Grammar as a Tool for Learning and Communication

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Grammar: in Anglophone countries
 
Dartmouth Conference (US) 1966:
a meeting of about 50 educationalists, largely from the UK and US for a 3 week
seminar on English teaching;
driven by growing concerns about the teaching of English;
focused very heavily on writing and grammar;
The outcome was 
a shift in attention from learning product to learning process, and
other changes based on the British “growth model” for viewing the discipline of English’
(Smagorinsky 2002:23).
 
Thus, a seminal moment for grammar as it triggered a large-scale rejection of grammar
teaching by educationalists and teachers.
 
Grammar: in Anglophone countries
 
Since the Dartmouth conference, for over 50 years, the role of grammar in language
learning has divided professional and policymaker perspectives:
 
grammar does not help language users to use language better;
grammar is about error correction and accuracy;
grammar and creativity are opposed: grammar = rules; creativity = freedom;
grammar is the cure for social ills!
 
Generally more ideological than informed debate.
‘Nothing helps your
writing so much as
ignoring grammar’
(Elbow 1981)
National Curriculum 2014: England
Pupils should be taught to control their speaking and writing consciously and to use
Standard English. They should be taught to 
use
 the elements of spelling, grammar,
punctuation and 
‘language about language
’ listed. This is not intended to constrain or
restrict teachers’ creativity, but simply to provide the structure on which they can
construct exciting lessons. A non-statutory Glossary of terms is provided for
teachers.
Throughout the programmes of study, teachers should teach pupils the vocabulary
they need to discuss their reading, writing and spoken language. It is important that
pupils 
learn the correct grammatical terms 
in English and that 
these terms are
integrated within teaching
.
National Curriculum: England
The grammar of our first language is learnt naturally and implicitly through interactions
with other speakers and from reading. 
Explicit knowledge of grammar is, however,
very important, as it gives us more conscious control and choice in our language
.
Building this knowledge is best achieved through a focus on grammar within the
teaching of reading, writing and speaking. Once pupils are familiar with a grammatical
concept [for example ‘modal verb’], they should be encouraged to 
apply and explore
this concept in the grammar of their own speech and writing and to note where it is
used by others
. Young pupils, in particular, use more complex language in speech
than in writing, and teachers should build on this, aiming for a smooth transition to
sophisticated writing.
Read critically: knowing how language, including figurative language, grammar, text
structure and organisational features 
present meaning
;
Write accurately, fluently, effectively and at length through:
applying 
their growing knowledge of 
vocabulary, 
grammar
 
and text structure to
their writing and selecting the appropriate form;
drawing on knowledge of literary rhetorical devices from their reading and listening
to enhance the impact of their writing;
amending the grammar and structure of their writing 
to improve its coherence and
overall effectiveness
Consolidate and build on their knowledge of grammar and vocabulary through:
studying 
the 
effectiveness and impact of the grammatical features 
of the texts they
read
drawing on new vocabulary and grammatical constructions from their reading and
listening, and 
using these consciously in their writing and speech to achieve
particular effects
NC: KEY STAGE 3
NC: KEY STAGE 3
Grammar in the US Common Core
Language Standard 1 requires command of  ‘
the 
conventions of standard English
grammar and usage when writing or speaking
Language Standard 2 requires command of ‘
the 
conventions of standard English
capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing’.
Language Standard 3 requires students to understand ‘
how language functions in
different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to
comprehend more fully when reading or listening’,
 and that students 
must also be
able to make informed, skilful choices among the many ways to express
themselves through language
(CCSSI 2012).
Grammar in the Australian Curriculum
‘Element 1: Language: Knowledge about the English language
: 
a coherent, dynamic,
and evolving body of knowledge about the English language and how it works
.’
(ACARA 2009:1).
The goal of teaching grammar and textual patterns should go beyond students’
labelling of various grammatical categories; it should centre on goals such as clearer
expression of thought, more convincing argumentation, more careful logic in
reasoning, more coherence, precision, and imagination in speaking and writing, and
knowing how to choose words and grammatical and textual structures that are more
appropriate to the audience or readership. The goal here centres on the gradually
more powerful conversion of ‘knowledge about’ language into a resource 
for effective
reading, listening, viewing, writing, speaking and designing.
’    (ACARA 2009: 6)
They need to be able 
to talk systematically in informed ways about the nature and
consequences of the choices 
they have made in their expressions
.’ (ACARA
2009:10)
 
At the start of this new millennium, throughout much of the K-12 English curriculum,
grammar is a broken subject… Grammar is often ignored, broken off altogether from
the teaching of literature, rhetoric, drama, composition, and creative writing. Grammar
is the skunk at the garden party of the language arts.  
(Haussamen 2003 px)
The Grammar Test:
England
Grammar in the Curriculum
Why teach grammar?
                
