Importance of Effective Communication in Teaching

 
 
WOW MRS FORD I NEVER KNEW BEING
SWEATY
 COULD BE SO GOOD!
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uc2UEfWj
vo8
 
S
W
“E 
A
 
Y
T
 
SWAG
 
SURELY 
POINT
IS THE SAME AS
STATEMENT?
JUST WITH MORE
DELIBERATE
CONNONTATIONS
….
 
 
WE BOTH AGREE
ON
EVIDENCE
!
 
AND
ANALYSIS
!
 
I LIKE THE ADDITION OF
THE L FOR 
LINK
 
BUT SURELY Y FOR 
YES
 I
HAVE ANSWERED THE
QUESTION IS MORE ACTIVE
– LESS PASSIVE
 
WHY?
S
o that everyone approaches the
same thing in the same way
W
hy waste time teaching the
same thing 10 different ways?
E
very subject (almost) has an
element of writing
A
ll of us want students to get
into good habits early on
T
each them it once well and they
can transfer it from subject to
subject
Y
 waste time breaking bad habits
later on?
 
 
PEE ON A GOOD DAY…
Question – How is the mouse presented in the Gruffalo?
 
POINT
The mouse is brave and tricks the Gruffalo
 
EVIDENCE
 A quote that shows this is, “Just follow behind
me and soon you’ll see everyone is afraid of me”
EXPLANATION
Being able to trick a Gruffalo is brave.
Fine this answers the question
Yes this is  evidence but the style is awful and is breeding
bad habits for later on. The use of “quote” will never be
suitable beyond year 9
Nothing about this is analytical. It really just repeats the
point and adds little to the paragraph
 
SWEATY ON A GOOD DAY…
Question – How is the mouse presented in the Gruffalo?
 
STATEMENT
The mouse is brave and tricks the Gruffalo,
WEAVE
instructing him to
EVIDENCE
“just follow behind me and soon you’ll see everyone is afraid of me”
ANALYSIS plus T
The 
image
 of a tiny mouse being followed by a huge Gruffalo is not
only humorous but also 
metaphorical
 in terms of role reversal and the
mouse's ability to be canny and quick witted.
The use of “afraid” being spoken in 
first person 
by the mouse also
gives strength to his character and …….
 
YES I HAVE ANSWERED THE QUESTION!
 
WHAT?
S
TATEMENT
W
EAVE
E
VIDENCE
A
NALYSIS
T
ECHNIQUE
Y
ES
 
 
THE THING YOU KNOW/BELIEVE.
THE ANSWER TO THE QUESTION.
 
CONNOTATIONS: FACTUAL, TRUTHFUL, CONCISE, CLEAR
TOP TIPS
 
KEEP THIS
SHORT
 
MAKE SURE IT
ANSWERS THE
QUESTION
 
USE THE
WORDS OF THE
QUESTION
 
 
 
A WAY TO GET FROM YOUR
STATEMENT TO YOUR EVIDENCE.
 
CONNOTATIONS: SMOOTH, CONTEXTUALISED
 
TOP TIPS
 
MAKE THIS THE
EASIEST ROUTE
POSSIBLE
 
USE THE CONTEXT
TO HELP YOU
 
RE-READ FOR
SENSE
 
RE-JIG THE
EVIDENCE AS
NECESSARY
 
 
WEAVE IT TO WIN IT!
 
NO WEAVE
Typical  paragraph
 
Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two
friends running for the bus “we chased Olympic Gold.”
THIS IS BAD – IT DOESN’T MAKE SENSE
Or even worse
 
Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two
friends running for the bus and I quote “we chased Olympic
Gold.”
THIS IS YUCK – TERRIBLE STYLE
WEAVE
 
Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two
friends running for the bus as they “chased Olympic Gold.”
THIS IS GREAT THE EVIDENCE COULD ACTUALLY BE YOUR OWN WORDS
 
THE WORDS FROM THE TEXT IN
“XXX”.
 
CONNOTATIONS: BORROWED, ACCURATE, PROOF
TOP TIPS
 
KEEP THIS
SHORT
 
COPY IT OUT
EXACTLY
 
DON’T FORGET
“….”
 
