him
get tickets to the
concert.
Correct:
The girl took
her dog
to the concert;
the dog
enjoyed giving everyone big
wet kisses.
Aaron and Larry became good friends
after
Larry
got
him
tickets to the
concert.
#MentorSentenceMonday
Jenny and Jonas live a lonely life; he left her, and all
that she wants is another baby.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why do you
need a
semicolon
here?
Why is “he” and “her” and
“she” NOT vague in this
sentence?
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
He wants to be gone tomorrow she wants another
boyfriend, but it didn’t work out.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, transform this
compound sentence
into a
compound /complex sentence.
Correct:
He wants to be gone tomorrow; she wants another boyfriend, but neither
worked out.
OR
He wants to be gone tomorrow; she wants another boyfriend, but the
boyfriend didn’t work out for her.
Grammar Rule
: It was unclear what didn’t fit well by using the ambiguous pronoun “it,” so this
needed to be clarified.
Compound/Complex:
Since they broke up, he wants to be gone tomorrow; she
wants another boyfriend, but neither worked out
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
Ashley and Angie
had
rebound
relationships, but the
relationships didn’t
work out for
her.
John and Jake Angie’s
new boyfriends
couldn’t live up to her
demands, so
he
left.
C. Because “her” is
ambiguous. We don’t know
which girl it is referring to.
D. Because “he” doesn’t
fit with the plural
“boyfriends.”
Also, you need to set the
appositive apart with
commas.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
They/her
C.
Ashley and Angie/Angie
D.
Everyone/her
2.
A.
No Change
B.
John and Jake, Angie’s new
boyfriends, / he
C.
John and Jake Angie’s new
boyfriends / they
D.
John and Jake, Angie’s new
boyfriends, / they
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
She’s the hunter and you’re
the fox
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
I’m just laying on the beach
and sunning on the shore.
What sentence structure is this?
Parallel structure:
where all
parts-of-speech match
Metaphor:
A non-literal
representation of a way to vividly
describe something. Or
Link to song
Week 27
Passive Voice + more
with
“Fallin” by Alicia Keys
Grammar Lesson:
Even though
Passive Voice
is grammatically correct, it is not supposed to be used in most forms
of writing (technical writing such as science experiments is an exception). The ACT and most
English teachers will deduct points for passive voice.
To avoid passive voice, make sure that the
subject of the sentence preforms the action.
Examples:
Passive Voice:
The tickets
were bought
by
Aaron
.
Early entry passes
were passed out by
the
promotion team
.
Active Voice:
Aaron
bought
the tickets.
The
promotion team
passed out
early
entry passes.
Subject
Subject
Subject
Subject
#MentorSentenceMonday
I keep falling in and out of love with you.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Who is the subject
of the sentence and
what is the action?
Why don’t you need a
comma before this
“and?”
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
Mixed emotions’ were caused by being in love.
1. Transform this sentence into an
active voice
sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, transform this
simple sentence
into a
compound sentence.
Correct:
Being in love causes mixed emotions.
Grammar Rule
: Avoid writing in passive voice by putting the subject in front of the
action. “Emotions” is plural, not possessive.
Compound:
Being in love causes mixed emotions, so you should be prepared for
that.
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
For centuries,
people
have pondered the
phenomenon of
falling in love.
Falling in love was
thought of as being
associated with only
positive thoughts by
researchers.
A. Because
“people” is
the subject,
and they are
the ones
doing the
action
“ponder.”
B. Because
“Researchers”
are the ones
doing the
action
“thinking.”
1.
A.
No Change
B.
people has pondered the phenomenon of
falling in love
C.
the phenomenon of falling in love has been
pondered by people.
D.
the phenomenon of falling in love have
been pondered by people.
2.
A.
No Change
B.
Researchers thought that falling in love was
associated with only positive thoughts.
C.
Falling in love was thought of by researchers
as associated with only positive thoughts.