To understand the structure of your own language?
To avoid making mistakes in speaking and writing your own language?
To develop understanding about how texts work and make meaning?
To make you a better reader and writer?
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Research on Grammar Teaching
 
Meta-analyses
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Braddock, Lloyd-Jones and Schoer (1963): he argued grammar had ‘
a harmful effect on
the development of original writing
’ (1963:37).
Hillocks (1984) and Hillocks and Smith (1991) reiterated the view that there was no
evidence for a beneficial effect.
EPPI 2004: no evidence of any beneficial impact.
Graham and Perin 2007: a negative effect for ‘
the explicit and systematic teaching of the
parts of speech and structure of sentences
’  (2007:21)
Empirical Studies
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No positive benefit: Bateman and Zidonis (1966);  Elley, Barham and Lamb (1979):
Fogel and Ehri (2000)
Fearn and Farnan (2007): positive effect when ‘
grammar and writing share one
instructional context
’ (2007:16).
Research on Grammar Teaching
The body of empirical research is not strong and the same studies are cited in
each successive meta-analysis.
Weaknesses:
The studies investigated teaching a grammar course and teaching writing
separately
The Bateman and Zidonis and Fogel and Ehri studies are very small scale.
No studies, other than Fearn and Farnan, which investigated teaching
grammar meaningfully in context of the teaching of writing
No studies conducted in the UK educational context
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Prescriptive and Descriptive Models
 
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Accuracy in writing is necessary, but not sufficient to generate good writers.
A descriptivist view illuminates how written text generates meaning in different
contexts.
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Tacit and Explicit Knowledge
Tacit knowledge is intuitive and not tangible or verbalisable: eg recognising from a
facial expression that someone is anxious;
Explicit knowledge is codified, recordable, communicable and verbalisable: eg
knowing how to change a tyre on a car.
Tacit grammatical knowledge is the most important for being an effective language
user and we acquire substantial tacit knowledge as we learn to speak eg young
children who over-learn past tense in English and say ‘
we goed
’ instead of ‘
we went
’.
Explicit grammatical knowledge is accessible and usable grammatical knowledge eg
an adjective provides more information about a noun.
Explicit knowledge is ‘learning’ knowledge:  it can  be used to develop greater
understanding, to solve problems, to share thinking = pedagogically important.
Functional Grammar
Functional grammar enables us ‘
to show the grammar as a meaning-making resource
and to describe grammatical categories by reference to what they mean – an insightful
mode of entry to the study of discourse
’  (Halliday and Matthiessen 2004:10)
Re-framing of grammar as more than a description of the structure of language but
fundamentally as resource for meaning-making (Halliday 2003; 2004)
Halliday sees 
‘language as a resource, a meaning-making system through which we
interactively shape and interpret our world and ourselves’ 
(Derewianka and Jones
2010:9)
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Grammar as Choice
Grammar as Choice
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We can ‘
make explicit how choices of visual and verbal resources privilege certain
view points and how other choices of visual and verbal resources could construct
alternative views
’ (Unsworth 2001:15)
The grammatical choices we make, including pronoun use, active or passive verb
constructions, and sentence patterns – represent relations between writers and the
world they live in. Word choice and sentence structure are an expression of the way
we attend to the words of others, the way we position ourselves in relation to others.
(Micciche 2004:719).
Showing learners the grammatical choices writers make, and the grammatical
choices they can make as writers, can alter the way their writing communicates and
their understanding of the power of choice.
Read both these sentences aloud – can you hear how they emphasise different
things and create different effects?
The same words; the same narrative action;
Different grammar; different effect
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An illustration
An illustration
Metalinguistic Understanding
 
Those moments when users ‘
shift their attention from the transmitted contents to the
properties of language used to transmit them
’ (Cazden1976:3).
‘the ability to take language as the object of observation and the referent of discourse’
(Camps and Milian1999:6).
‘the explicit bringing into consciousness of an attention to language as an artifact, and
the conscious monitoring and manipulation of language to create desired meanings
grounded in socially shared understandings’  
(Myhill 2012:250).
Metasemiosis is reflection on meaning making; it is ‘meta’ to processes of meaning-
making and, to that extent, is always more or less abstract
.’ (Macken-Horarik 2016)
A theorised view of the pedagogical importance of explicit grammatical knowledge and
of grammar as a meaning-making resource affording choice develops learners
metalinguistic understanding.
Grammar and Writing
 
The challenge of learning to write and be an effective writer requires increasing
metalinguistic understanding about writing, yet:
research has scarcely addressed 
metalinguistic understanding in the context of
writing 
(except in relation to early years writing development);
there is limited understanding of how 
older writers
, beyond the early years, develop
metalinguistic understanding about writing;
there is limited investigation of how 
teachers
 foster metalinguistic understanding for
writing and the instructional interactions which facilitate this
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Repertoires of Infinite Possibility
Writing is always an act of decision-making and making choices (Kellogg 2008)
Decisions about storyline, argument, character, title, structure, message, phrasing,
words, font, layout…
Our research:
focuses on the 
language choices and decisions 
writers make.
emphasises how choice develops 
independence and autonomy 
as a writer
develops an awareness of ‘
a repertoire of infinite possibility
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Our Research
A different perspective:
A fully theorised rationale
for grammar in the
curriculum
A corresponding
pedagogical model
Founded on robust
empirical studies
The Exeter Approach
The Exeter Approach
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Teaching children how to label grammar in a sentence does not empower
the to communicate more effectively in writing
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Our Research Evidence
 