 
THE LONGEST PART OF THE
PARAGRAPH. HIGHER ORDER SKILL
 
CONNOTATIONS: DETAILED, BALANCED, INSIGHTFUL
 
TOP TIPS
 
MAKE THIS THE
LONGEST PART OF
YOUR PARAGRAPH
 
SQUEEZE EVERY
LAST BIT OUT OF
YOUR EVIDENCE
 
CONSIDER OTHER
INTERPRETATIONS
 
ADD SOME
S.W.A.G
 
 
S
INGLE
W
ORD
A
NALYSIS
G
LORY
 
THE TECHNICAL HOW. THE
IDENTIFICATION OF THE ‘WAY’
 
CONNOTATIONS: SPECIFIC, ACCURATE, NAMED
 
TOP TIPS
 
MAKE SURE THIS
IS ACCURATE
 
USE THE 3 X RULE
 
ADD THIS IN
ANWHERE YOU
LIKE
 
 
HOW?
S
taff taught SWEATY in a PD
session or such like
W
orked examples provided for
reference
E
ach department assigned a
SWEATY English Expert
A
ll  classrooms provided with a
visual reference for consistency
T
eachers feed back on their
SWEATY success
Yes we all write so
much better!
 
S.W.E.A.T.Y
 
S=
 
 
 
STATEMENT
. Your answer
W =
 
 
WEAVE
. The build up to your
  
quote/evidence
E=
  
EVIDENCE
. Your short “quote”
A = 
 
ANALYSIS
. The language analysis
  
of your quote. Longest Part
T = 
 
TECHNICAL TERM
. The key term
  
that describes the language –
  
THIS CAN MOVE AROUND.
Y = 
 
YES
 IT ANSWERS THE QUESTION
 
I DONT CARE IF I
AM SWEATY AS I
KNOW IT REALLY
WORKS!
THANKS MRS
FORD!
 
YEAR 7
Yes
really!
 
Hello, yep I wrote it. SWEATY
is such an easy system for
formulating analytical
paragraphs.
 
949 TIPS FOR SWEATY SUCCESS
 
1.
My 
S
TATEMENT
 is short
2.
My 
S
TATEMENT
 answers the question (ATQ)
3.
I have 
W
OVEN
 in a piece of 
E
VIDENCE
4.
My 
E
VIDENCE 
is concise and accurate
5.
I have included a 
T
ECHNICAL TERM
6.
My 
T
ECHNICAL TERM 
is accurate and spelt correctly
7.
My 
A
NALYSIS
 doesn’t repeat my statement
8.
My 
A
NALYSIS
 is the longest part of my paragraph
9.
Y
ES
 I have answered the question!
 
 
 
What do we want –
 death to PEE
When do we want it –
NOW!
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The content discusses the significance of clear communication and strategic approaches in teaching to cultivate good habits in students early on. It emphasizes the need for concise, active responses over passive ones and stresses the impact of proper analysis and evidence presentation. Effective communication helps students grasp concepts efficiently and transfer skills across subjects, avoiding the need to correct bad habits later on.

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  1. WOW MRS FORD I NEVER KNEW BEING SWEATY COULD BE SO GOOD! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uc2UEfWj vo8

  2. T W E Y SWAG

  3. SURELY POINT IS THE SAME AS STATEMENT? JUST WITH MORE DELIBERATE CONNONTATIONS . WE BOTH AGREE ON EVIDENCE! AND ANALYSIS!

  4. I LIKE THE ADDITION OF THE L FOR LINK BUT SURELY Y FOR YES I HAVE ANSWERED THE QUESTION IS MORE ACTIVE LESS PASSIVE

  5. WHY? So that everyone approaches the same thing in the same way Why waste time teaching the same thing 10 different ways? Every subject (almost) has an element of writing All of us want students to get into good habits early on Teach them it once well and they can transfer it from subject to subject Y waste time breaking bad habits later on?

