Effective Strategies for Expanding an Abstract to a Comprehensive Research Paper

How to expand an abstract to a
full paper ?
WM Tilakaratne
Dean/Faculty of Dental Sciences
University of Peradeniya
 
Why most research end up as abstracts only?
 
Not enough science!
Study was planned just to produce an abstract for
a meeting
Just to increase the list of publications
No facilities to improve the study further
Critics at the conference
Research team is not working as a productive
team
No time, no funding etc
 
What is good science reporting?
 
Adhere to international publishing guidelines
Use correct reporting guidelines for the
study/paper
Adhere to accepted reporting conventions, eg:
IMRaD
Good literature review; clear study Q
Methods, results & answer clearly linked to Q
Complete data reported for study type, EBM
principles etc
Objective, transparent, methodical, ethical
Relate all of IMRaD to the study
question
 
STUDY
QUESTION
Introduction
Methods
Results
Discussion
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
Show you’re a good scientist
 
           
Be objective, transparent, methodical, ethical
 
Objective: do not report intuition, unbacked facts, emotionally,
prejudicially
 
Transparent: state all funding; research, statistical, writing, and
artwork assistance; donated materials; any ties with industry
 
Methodical: make sure all variables are explained, all study
questions are answered fully
 
Ethical: Institutional Review Board approval, Animal Ethics
Committee approval, Helsinki Declaration, Patient Consent for
research, Patient Consent for publication
The 22 steps of manuscript writing and
submission
 
Ask “Is it the right time to write?”
Clarify messages and conclusions by preparing
draft tables/figures, with titles/footnotes and
key messages highlighted; ask colleagues and
supervisor for critical review
Decide who will be co-authors; decide who
else will help (statistician, etc) and thank them
in the Acknowledgements
The 22 steps of manuscript writing and
submission
 
Consider the ethics of scientific publication;
consult international guidelines
Relate your conclusions to the existing body of
knowledge
Write a working title and abstract
Choose the target journal and make notes on
the Information for Authors
The 22 steps of manuscript writing and
submission
 
Name the main sections of the paper
Gather information in Ideas-Folders, in IMRaD
order
Arrange contents of Ideas-Folders
Finalise the design & content of tables/figures,
and messages
Make a topic outline and then a sentence
outline, for each section of IMRaD
The 22 steps of manuscript writing and
submission
 
Write a first draft continuously, collecting
relevant references as you go
See if the first draft needs major alterations,
paraphrase without plagiarism
Prepare illustrations in final form for target
journal
Polish prose and content: edit for meaning
and style
The 22 steps of manuscript writing and
submission
 
Rewrite the title and abstract; check all extra
sections (references, acknowledgements,
financial disclosures)
Request private review by independent critics,
as well as by co-authors, statistician, etc
Re-read Information for Authors and make
necessary adjustments
The 22 steps of manuscript writing and
submission
 
Revise as many times as necessary
Submit the paper with all necessary
documents & cover letter
Analyse editor’s decision letter and respond
appropriately
 
What reviewers look for:
Why do good journals have an acceptance rate of only about
10%?
 
Limited space in paper journal
Originality and newsworthiness
Relevant /useful for changing practice and
improving lives
Needs to fit in with journal’s scope and target
audience
Good evidence to add to growing evidence base
Best quality of reporting, flawless, convincing,
reader-friendly
Top 10 reasons for rejection
 
(1)
Inappropriate or incomplete statistics
 
(2)
Over interpretation of results
 
(3)
Inappropriate or suboptimal instrumentation
 
(4)
Sample too small or biased
 
(5) Text difficult to follow
Top 10 reasons for rejection
 
(6)
Insufficient problem statement
 
(7)
Inaccurate or inconsistent data reported
 
(8)  Incomplete, inaccurate, or outdated literature
       review
 
(9)
Insufficient data presented
 
(10) Defective tables or figures
Top 10 reasons for not getting
published
 
(1)
 
Failure to write/submit full paper after
          presenting abstract
(2)
    Failure to revise and resubmit after peer
          review
(3)
 
Poor study design
(4)
 
Inadequate description of Methods
(5)
 
Suboptimal reporting of Results
Top 10 reasons for not getting
published
 
(6)
 
Getting carried away in Discussion
(7)
 
Poor writing
(8)
    Not following manuscript preparation
          instructions
(9)
 
Submitting in a format not matching to journal
(10)
 
Picking wrong journal
Preparation and submission tips
Important topic
Good study design
Good presentation of study and findings
Good interpretation of findings
Preparation and submission tips
 
Bad topic
 
Bad study design
 
Bad presentation
 
Bad interpretation
Bad topic
 
Present already established facts
Insignificant research question
Irrelevant or unimportant topic
Low reader interest
Not generalizable
Bad study design
 
Poor experimental design
Vague/inadequate description of methods
Methods lack sufficient rigor, poor statistical
methods
Failure to account for confounders
No or improper control, small sample
No hypothesis, biased protocol
Bad presentation
 
Poor organization
Too long and verbose
Failure to communicate clearly
Poor grammar, syntax, spelling
Excessively self-promotional
Poorly written abstract
Bad interpretation
 
Conclusions erroneous or unsupported or
disproportionate to results; inflated importance
Study design does not support inferences;
discordance
Inadequate link of findings to practice
Uncritical acceptance of statistical results; no
alternatives
Unexplained inconsistencies
Discussion inadequate or too long
Finally;
 
 
Discuss with co-authors who will do what; keep records and
backups
Satisfy and match the immediate reader (reviewers) and final
readers
Pre-empt how the reader may misinterpret the material:
remove all ambiguities; pre-empt and answer their queries
Add signposts and signals to help the reader navigate your
paper
Include key and up-to-date references; synthesize and critique
(not just present) other work in the Introduction and Discussion
Reference correctly; do not plagiarise (journal offices’ software
will detect this)
Do not commit fraud or other unethical sins akin to
plagiarism
Thank you
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Learn how to transition from a concise abstract to a detailed research paper effectively. Understand the key reasons why research often remains limited to abstracts and explore the significance of thorough science reporting. Discover essential steps in manuscript writing and submission to enhance the quality of your research work.