D.
Researchers’ thought that falling in love was
associated with only positive thoughts.
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
I have fallen
a million miles
in love with you
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
That moment when you
realize you are loving the
right person at the wrong
time.
Irony:
something that happens that is the
opposite of what is expected or ends in a
humorous outcome.
Hyperbole:
An exaggerated claim
not meant to be taken literally.
Link to song
Week 28
Verb Tenses + more
with
“Shy Guy” by Diana King
Grammar Lesson:
You must not shift
verb tenses
in sentences unless the shift is necessary for the
meaning of the sentence.
Examples:
Incorrect
They play
ed
at the venue all night then
drive
home.
The concert
has been
sold out, and the
stage
is
set up.
Correct
They play
ed
at the venue all night then
drove
home.
The concert
has been
sold out, and the
stage
has been
set up.
*Notice that this sentence shifts verb tenses to make the meaning clear which is allowed.
Aaron predict
s
that Larry
will be
asked to preform again.
Past
Past
Past
Present
Past Perfect
Past Perfect
Past Perfect
Present
Present
Future
#MentorSentenceMonday
I don’t want a fly guy; I just want a shy guy.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
How is this sentence
parallel? Label the
matching parts of
speech.
Locate all of the verbs.
What tense are they?
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
I need a shy guy he was the only kind of guy I want.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, transform this
compound sentence
into a
compound/complex.
Correct:
I
need
a shy guy; he
is
the only kind of guy I
want
.
Grammar
Rule
: Don’t shift verb tenses. Don’t use run-on sentences.
Compound/Complex
: Since I’m introverted, I
need
a shy guy; he
is
the only kind of
guy I
want
.
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
Many people consider
shyness a
weakness,
but those people
needed to ponder
the
strengths of shyness.
Researchers
find
one
benefit of being shy is
that meekness
made
you approachable.
C. Because
“consider” is
present tense so
“needed” needs to
be too. The comma
combines two
complete sentences
B. Because
“find” is present
tense so “made”
must be also.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
weakness but those people need to
ponder
C.
weakness, but those people need to
ponder
D.
weakness, but those people need be
pondering
2.
A.
No Change
B.
find /makes
C.
finds /makes
D.
finds / make
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
Being is shy is like a crab in a shell. Everyone
thinks the crab would be happier outside its
shell, but no one realizes that the crab is in there
happily admiring its pearl.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
She shyest guy in the group
was the only one to speak up
against the bully.
Irony:
something that happens or is said that is
the opposite of what is expected or ends in a
humorous outcome.
Analogy:
This is to ____as that is to ______.
A lengthy explanation in which one thing is
compared to another. Many times analogies use
similes and metaphors.
Link to song
Week 29
Irregular Verbs + more
with
“I’ve Been Everywhere Man” by Johnny Cash
Grammar Lesson:
You must use the
perfect tense of irregular verbs
when you use the words “have, has, had, or other forms of be” with them.
Below are just 5 of MANY irregular verbs. See a larger list here:
Link
or listen to this teacher’s rap:
Link
Examples:
We
had
already
begun
playing when the rain started.
To be seen
more, we need to advertise our band.
He
has chosen
a new drum set to buy.
#MentorSentenceMonday
Man, I’ve been everywhere including: Reno, Chicago,
Fargo, and Minnesota.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why do you need a
colon before
“Reno…etc.”
Why do you need a
comma after
“man?”
Locate the verb “been”
Why is perfect tense
used here?
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
I just seen the Grand Canyon for the first time, it was
so beautiful that I begun to cry.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, transform this
simple sentence
into a
compound/complex
sentence.
Correct:
I just
saw
the Grand Canyon for the first time, and it was
so beautiful that I
began
to cry.
Grammar Rule
: saw=simple past began=simple past
Compound/ Complex
:
By saving extra money for a travel fund, I just
saw
the Grand Canyon for
the first time, and it was so beautiful that I
began
to cry.