Study 1: Randomised Controlled Trial (RCT) 
32 classes of 12-13 year olds  -
intervention group improved by 20% compared with 11% in control group; 
significant
positive effect;
Study 2: Quasi-experimental study investigating the approach with 12-13 year old weak
writers: 
positive effect
Study 3:  Quasi-experimental study, with 14-15 year olds 
looking at impact of the
approach on reading comprehension as well as writing: 
positive effect 
for both but even
stronger for reading comprehension.
Study 4:  RCT with 
54 primary schools (
9-10 year olds): 
positive effect 
- 
found two
months additional progress for the intervention group  
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Study 5: RCT with 9-10 year olds: 
positive effect 
(regional study);
Study 6: Longitudinal study over 3 years of how students develop metalinguistic
understanding: conceptual development; application in writing; relationship between
teaching and student learning.
Study 7: (ongoing) repeat RCT with 150 primary schools
EEF Reporting of the Same Study
Grammar for Writing is not effective in improving general writing among Year 6
pupils when delivered as a whole class intervention over four weeks. (2014)
Grammar for Writing was previously found to have a whole class impact of 2
months’ progress (2016)
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To draw on the substantial body of research emphasising the importance of
talk for learning;
To acknowledge that ‘
writing floats on a sea of talk
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To develop verbalisable explicit knowledge about the effects created by
particular grammatical choices;
To support learner independence and autonomy
Metalinguistic
Understanding:
explicit
knowledge about
language
What might you draw
attention to grammatically
in this text as an example
of an argument text?
Think of a new crayon
colour and what the
crayon’s complaint might
be? Write a new letter to
Duncan outlining your
complaint.
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A Story of Clauses
Children are much more secure with word class concepts than with syntax and
clauses – mirroring their teachers’ subject knowledge
Teachers provide semantic explanations to grammatical concepts which avoid the
core grammatical principles eg
     Clauses - add more detail; make sense on their own; drop in
Children use these semantic explanations to engage in grammatical reasoning but
come to  mistaken conclusions because the input was unhelpful
Relative Clauses Drop In
Relative Clauses Drop In
It’s a drop in clause, you drop in extra information and about detail, if you take it
out. it still makes sense but if you put it back in, it still does make sense, some
more detail in.
If you say like ‘
the floor
’ you could do it, you could put a drop within the clause so
you can make it like ‘
the burning hot floor
I:  Now you talked about drop in clauses, what’s a drop in clause?
S: Isn’t it when you sort of, when you put more information into your sentences that
you’d put commas to show that it is.
It makes sense on its own
It makes sense on its own
A subordinate clause isn’t supposed to make sense and the main clause is
supposed to make sense, and then you join them with like a word like ‘because’ or
‘while’.
A subordinating clause is … you have to put it with a compound sentence to make
it make sense because if you put a subordinating clause by itself it doesn’t make
sense.
Well, If it was a complex sentence you know if you’ve written a main clause
because it would make sense on its own and you know if you’ve written a
subordinate clause because it wouldn’t have made sense on its own.
Is a subordinate clause a sentence that doesn’t make sense on its own?
Is it the beginning of a sentence that doesn’t make sense without the ending?
Extra information
Extra information
I think ‘subordinate clause’ is where it’s short but you have detail in it,  and ‘relative
clause’ is where, it’s got a lot of detail but it’s still really short. and ‘clause’ is like a
sentence where it’s getting more dramatic
I think that is a relative clause because you could say ‘
We called it the garage
because that’s what the estate agent called it
’ or you could have it ‘
We called it the
garage because that’s what the estate agent, 
Mr Stone
, called it
’ so it’s adding more
information.
I think when you want to like put more detail into your writing you put clauses.
A clause is when you drop something into the sentence to add more detail.
I:    If you’ve got your dog; ‘
The black dog is running
’ can you drop something in?
S:   
The black dog is running over the top, the peak of the mountain
.
I:     … so what would be the clause there?
S:    ‘
peak of the mountain
’.
Commas
Commas
A relative clause is when you have a sentence and then you put a comma
somewhere in the sentence and then you add in information, then you put another
comma and it still makes sense without the information or with the information in it.
The main clause is a simple sentence that will make sense on its own and the
subordinate clause is, either comes after a comma and it would just add a bit more
detail into the main clause
And isn’t a clause like where you have a sentence like “
Bob went to the shops
(comma) “
to get some sweets
” then a full stop.
This bit is a subordinate clause, this bit after the comma:
Stone led us down the garden, 
tugged the door open and shone his little torch
       into the gloom
 