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  • Manuscript writing
  • Abstract expansion
  • Effective communication

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  1. How to expand an abstract to a full paper ? WM Tilakaratne Dean/Faculty of Dental Sciences University of Peradeniya

  2. Why most research end up as abstracts only? Not enough science! Study was planned just to produce an abstract for a meeting Just to increase the list of publications No facilities to improve the study further Critics at the conference Research team is not working as a productive team No time, no funding etc

  3. What is good science reporting? Adhere to international publishing guidelines Use correct reporting guidelines for the study/paper Adhere to accepted reporting conventions, eg: IMRaD Good literature review; clear study Q Methods, results & answer clearly linked to Q Complete data reported for study type, EBM principles etc Objective, transparent, methodical, ethical

  4. Relate all of IMRaD to the study question Methods Introduction ? STUDY QUESTION ? ? ? Results Discussion

  5. Show youre a good scientist Be objective, transparent, methodical, ethical Objective: do not report intuition, unbacked facts, emotionally, prejudicially Transparent: state all funding; research, statistical, writing, and artwork assistance; donated materials; any ties with industry Methodical: make sure all variables are explained, all study questions are answered fully Ethical: Institutional Review Board approval, Animal Ethics Committee approval, Helsinki Declaration, Patient Consent for research, Patient Consent for publication

  6. The 22 steps of manuscript writing and submission Ask Is it the right time to write? Clarify messages and conclusions by preparing draft tables/figures, with titles/footnotes and key messages highlighted; ask colleagues and supervisor for critical review Decide who will be co-authors; decide who else will help (statistician, etc) and thank them in the Acknowledgements

  7. The 22 steps of manuscript writing and submission Consider the ethics of scientific publication; consult international guidelines Relate your conclusions to the existing body of knowledge Write a working title and abstract Choose the target journal and make notes on the Information for Authors

  8. The 22 steps of manuscript writing and submission Name the main sections of the paper Gather information in Ideas-Folders, in IMRaD order Arrange contents of Ideas-Folders Finalise the design & content of tables/figures, and messages Make a topic outline and then a sentence outline, for each section of IMRaD

  9. The 22 steps of manuscript writing and submission Write a first draft continuously, collecting relevant references as you go See if the first draft needs major alterations, paraphrase without plagiarism Prepare illustrations in final form for target journal Polish prose and content: edit for meaning and style

  10. The 22 steps of manuscript writing and submission Rewrite the title and abstract; check all extra sections (references, acknowledgements, financial disclosures) Request private review by independent critics, as well as by co-authors, statistician, etc Re-read Information for Authors and make necessary adjustments

  11. The 22 steps of manuscript writing and submission Revise as many times as necessary Submit the paper with all necessary documents & cover letter Analyse editor s decision letter and respond appropriately

  12. What reviewers look for: Why do good journals have an acceptance rate of only about 10%? Limited space in paper journal Originality and newsworthiness Relevant /useful for changing practice and improving lives Needs to fit in with journal s scope and target audience Good evidence to add to growing evidence base Best quality of reporting, flawless, convincing, reader-friendly

  13. Top 10 reasons for rejection (1) Inappropriate or incomplete statistics (2) Over interpretation of results (3) Inappropriate or suboptimal instrumentation (4) Sample too small or biased (5) Text difficult to follow

  14. Top 10 reasons for rejection (6) Insufficient problem statement (7) Inaccurate or inconsistent data reported (8) Incomplete, inaccurate, or outdated literature review (9) Insufficient data presented (10) Defective tables or figures

  15. Top 10 reasons for not getting published (1) (2) Failure to revise and resubmit after peer review (3) Poor study design (4) Inadequate description of Methods (5) Suboptimal reporting of Results Failure to write/submit full paper after presenting abstract

  16. Top 10 reasons for not getting published (6) (7) (8) Not following manuscript preparation instructions (9) Submitting in a format not matching to journal (10) Picking wrong journal Getting carried away in Discussion Poor writing

  17. Preparation and submission tips Important topic Good study design Good presentation of study and findings Good interpretation of findings

  18. Preparation and submission tips Bad topic Bad study design Bad presentation Bad interpretation

  19. Bad topic Present already established facts Insignificant research question Irrelevant or unimportant topic Low reader interest Not generalizable

  20. Bad study design Poor experimental design Vague/inadequate description of methods Methods lack sufficient rigor, poor statistical methods Failure to account for confounders No or improper control, small sample No hypothesis, biased protocol

  21. Bad presentation Poor organization Too long and verbose Failure to communicate clearly Poor grammar, syntax, spelling Excessively self-promotional Poorly written abstract

  22. Bad interpretation Conclusions erroneous or unsupported or disproportionate to results; inflated importance Study design does not support inferences; discordance Inadequate link of findings to practice Uncritical acceptance of statistical results; no alternatives Unexplained inconsistencies Discussion inadequate or too long

  23. Finally; Discuss with co-authors who will do what; keep records and backups Satisfy and match the immediate reader (reviewers) and final readers Pre-empt how the reader may misinterpret the material: remove all ambiguities; pre-empt and answer their queries Add signposts and signals to help the reader navigate your paper Include key and up-to-date references; synthesize and critique (not just present) other work in the Introduction and Discussion Reference correctly; do not plagiarise (journal offices software will detect this) Do not commit fraud or other unethical sins akin to plagiarism

  24. Thank you

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