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
I
have seen
a lot of
the world because I
began
traveling when
I was young.
Though I haven’t
brought
back many
tangible souvenirs, I
have a mind full of
memories and lessons
that can’t be
forgot
.
A. Because you use
“seen” with “have”
and the simple past
“began” because
there is no form of be
for that verb.
D. Because both
irregular verbs have a
form of be with them
so you must use the
perfect tense.
Broughten isn’t a word.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
have saw / begun
C.
saw/ begun
D.
have seen/ begun
2.
A.
No Change
B.
broughten/ forgotten
C.
bring/forgotten
D.
brought/ forgotten
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
I’ve traveled every road in this
land three times around.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
You can afford to go
anywhere, but you
can’t afford to go
everywhere.
Paradox
: a statement that contradicts itself
Hyperbole:
An exaggerated claim not meant to be
taken literally
Link to song
Week 30
Subject Verb Agreement + more
with
“1, 2 Step” by Ciara & Missy Elliott
Grammar Lesson:
Subjects and verbs must match so as to have correct
subject verb agreement
.
This
rule may become tricky when using
collective nouns, compound subjects, and
separated subjects and verbs
.
Examples:
Separated Subjects and Verbs
The
delivery
of this month’s
music magazine
has
been the
highlight of my day.
The
bulk
of the writing in the
magazine
is
about new music
technology.
Collective Nouns
The
army troupe
is
getting a free concert.
The
band
sees
how hard
they work.
Compound Subjects
The
army troupe and
navy generals
are
getting
a free concert.
The
band and singers
see
how hard they work.
Trick: When in doubt, replace a singular noun with “he” and a plural
noun with “they” to test out the verb choice.
He
They
#MentorSentenceMonday
The dance troupe is preforming for you and me today.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why do you use the
word “me” instead
of “I?”
Why is the singular “is”
used with “dance
troupe?”
Link to song
#TransformItTuesday
The jazz band, and everyone else knows about the dance.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, transform this
simple sentence
into a
complex sentence.
Correct:
The jazz band and everyone else know about the dance
.
Grammar Rule
: Compound subject = “they” know. The comma isn’t needed and is therefore a
comma splice.
Complex
: Because it is on social media, the jazz band and everyone else know about
the dance
.
Link to song
#TestPrepThursday
The researching team
claim
that those
without rhythm have
malfunctioning
oscillators in
their
brains.
The delivery of this
information has
helped
those who were
embarrassed by not
being able to dance.
D. “Team” = singular
“claims” = singular
Their is the correct
positive form.
A.
“delivery” =singular /
has = singular
a comma would create a
comma splice
1.
A.
No Change
B.
claims/there
C.
claim/ his or her
D.
claims/ their
2.
A.
No Change
B.
information have
C.
information, has
D.
information, have
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
I shake it like jello
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
This beat is a river running
through my chest
Metaphor:
A non-literal representation of a way
to vividly describe something.
Simile:
the comparison of one thing to
another thing of a different kind using
like, as,
or than
to make the description more vivid.
Link to song
Week 31
Adverbs + more
with
“Ready or Not” by Fugees
Grammar Lesson:
When
adverbs
are used to modify verbs, they will end in –ly. If you want
an adverb to say “good,” you must use “well.”
Examples:
In
correct Adverb Use
He can
play
the banjo really
good
.
His hands
move
so
quick
that I can’t
keep up.
Correct Adverb Use
He can
play
the banjo really
well.
His hands
move
so
quickly
that I can’t
keep up.
#MentorSentenceMonday
You can’t hide because I’m going to find you and
take you back slowly.
What makes this a well-written sentence?
Why don’t you need
a comma before
“and?”
Find the adverbs and
the verbs they modify
in this sentence.
Link to clean version
#TransformItTuesday
Go anywhere you go quick, because you can’t hide good
enough for me not to find you.