…’
 There would be clauses if I put the commas in.
Reasoning
Reasoning
Stone led us down the garden, tugged the door open and shone his torch into the
gloom
.
Stone let us down the garden
’ that’s a main clause because if you put a full stop
there ‘
Stone led us down the garden
’ then it has  ‘
tugged the door open
…’ is a
subordinate clause because it won’t make sense on its own and it’s there for extra
information.
Unexpectedly, my board fell away from my feet, leaving me filled with desperation and
freefalling into the unknown.
Well it’s kind of got three because you’ve got ‘Unexpectedly’ that’s like yeah it’s not
exactly going to make sense so I guess it’s another subordinate clause and then
you’ve got the main clause and then another subordinate clause.  I’m not sure if you
can do that.
Conceptual Development
Conceptual Development
Because grammatical explanations are difficult, teachers are mediating by creating
alternative explanations, which draw attention to semantic aspects of sentences or
proxy markers such as commas.
More support/development is needed in how best to explain grammar concepts.
Some ‘confused’ answers by students may simply be the challenging of verbalising
the concept: some could correctly identify it.
For others the confusion is more fundamentally problematic as they are developing
substantial misunderstandings.
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Modelling based on own writing
Though I have to say when I was reading back through it this morning  - ‘As I
gazed towards the entrance of the maze it was deadly quiet’ - I wondered if I
wanted to go for ‘eerily quiet’ instead. I wondered if that would give more of a sort
of mystic vibe to it?
Modelling based on response to student writing
So you've delayed your subject: you leave the reader waiting, but hooked, to see
what is the character.
Modelling based on explicitness in task setting
As a writer, you can make that decision, can't you, as to which one sounds the
best. It doesn't happen by accident, writers make that choice, and you have that
choice: if you know that you can put your adjectives before your noun or after.
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Teacher Questioning
[discussing a subject-verb inversion]
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Why is that such a good sentence?
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They’ve described it well. 
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Good, but how has he done that,  what has he done?
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Missed Opportunities
Missed Opportunities
 
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  So, whoever’s writing that was, I hope they’ve now got a few ideas for how
                  they can level up.
Missed Opportunities
Missed Opportunities
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That is Excalibur.’
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That’s the one I was thinking of.    … ‘That is Excalibur’… impact!
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Fantastic adjectives
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It’s just those little bits of detail that makes your writing so delicious,
  
and so exciting.
Version1:
Kingsnake sculpted the sand.  She hissed the
sun to shine and the clouds to part.
 
Version 2:
Kingsnake sculpted the sand and hissed the
sun to shine and the clouds to part.
 
Version 3:
Kingsnake sculpted the sand, hissed the sun to
shine and the clouds to part.
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I’m going to choose my snake … So I looked to see what animals
live in the desert and I chose the snake but I wanted a specific
snake.  So I chose the Kingsnake  - so already the name’s telling
me I’m in charge, I’m the boss.
I like that - 
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to shine and
the clouds to
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the stars to life
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the sun to shine
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ands
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want to refine
them?
Age 10-11
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Teachers’ Subject Knowledge
Teachers’ Subject Knowledge
Shulman (1987) stresses the importance of subject knowledge and
distinguishes between
SCK: subject content knowledge (knowledge of an academic domain);
PCK: pedagogical content knowledge (knowledge of how to teach that
academic domain);
PK: pedagogical knowledge (knowledge of how to teach).
Our approach to creative grammar teaching requires good subject knowledge:
SCK: strong grammar knowledge;
SCK: an ability to analyse texts and notice how they are ‘working’
grammatically to create meanings;
PCK/PK: The ability to plan purposefully, integrating an attention to grammar
within teaching units.
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Our Evidence
Our Evidence
Robust evidence that our approach to teaching grammar can improve children’s
writing;
It is important to be aware that what can work may not always work in complex
classroom situations – not a quick fix solution;
The importance of metalinguistic modelling and metalinguistic talk is becoming
apparent, and is ripe for further research;
How children develop conceptual understanding of a grammatical concept is
under-researched – our research shows the link between the nature of teaching
explanations and the learning which ensues
Future Directions for Research
Future Directions for Research
Investigating conceptual development of linguistic knowledge;
Investigating ‘transfer’ on a larger scale: how what is taught is realised in children’s
writing;
How the pedagogy works for EAL and L2 learners;
The role of grammatical metalanguage
Inter-relationship with SFL
Metalinguistic modelling
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Rethinking the role of grammar in education, this discussion explores the shift in focus from learning product to learning process, driven by concerns about English teaching. The evolution of grammar teaching post-Dartmouth Conference is examined, highlighting the ongoing debate between grammar for error correction versus grammar for creativity. The National Curriculum in England emphasizes the teaching of grammar to enhance language control and usage, promoting Standard English while allowing for teacher creativity.