  6. PEE ON A GOOD DAY Question How is the mouse presented in the Gruffalo? POINT The mouse is brave and tricks the Gruffalo Fine this answers the question Yes this is evidence but the style is awful and is breeding bad habits for later on. The use of quote will never be suitable beyond year 9 EVIDENCE A quote that shows this is, Just follow behind me and soon you ll see everyone is afraid of me EXPLANATION Being able to trick a Gruffalo is brave. Nothing about this is analytical. It really just repeats the point and adds little to the paragraph

  7. SWEATY ON A GOOD DAY Question How is the mouse presented in the Gruffalo? STATEMENT The mouse is brave and tricks the Gruffalo, WEAVE instructing him to EVIDENCE just follow behind me and soon you ll see everyone is afraid of me ANALYSIS plus T The image of a tiny mouse being followed by a huge Gruffalo is not only humorous but also metaphorical in terms of role reversal and the mouse's ability to be canny and quick witted. The use of afraid being spoken in first person by the mouse also gives strength to his character and . YES I HAVE ANSWERED THE QUESTION!

  8. WHAT? STATEMENT WEAVE EVIDENCE ANALYSIS TECHNIQUE YES

  9. TOP TIPS KEEP THIS SHORT MAKE SURE IT ANSWERS THE QUESTION USE THE WORDS OF THE QUESTION THE THING YOU KNOW/BELIEVE. THE ANSWER TO THE QUESTION. CONNOTATIONS: FACTUAL, TRUTHFUL, CONCISE, CLEAR

  10. TOP TIPS MAKE THIS THE EASIEST ROUTE POSSIBLE USE THE CONTEXT TO HELP YOU RE-READ FOR SENSE RE-JIG THE EVIDENCE AS NECESSARY A WAY TO GET FROM YOUR STATEMENT TO YOUR EVIDENCE. CONNOTATIONS: SMOOTH, CONTEXTUALISED

  11. WEAVE IT TO WIN IT! NO WEAVE Typical paragraph Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two friends running for the bus we chased Olympic Gold. THIS IS BAD IT DOESN T MAKE SENSE Or even worse Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two friends running for the bus and I quote we chased Olympic Gold. THIS IS YUCK TERRIBLE STYLE WEAVE Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two friends running for the bus as they chased Olympic Gold. THIS IS GREAT THE EVIDENCE COULD ACTUALLY BE YOUR OWN WORDS

  12. TOP TIPS KEEP THIS SHORT COPY IT OUT EXACTLY DON T FORGET . THE WORDS FROM THE TEXT IN XXX . CONNOTATIONS: BORROWED, ACCURATE, PROOF

  13. TOP TIPS MAKE THIS THE LONGEST PART OF YOUR PARAGRAPH SQUEEZE EVERY LAST BIT OUT OF YOUR EVIDENCE CONSIDER OTHER INTERPRETATIONS ADD SOME S.W.A.G THE LONGEST PART OF THE PARAGRAPH. HIGHER ORDER SKILL CONNOTATIONS: DETAILED, BALANCED, INSIGHTFUL

  14. SINGLE WORD ANALYSIS GLORY

  15. TOP TIPS MAKE SURE THIS IS ACCURATE USE THE 3 X RULE ADD THIS IN ANWHERE YOU LIKE THE TECHNICAL HOW. THE IDENTIFICATION OF THE WAY CONNOTATIONS: SPECIFIC, ACCURATE, NAMED

  16. HOW? Staff taught SWEATY in a PD session or such like Worked examples provided for reference Each department assigned a SWEATY English Expert All classrooms provided with a visual reference for consistency Teachers feed back on their SWEATY success Yes we all write so much better!

  17. S.W.E.A.T.Y I DONT CARE IF I AM SWEATY AS I KNOW IT REALLY WORKS! THANKS MRS FORD! S= W = WEAVE. The build up to your quote/evidence E= EVIDENCE. Your short quote A = ANALYSIS. The language analysis of your quote. Longest Part T = TECHNICAL TERM. The key term that describes the language THIS CAN MOVE AROUND. Y = YES IT ANSWERS THE QUESTION STATEMENT. Your answer

  18. YEAR 7 Yes really!

  19. Hello, yep I wrote it. SWEATY is such an easy system for formulating analytical paragraphs.

  20. 949 TIPS FOR SWEATY SUCCESS 1. My STATEMENT is short 2. My STATEMENT answers the question (ATQ) 3. I have WOVEN in a piece of EVIDENCE 4. My EVIDENCE is concise and accurate 5. I have included a TECHNICAL TERM 6. My TECHNICAL TERM is accurate and spelt correctly 7. My ANALYSISdoesn t repeat my statement 8. My ANALYSIS is the longest part of my paragraph 9.YES I have answered the question!

  21. What do we want death to PEE When do we want it NOW!

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