1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence.
2. After correcting the sentence, transform this
complex sentence
into a
compound/complex
sentence.
Correct:
Go anywhere you go quickly because you can’t hide well enough
for me not to find you.
Grammar Rule
: go=verb/quickly= adverb, hide= verb/ well= adverb. “Because” doesn’t need a
comma since this dependent phrase isn’t at the start of the sentence.
Compound/Complex:
I’m giving you a head start, so go anywhere you go quickly
because you can’t hide well enough for me not to find you.
Link to clean version
#TestPrepThursday
In order hide good you
need to precisely
follow all of the
witness protection
rules.
For example
entire
families must
thoroughly
live out
their
new identities.
C. “hide”= verb, “well” =
adverb. Also, you need a
comma after introductory
clauses.
D. “live” = verb
“thoroughly” = adverb.
You need a comma
after transition words.
“Their” is the correct
form.
1.
A.
No Change
B.
In order to hide good, you
C.
In order to hide well, you
D.
In order to hide well you
2.
A.
No Change
B.
For example / thoroughly/ there
C.
For example,/ thorough / their
D.
For example,/ thoroughly/ their
1.
2.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday
Those who can relate
know the world isn’t
cake.
1. Decide which
figure of speech
is being used in each clause.
2. Decipher the
deeper meaning
of each sentence.
Metaphor:
A non-literal representation of a way to
vividly describe something.
Simile:
the comparison of one thing to
another thing of a different kind using
like, as, or than
to make the description
more vivid.
I play my enemies like a
game of chess.
Link to clean version
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Week 19 Introductory phrases and clauses + more with My Girl by The Temptations
Grammar Lesson: Introductory words (transitions & names) and Introductory clauses (dependent clauses) need commas after them IF they appear before the independent clause in the sentence. An independent clause will have a subject (normally a noun) and predicate (a verb) and will be a complete thought. Examples: Independent clause (complete sentence) Subject in blue, predicate in green, and completion of the thought is underlined. Introductory clauses (dependent clauses) (fragments) These will most likely begin with prepositions or adverbs such as: although, when, because, though, after, before, if, until, etc. I like to listen to loud music. Before you play that song, [understood you] please tell me the artist. Though I ve never heard of him, I like his sound. Introductory words/Transitions Bill, will you please play that song again? Furthermore, I would like a higher volume. Note: If these phrases come AFTER the independent clause, they do not need a comma. [Understood You] Please tell me the artist before you play that song. I like his sound though I ve never heard of him.
Link to song #MentorSentenceMonday When it s cold outside, I ve got the month of May. Why does outside have a comma after it? What is the independent clause in this sentence? What makes this a well-written sentence?
#TransformItTuesday Link to song Well I guess you d say that my girl makes me feel this way, even if it s a cloudy day. Correct: Well, I guess you would say that my girl makes me feel this way even if it s a cloudy day. Grammar Rule: You must add commas after introductory clauses and words IF they are in front of the independent clause. Compound: Well, I guess you would say that my girl makes me feel this way even if it s a cloudy day, so please don t take my sunshine away. 1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence. 2. After correcting the sentence, add a comma conjunction plus another COMPLETE sentence to the end of this corrected sentence to transform it into a compound/complex sentence.
#TestPrepThursday 1. Whenever I m feeling sad I go out and soak up the sunshine. However I should probably warn you that too much sun exposure can cause cancer. A. No change B. Add a comma after sad C. Add a comma after However D. Add a comma after sad and a comma after However D. Because However is an introductory word and Whenever I m feeling sad is a introductory clause. All introductory words and clauses need a comma. 2. Mr. Moody studies show a link between positive moods and sunshine, so get yourself outside! If you don t get enough sunshine, feel down. A. No change B. Add a comma after between C. Add a comma after Mr. Moody and add a subject to feel down D. Add a comma after Mr. Moody and between C. Because Mr. Moody is an introductory word. Feel down is not a complete sentence. You can t have an introductory clause paired with an incomplete sentence.