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  1. Grammar as Choice: Re-thinking Grammar as a tool for learning Debra Myhill

  2. GRAMMAR IN THE CURRICULUM

  3. Grammar: in Anglophone countries Dartmouth Conference (US) 1966: a meeting of about 50 educationalists, largely from the UK and US for a 3 week seminar on English teaching; driven by growing concerns about the teaching of English; focused very heavily on writing and grammar; The outcome was a shift in attention from learning product to learning process, and other changes based on the British growth model for viewing the discipline of English (Smagorinsky 2002:23). Thus, a seminal moment for grammar as it triggered a large-scale rejection of grammar teaching by educationalists and teachers.

  4. Grammar: in Anglophone countries Since the Dartmouth conference, for over 50 years, the role of grammar in language learning has divided professional and policymaker perspectives: grammar does not help language users to use language better; grammar is about error correction and accuracy; grammar and creativity are opposed: grammar = rules; creativity = freedom; grammar is the cure for social ills! Generally more ideological than informed debate. Nothing helps your writing so much as ignoring grammar (Elbow 1981)

  5. National Curriculum 2014: England Pupils should be taught to control their speaking and writing consciously and to use Standard English. They should be taught to use the elements of spelling, grammar, punctuation and language about language listed. This is not intended to constrain or restrict teachers creativity, but simply to provide the structure on which they can construct exciting lessons. A non-statutory Glossary of terms is provided for teachers. Throughout the programmes of study, teachers should teach pupils the vocabulary they need to discuss their reading, writing and spoken language. It is important that pupils learn the correct grammatical terms in English and that these terms are integrated within teaching.

  6. National Curriculum: England The grammar of our first language is learnt naturally and implicitly through interactions with other speakers and from reading. Explicit knowledge of grammar is, however, very important, as it gives us more conscious control and choice in our language. Building this knowledge is best achieved through a focus on grammar within the teaching of reading, writing and speaking. Once pupils are familiar with a grammatical concept [for example modalverb ], they should be encouraged to apply and explore this concept in the grammar of their own speech and writing and to note where it is used by others. Young pupils, in particular, use more complex language in speech than in writing, and teachers should build on this, aiming for a smooth transition to sophisticated writing.

  7. NC: KEY STAGE 3 Read critically: knowing how language, including figurative language, grammar, text structure and organisational features present meaning; Write accurately, fluently, effectively and at length through: applying their growing knowledge of vocabulary, grammar and text structure to their writing and selecting the appropriate form; drawing on knowledge of literary rhetorical devices from their reading and listening to enhance the impact of their writing; amending the grammar and structure of their writing to improve its coherence and overall effectiveness Consolidate and build on their knowledge of grammar and vocabulary through: studying the effectiveness and impact of the grammatical features of the texts they read drawing on new vocabulary and grammatical constructions from their reading and listening, and using these consciously in their writing and speech to achieve particular effects

  8. Grammar in the US Common Core Language Standard 1 requires command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking Language Standard 2 requires command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing . Language Standard 3 requires students to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening , and that students must also be able to make informed, skilful choices among the many ways to express themselves through language (CCSSI 2012).

  9. Grammar in the Australian Curriculum Element 1: Language: Knowledge about the English language: a coherent, dynamic, and evolving body of knowledge about the English language and how it works. (ACARA 2009:1). The goal of teaching grammar and textual patterns should go beyond students labelling of various grammatical categories; it should centre on goals such as clearer expression of thought, more convincing argumentation, more careful logic in reasoning, more coherence, precision, and imagination in speaking and writing, and knowing how to choose words and grammatical and textual structures that are more appropriate to the audience or readership. The goal here centres on the gradually more powerful conversion of knowledge about language into a resource for effective reading, listening, viewing, writing, speaking and designing. (ACARA 2009: 6) They need to be able to talk systematically in informed ways about the nature and consequences of the choices they have made in their expressions. (ACARA 2009:10)

  10. At the start of this new millennium, throughout much of the K-12 English curriculum, grammar is a broken subject Grammar is often ignored, broken off altogether from the teaching of literature, rhetoric, drama, composition, and creative writing. Grammar is the skunk at the garden party of the language arts. (Haussamen 2003 px)

  11. The Grammar Test: England

  12. Grammar in the Curriculum Why teach grammar? To understand the structure of your own language? To avoid making mistakes in speaking and writing your own language? To develop understanding about how texts work and make meaning? To make you a better reader and writer?

  13. RESEARCH ON GRAMMAR TEACHING

  14. Research on Grammar Teaching Meta-analyses: Braddock, Lloyd-Jones and Schoer (1963): he argued grammar had a harmful effect on the development of original writing (1963:37). Hillocks (1984) and Hillocks and Smith (1991) reiterated the view that there was no evidence for a beneficial effect. EPPI 2004: no evidence of any beneficial impact. Graham and Perin 2007: a negative effect for the explicit and systematic teaching of the parts of speech and structure of sentences (2007:21) Empirical Studies: No positive benefit: Bateman and Zidonis (1966); Elley, Barham and Lamb (1979): Fogel and Ehri (2000) Fearn and Farnan (2007): positive effect when grammar and writing share one instructional context (2007:16).

  15. Research on Grammar Teaching The body of empirical research is not strong and the same studies are cited in each successive meta-analysis. Weaknesses: The studies investigated teaching a grammar course and teaching writing separately The Bateman and Zidonis and Fogel and Ehri studies are very small scale. No studies, other than Fearn and Farnan, which investigated teaching grammar meaningfully in context of the teaching of writing No studies conducted in the UK educational context

  16. A THEORETICAL RATIONALE

  17. Prescriptive and Descriptive Models A prescriptivist theory of a grammar-writing relationship argues for the importance of grammar in securing correctness in written expression: how language should be used. A descriptivist theory of a grammar-writing relationship argues for the importance of investigating how grammar is used in different texts and contexts: how language is used. Accuracy in writing is necessary, but not sufficient to generate good writers. A descriptivist view illuminates how written text generates meaning in different contexts. .

  18. Tacit and Explicit Knowledge Tacit knowledge is intuitive and not tangible or verbalisable: eg recognising from a facial expression that someone is anxious; Explicit knowledge is codified, recordable, communicable and verbalisable: eg knowing how to change a tyre on a car. Tacit grammatical knowledge is the most important for being an effective language user and we acquire substantial tacit knowledge as we learn to speak eg young children who over-learn past tense in English and say we goed instead of we went . Explicit grammatical knowledge is accessible and usable grammatical knowledge eg an adjective provides more information about a noun. Explicit knowledge is learning knowledge: it can be used to develop greater understanding, to solve problems, to share thinking = pedagogically important.

  19. Functional Grammar Functional grammar enables us to show the grammar as a meaning-making resource and to describe grammatical categories by reference to what they mean an insightful mode of entry to the study of discourse (Halliday and Matthiessen 2004:10) Re-framing of grammar as more than a description of the structure of language but fundamentally as resource for meaning-making (Halliday 2003; 2004) Halliday sees language as a resource, a meaning-making system through which we interactively shape and interpret our world and ourselves (Derewianka and Jones 2010:9) knowing grammar is knowing how more than knowing what (Cameron 1997:236) How we write something is as important as what we write: making meaning.

  20. Grammar as Choice Carter and McCarthy (2006:7) conceive of grammar as having two strands: grammar as choice, as well as a grammar of structure. We can make explicit how choices of visual and verbal resources privilege certain view points and how other choices of visual and verbal resources could construct alternative views (Unsworth 2001:15) The grammatical choices we make, including pronoun use, active or passive verb constructions, and sentence patterns represent relations between writers and the world they live in. Word choice and sentence structure are an expression of the way we attend to the words of others, the way we position ourselves in relation to others. (Micciche 2004:719). Showing learners the grammatical choices writers make, and the grammatical choices they can make as writers, can alter the way their writing communicates and their understanding of the power of choice.

  21. An illustration Read both these sentences aloud can you hear how they emphasise different things and create different effects? The same words; the same narrative action; Different grammar; different effect 21

  22. Metalinguistic Understanding Those moments when users shift their attention from the transmitted contents to the properties of language used to transmit them (Cazden1976:3). the ability to take language as the object of observation and the referent of discourse (Camps and Milian1999:6). the explicit bringing into consciousness of an attention to language as an artifact, and the conscious monitoring and manipulation of language to create desired meanings grounded in socially shared understandings (Myhill 2012:250). Metasemiosis is reflection on meaning making; it is meta to processes of meaning- making and, to that extent, is always more or less abstract. (Macken-Horarik 2016) A theorised view of the pedagogical importance of explicit grammatical knowledge and of grammar as a meaning-making resource affording choice develops learners metalinguistic understanding.

  23. Grammar and Writing The challenge of learning to write and be an effective writer requires increasing metalinguistic understanding about writing, yet: research has scarcely addressed metalinguistic understanding in the context of writing (except in relation to early years writing development); there is limited understanding of how older writers, beyond the early years, develop metalinguistic understanding about writing; there is limited investigation of how teachers foster metalinguistic understanding for writing and the instructional interactions which facilitate this.

  24. Repertoires of Infinite Possibility Writing is always an act of decision-making and making choices (Kellogg 2008) Decisions about storyline, argument, character, title, structure, message, phrasing, words, font, layout Our research: focuses on the language choices and decisions writers make. emphasises how choice develops independence and autonomy as a writer develops an awareness of a repertoire of infinite possibility

  25. OUR RESEARCH

  26. Our Research A different perspective: A fully theorised rationale for grammar in the curriculum A corresponding pedagogical model Founded on robust empirical studies

  27. The Exeter Approach The Curriculum Context Teaching children how to label grammar in a sentence does not empower the to communicate more effectively in writing The Way Forward Integrate explicit grammar meaningfully into the teaching of reading and writing Show learners how the grammatical choices they make can alter the way their writing communicates and their understanding of the power of choice Develop learners metalinguistic understanding about writing with the goal of transferring that understanding into their own writing.