Link to song #FiguresOfSpeechFriday I ve got a sweeter song than the birds in the trees. The month of May just walked in the door. Personification: Giving inanimate objects human characteristics. Simile: the comparison of one thing to another thing of a different kind using like, as, or than to make the description more vivid. 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 20 Ways to combine sentences + more with Lampshades on Fire by Modest Mouse
Grammar Lesson: To avoid run-on sentences, you must combine two independent clauses by using a comma conjunction (For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So FANBOYS) or a semicolon. You can also separate the independent clauses by using a period and starting a new sentence. Examples: Semi-colons Comma Conjunctions I am learning to play the guitar, but it is very hard for me to memorize the chords. If I knew how to play the guitar well, I would sign up for the talent show; that would be an amazing experience. I love listening to music, but I hate to dance. Notethat you don t need a comma when the conjunction isn t followed by a complete sentence. I love listening to music and dancing.
Link to Song #MentorSentenceMonday Why do you need a comma after well? Well, the lampshade was on fire; the room lit up, and we ran to the next town. Why do you think the writer chose to combine using a semicolon first then a comma conjunction? Why not repeat one twice? Imagine this sentence broken into 3 different sentences. How would it sound? What makes this a well-written sentence?
#TransformItTuesday Link to Song We pack up again, we head to the next place. Correct: We pack up again, and we head to the next place. Or We pack up again; we head to the next place. Or We pack up again. We head to the next place. Grammar Rule: We pack up again and we head to the next place are two independent clauses that must be combined using a semicolon, comma conjunction, or separated with a period to avoid run-on sentences. Compound/ Complex sentence example: Once we burn everything up, we pack and head to the next place. 1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence by adding punctuation. 2. Next, rewrite this compound sentence to transform it into a complex sentence.
#TestPrepThursday Though a trip to Mars would mean never returning to Earth over 200,000 people have applied and submitted their application videos. No one knows if Mars One will be successful, but there s something appealing about getting a fresh start on a new planet people will have a whole new world to mess up again. 1. A. No Change B. Earth, over 200,000 people have applied, and submitted C. Earth over 200,000 people have applied and submitted D. Earth, over 200,000 people have applied and submitted D. Because the conjunction and doesn t need a comma when it doesn t combine two independent clauses, and Though a trip.. is an introductory clause that needs a comma after it. 1. 2. 2. A. No Change B. successful; but / new planet, people C. successful, but / new planet; people D. successful, but/ new planet, people C. Because you need to combine 3 complete sentences.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday He is a party pooper who makes us think about why we should be responsible. Link to Song The lampshade is on fire (meaning from the song) Metaphor: A non-literal representation of a way to vividly describe something. Or Extended Metaphor because the song uses this expression to represent destroying our Earth and burning up fossil fuels. Idiom: An expression whose meaning is not predictable based on the individual meanings of the words that make up the phrase. 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 21 Parallel Structure + more with One Love by Bob Marley
Grammar Lesson: All things in a list must follow the same grammatical pattern to form parallel structure. If the list is combined into one sentence, each item must be separated by a comma. Examples: Parallel Structure: Parallel Structure Sentence: V adj N V Music gives life to the soul. I love to try new instruments, play adj N N V adj Dance offers movement to the heart. fresh music, and learn fancy chords. Instruments deliver sound tothe mind.
#MentorSentenceMonday Link to song Let s get together; let s feel alright. Why do you need a semicolon here? How are the words in this sentence parallel? What makes this a well-written sentence?
Link to song #TransformItTuesday I hear the children crying, One Heart," and I saw the children write, One Love! Correct: I hear the children crying, One Heart, and I see the children writing, One Love! Grammar Rule: All word parts of the list must be parallel. Complex: When I m out in the streets, I hear the children crying, One Heart, and I see the children write, One Love! 1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence. 2. After correcting the sentence, add a introductory clause in front of the corrected sentence to transform it into a compound/complex sentence.