  28. Our Research Evidence Study 1: Randomised Controlled Trial (RCT) 32 classes of 12-13 year olds - intervention group improved by 20% compared with 11% in control group; significant positive effect; Study 2: Quasi-experimental study investigating the approach with 12-13 year old weak writers: positive effect Study 3: Quasi-experimental study, with 14-15 year olds looking at impact of the approach on reading comprehension as well as writing: positive effect for both but even stronger for reading comprehension. Study 4: RCT with 54 primary schools (9-10 year olds): positive effect - found two months additional progress for the intervention group * Study 5: RCT with 9-10 year olds: positive effect (regional study); Study 6: Longitudinal study over 3 years of how students develop metalinguistic understanding: conceptual development; application in writing; relationship between teaching and student learning. Study 7: (ongoing) repeat RCT with 150 primary schools

  29. EEF Reporting of the Same Study Grammar for Writing is not effective in improving general writing among Year 6 pupils when delivered as a whole class intervention over four weeks. (2014) Grammar for Writing was previously found to have a whole class impact of 2 months progress (2016)

  30. UNDERSTANDING THE PEDAGOGY

  31. FourLEAD LEADPedagogical Principles D DISCUSSION: Build in high-quality discussion about grammar and its effects. To draw on the substantial body of research emphasising the importance of talk for learning; To acknowledge that writing floats on a sea of talk ; To develop verbalisable explicit knowledge about the effects created by particular grammatical choices; To support learner independence and autonomy

  32. showing learners how grammatical choices create different effects in different texts LINK showing learners real examples of grammatical choices making particular effect Metalinguistic Understanding: explicit knowledge about language EXAMPLES showing learners how grammatical choices are made in particular contexts AUTHENTIC TEXTS helping learners verbalise the relationship between grammatical choices and their effects in particular contexts TALK

  33. What might you draw attention to grammatically in this text as an example of an argument text? Think of a new crayon colour and what the crayon s complaint might be? Write a new letter to Duncan outlining your complaint.

  34. CONCEPTUAL DEVELOPMENT OF GRAMMAR TERMINOLOGY

  35. A Story of Clauses Children are much more secure with word class concepts than with syntax and clauses mirroring their teachers subject knowledge Teachers provide semantic explanations to grammatical concepts which avoid the core grammatical principles eg Clauses - add more detail; make sense on their own; drop in Children use these semantic explanations to engage in grammatical reasoning but come to mistaken conclusions because the input was unhelpful

  36. Relative Clauses Drop In It s a drop in clause, you drop in extra information and about detail, if you take it out. it still makes sense but if you put it back in, it still does make sense, some more detail in. If you say like the floor you could do it, you could put a drop within the clause so you can make it like the burning hot floor I: Now you talked about drop in clauses, what s a drop in clause? S: Isn t it when you sort of, when you put more information into your sentences that you d put commas to show that it is.

  37. It makes sense on its own A subordinate clause isn t supposed to make sense and the main clause is supposed to make sense, and then you join them with like a word like because or while . A subordinating clause is you have to put it with a compound sentence to make it make sense because if you put a subordinating clause by itself it doesn t make sense. Well, If it was a complex sentence you know if you ve written a main clause because it would make sense on its own and you know if you ve written a subordinate clause because it wouldn t have made sense on its own. Is a subordinate clause a sentence that doesn t make sense on its own? Is it the beginning of a sentence that doesn t make sense without the ending?

  38. Extra information I think subordinate clause is where it s short but you have detail in it, and relative clause is where, it s got a lot of detail but it s still really short. and clause is like a sentence where it s getting more dramatic I think that is a relative clause because you could say We called it the garage because that s what the estate agent called it or you could have it We called it the garage because that s what the estate agent, Mr Stone, called it so it s adding more information. I think when you want to like put more detail into your writing you put clauses. A clause is when you drop something into the sentence to add more detail. I: If you ve got your dog; The black dog is running can you drop something in? S: The black dog is running over the top, the peak of the mountain. I: so what would be the clause there? S: peak of the mountain .

  39. Commas A relative clause is when you have a sentence and then you put a comma somewhere in the sentence and then you add in information, then you put another comma and it still makes sense without the information or with the information in it. The main clause is a simple sentence that will make sense on its own and the subordinate clause is, either comes after a comma and it would just add a bit more detail into the main clause And isn t a clause like where you have a sentence like Bob went to the shops (comma) to get some sweets then a full stop. This bit is a subordinate clause, this bit after the comma: Stone led us down the garden, tugged the door open and shone his little torch into the gloom There would be clauses if I put the commas in.