#TestPrepThursday 1. A. No Change B. modern technology, social networking, and telephones. C. modern technology, social networking, and cellphones. D. modern technology, social networking, and mobile telephones. D. Because you need to separate the list with commas and you must add an adjective to telephones to form a parallel sentence. Peacebuilding has accelerated with modern technology social networking and telephones. Media can be used as both a negative force or a positive power. 1. 2. 2. A. No Change B. Add a comma before or C. Add a comma after or D. Change power to a noun A. Because the sentence is parallel with matching adjectives and nouns.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday Link to song One heart. One love. One more thing. Repetition: Repeats the same word or phrase to make an idea clear and create unity throughout a piece of writing. Who has hurt all mankind just to save his own beliefs? Rhetorical Question: A question you ask without expecting an answer. A question to prove a point. 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 22 Colons and Dashes with You Can t Always Get What You Want by The Rolling Stones
Grammar Lesson: Though technically interchangeable in most cases use a colon (:) before a list use a dash (--) before a wait for it, wait for it explanation and as a SUPER comma when you want the pause to be dramatic. Examples: Dash Examples: There s really only one thing I m looking Colon Example: The following skills are needed for for in a good bass player passion. bass players: desire to play, willingness to practice, and drive to succeed. The best thing I ve learned from music to reluctantly narrow it down is discipline. Also notice the parallel structure in this list
Link to song #MentorSentenceMonday You can t always get what you want, but you can get what you need which usually ends up being better. Why is there a comma needed before but? Why does the writer choose a dash instead of a comma? What makes this a well-written sentence?
#TransformItTuesday Here is a list of the things I want money fame and looking good. Link to song Correct: Here is a list of the things I want: money, fame, and good-looks. Grammar Rule: Use a colon before lists and separate lists with commas. Keep the list parallel. Complex: Since you are asking, here is a list of the things I want: money, fame, and good-looks. 1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence. 2. After correcting the sentence, add a introductory clause in front of the corrected sentence to transform it into a complex sentence.
#TestPrepThursday 1. A. No Change B. listen she still does but C. listen, she still does but D. listen she still does, but John prefers to talk rather than listen. When he was little, his mother used to constantly nag him to listen, she still does: but John just has too much to say. However studies show that listening whether that be in your professional or personal life is the most important skill to learn. B. Because this phrase must be separated from the main sentence since it can stand alone, and B is the only option that completely does that. 1. 2. 2. A. No Change B. Add a comma after however C. Add a comma after however and add dash after life D. Add a dash after however C. Because you need a comma after introductory words, and whether that be in your professional or personal life needs to be separated from the main sentence.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday Link to song At her feet was a footloose man Idiom: An expression whose meaning is not predictable based on the individual meanings of the words that make up the phrase. When you want something from someone, help that person get what he or she wants. Paradox: a statement that contradicts itself. 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 23 Appositives + more with Don t Worry, Be Happy by Bobby McFerrin
Grammar Lesson: Appositives give more information about the subject of a sentence. If appositives are extra information that can be removed from the sentence, they are set aside by commas. Examples: Appositive in the Appositive at the middle of the sentence: start of a sentence: Paul McCartney, the lead guitarist for the A bold innovator, Paul McCartney Beatles, is a legend. started a new style of music.
Link to Song #MentorSentenceMonday Bobby McFerrin, a singer and song writer, tells us to not worry. Why does the writer add in the phrase, a singer and song writer ? Why is it set aside with commas? What makes this a well-written sentence?
#TransformItTuesday Don t Worry, Be Happy a song with a happy beat is a classic. Link to Song Correct: Don t Worry, Be Happy, a song with a happy beat, is a classic. Grammar Rule: If appositives are extra information that can be removed from the sentence, they are set aside by commas. Simple: Don t Worry, Be Happy is a classic song with a happy beat. 1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence. 2. After correcting the sentence, rewrite this sentence by transforming it into a simple sentence with NO appositive.
#TestPrepThursday C. Because common symptoms of depression is extra information that can be removed from the sentence an appositive set aside by commas. You don t need a comma conjunction in this sentence. 1. A. No Change B. and anxious common symptoms of depression, every C. and anxious, common symptoms of depression, every D. and, anxious common symptoms of depression, every She felt exhausted and anxious common symptoms of depression every time she overbooked herself. An experienced physician Dr. Smith recommend having a positive attitude and learning to say no to alleviate stress 1. 2. C. Because An experienced physician is an appositive at the start of the sentence giving more information about Dr. Smith. You don t need a comma before and because you aren t combing two sentences. 2. A. No Change B. Add a comma after physician and before and C. Add a comma after physician D. Add a comma before and
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday Like the birds that sing in the trees, don t worry-- be happy. Link to Song Simile: the comparison of one thing to another thing of a different kind using like, as, or than to make the description more vivid. He s such a Scrooge; he seems to want to be unhappy. Allusion: an expression designed to remind the reader of a prior knowledge from history, culture, or literature. *From A Christmas Carol 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 24 Avoiding comma splices + more with Feel Good Inc. by Gorillaz
Grammar Lesson: Commas should never be used to splice (join) together run-on sentences or compound sentence elements. Don t use commas where they aren t needed, or it will result in a comma splice. Examples: Correct use of commas: Incorrect use of commas: Furthermore, I would like a higher volume. Being in a band is fun, and cool. Though I ve never heard of him, I like his sound. I m in a band, you should try it. I love listening to music, but I hate to dance. I love playing, singing, and drumming.
Link to Song (clean version) #MentorSentenceMonday Like the wind, love is free and forever. Why is a comma needed here? Why isn t a comma needed here? What makes this a well-written sentence?
#TransformItTuesday Link to Song (clean version) The windmill is for the land, it will turn forever. Correct: The windmill is for the land, and it will turn forever. Grammar Rule: A comma cannot splice together a run-on sentence. Compound/Complex: Being earth-friendly, the windmill is for the land, and it will turn forever. 1. Transform this sentence into a correct compound sentence. 2. After correcting the sentence, add an introductory clause in front of the corrected sentence to transform it into a compound/complex sentence.
#TestPrepThursday 1. A. No Change B. Interestingly, wind exists, because C. Interestingly wind exists because D. Interestingly wind exists because, 1. A. Because Interestingly is an introductory word and needs a comma after it. Interestingly, wind exists because the sun unevenly heats the Earth. 2. 2. A. No Change B. grains and pump water C. grains, and pump water D. grains and, pump water Farmers once used windmills to grind grains, and pumping water. B. Because you only use commas before conjunctions when you are combining two complete clauses. Also, you must keep a list parallel.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday Link to Song (clean version) The city is breaking down on a camel s back. Metaphor: A non-literal representation of a way to vividly describe something. Don t stop the ship. Get in; we are your captains. Watch us navigate. Word choice: Why does the writer choose these words? All of these words bring to mind the sea and sailing. 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 25 Indefinite Pronouns + more with Everybody Dance Now by C&C Music Factory
Grammar Lesson: Indefinite Pronouns are words which replace nouns that are indefinite or vague in number. These pronouns must match in number with the rest of the sentence. Always Singular Always Plural Sometimes Singular or Plural Anybody, anyone, anything, each, either, everybody, everything, neither, nobody, no one, somebody, someone Both, few, many, others, several All, any, more, most, some His, her Their, them You, yours Examples: Always Plural Always Singular Singular or Plural Everyone needs to bring his or All of boys are great signers. Both of them are in the band. her guitar to practice. Though they messed up the Several of the girls like to Somebody left his or her mic song, all is forgiven. sing. last practice.