  40. Reasoning Stone led us down the garden, tugged the door open and shone his torch into the gloom. Stone let us down the garden that s a main clause because if you put a full stop there Stone led us down the garden then it has tugged the door open is a subordinate clause because it won t make sense on its own and it s there for extra information. Unexpectedly, my board fell away from my feet, leaving me filled with desperation and freefalling into the unknown. Well it s kind of got three because you ve got Unexpectedly that s like yeah it s not exactly going to make sense so I guess it s another subordinate clause and then you ve got the main clause and then another subordinate clause. I m not sure if you can do that.

  41. Conceptual Development Because grammatical explanations are difficult, teachers are mediating by creating alternative explanations, which draw attention to semantic aspects of sentences or proxy markers such as commas. More support/development is needed in how best to explain grammar concepts. Some confused answers by students may simply be the challenging of verbalising the concept: some could correctly identify it. For others the confusion is more fundamentally problematic as they are developing substantial misunderstandings.

  42. METALINGUISTIC MODELLING

  43. Metalinguistic Modelling Metacognitive modelling of writing: where teachers share their own writing and verbalise their thinking during text production Fisher (2002) found very few instances of metacognitive modelling; she argued that it is thinking that needs to be modelled not task completion; teachers were more likely to model the process than the thinking going on during the process . Metacognitive modelling can be about linguistic choices, but could also be about plot decisions, argument points, characterisation etc Metalinguistic modelling: where teachers model their thinking, as they write, aiming to help young writers understand the linguistic decision-making and the repertoire of choices available to them Teacher modelling using his/her own writing Teacher modelling using a published text as a model, or mentor text. 43

  44. Teacher Modelling of Metatalk Teacher: That I love - you've put the subject much further on, and I was left waiting for what you were going to say. Teacher: A giant of a man rode in on a towering warhorse? Pawed the ground? Tossing its fine head. Froze the courage in a man's veins. We've got verbs that tell us...? His actions are firm and decisive ... a confident man The horse seems aggressive, tossing and snorting, and ready to fight. The way that Michael Morpurgo is choosing the language has shown us that the horse is angry, he didn't write "the horse is angry Student: Student: Teacher:

  45. Teacher Modelling of Metatalk Modelling based on own writing Though I have to say when I was reading back through it this morning - As I gazed towards the entrance of the maze it was deadly quiet - I wondered if I wanted to go for eerily quiet instead. I wondered if that would give more of a sort of mystic vibe to it? Modelling based on response to student writing So you've delayed your subject: you leave the reader waiting, but hooked, to see what is the character. Modelling based on explicitness in task setting As a writer, you can make that decision, can't you, as to which one sounds the best. It doesn't happen by accident, writers make that choice, and you have that choice: if you know that you can put your adjectives before your noun or after.

  46. Teacher Questioning [discussing a subject-verb inversion] Teacher: Why is that such a good sentence? Student: They ve described it well. Teacher: Yes he has - but from the reader s point of view, what s just happened? Student: He s made the reader wait. Teacher: Good, but how has he done that, what has he done? Student: He put the ring of fine gold at the end. Not until the end of the sentence do we find out what it is.

  47. Missed Opportunities Student:She s got too many bigs Teacher:Overuse of the word big . Who can think of different words we could have instead of big ? Student: Enormous. Student: Gigantic. Teacher: Gigantic. Student: Massive. Teacher: Massive. Student: Colossal. Teacher: Colossal. Student: Huge. Teacher: Huge. Student: Grand. Teacher: Grand. Student: Humungous. Teacher: Humungous. Student: Vast. Teacher: Vast. Student: Large. Teacher: Large. Teacher:So, whoever s writing that was, I hope they ve now got a few ideas for how they can level up. Teacher: Enormous.

  48. Missed Opportunities Student: Teacher: That is Excalibur. That s the one I was thinking of. That is Excalibur impact! Teacher: Some amazing post-modification going on there impressive! Student: Teacher: Rusty old casket Fantastic adjectives Teacher: Yes, so which way has she post-modified that one washed in lava A non-finite clause It s just those little bits of detail that makes your writing so delicious, and so exciting. Student: Teacher:

  49. Age 10-11 I m going to choose my snake So I looked to see what animals live in the desert and I chose the snake but I wanted a specific snake. So I chose the Kingsnake - so already the name s telling me I m in charge, I m the boss. sculpted so she s shaping, she s building, she s creating so I think I m going to have my snake hissing -she hissed the stars to life - or because I m in the desert - she hissed the sun to shine Version1: Kingsnake sculpted the sand. She hissed the sun to shine and the clouds to part. I like that - She hissed the sun to shine and the clouds to part -lovely. Version 2: Kingsnake sculpted the sand and hissed the sun to shine and the clouds to part. I m going to take out that she it s bit clumsy did you hear that? Are you happy with all those ands or do you want to refine them? Version 3: Kingsnake sculpted the sand, hissed the sun to shine and the clouds to part. 12 minutes 49

  50. THE SIGNIFICANCE OF TEACHER SUBJECT KNOWLEDGE

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