#MentorSentenceMonday Link to song Everybody needs to move his or her feet on the dance floor once in a while. Why is his or her used instead of their? Why isn t a comma needed before the conjunction or? What makes this a well-written sentence?
#TransformItTuesday Everybody needs to get their butt out in the dance floor! Correct: Everybody needs to get his or her butt out on the dance floor. Link to song Grammar Rule: Everybody is singular therefore their must be changed to singular. Also, you can t be in a dance floor, so the preposition must change to on. Compound: We are at prom, so everybody needs to get his or her butt out on the dance floor! 1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence. 2. After correcting the sentence, transform this simple sentence into a compound sentence.
#TestPrepThursday 1. A. No Change B. everybody tips on how to improve his or her C. them tips on how to improve his or her D. everyone tips on how to improve their They give everybody tips on how to improve their health by dancing more. Few follow their advice though. 1. B. Because everybody is singular, so you must use the singular his or her. 2. 2. A. No Change B. Few follow his or her C. Few follow them D. Not each follow their A. Because few is plural, so you must use the plural their.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday Link to song I m back with the bass; hear it snap! Hint: Two in one here! Dancing carries away stress and delivers a replacement of fun. Alliteration: Repetition of letters or sounds at the beginning of words Onomatopoeia: A formation of a word that makes the sound it s associated with. Personification: Giving inanimate objects human characteristics 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 26 Ambiguous and Vague Pronoun References + more with All That She Wants by Ace of Base
Grammar Lesson: Ambiguous and Vague Pronouns leave antecedents and the message of the sentence unclear or vague. Examples: Correct: Incorrect: The girl took her dog to the concert; The girl took her dog to the concert; she the dog enjoyed giving everyone big liked giving everyone big wet kisses. wet kisses. Aaron became good friends with Larry Aaron and Larry became good friends after he helped him get tickets to the after Larry got him tickets to the concert. concert.
#MentorSentenceMonday Link to song Jenny and Jonas live a lonely life; he left her, and all that she wants is another baby. Why is he and her and she NOT vague in this sentence? Why do you need a semicolon here? What makes this a well-written sentence?
Link to song #TransformItTuesday He wants to be gone tomorrow she wants another boyfriend, but it didn t work out. Correct: He wants to be gone tomorrow; she wants another boyfriend, but neither worked out. OR He wants to be gone tomorrow; she wants another boyfriend, but the boyfriend didn t work out for her. Grammar Rule: It was unclear what didn t fit well by using the ambiguous pronoun it, so this needed to be clarified. Compound/Complex: Since they broke up, he wants to be gone tomorrow; she wants another boyfriend, but neither worked out 1. Transform this sentence into a correct sentence. 2. After correcting the sentence, transform this compound sentence into a compound /complex sentence.
#TestPrepThursday 1. A. No Change B. They/her C. Ashley and Angie/Angie D. Everyone/her Ashley and Angie had rebound relationships, but the relationships didn t work out for her. C. Because her is ambiguous. We don t know which girl it is referring to. 1. 2. A. No Change B. John and Jake, Angie s new boyfriends, / he C. John and Jake Angie s new boyfriends / they D. John and Jake, Angie s new boyfriends, / they 2. D. Because he doesn t fit with the plural boyfriends. Also, you need to set the appositive apart with commas. John and Jake Angie s new boyfriends couldn t live up to her demands, so he left.
#FiguresOfSpeechFriday Link to song She s the hunter and you re the fox I m just laying on the beach and sunning on the shore. What sentence structure is this? Parallel structure: where all parts-of-speech match Metaphor: A non-literal representation of a way to vividly describe something. Or 1. Decide which figure of speech is being used in each clause. 2. Decipher the deeper meaning of each sentence.
Week 27 Passive Voice + more with Fallin by Alicia Keys
