Importance of Putting Away Bristle Blocks for Safety and Organization

In a series of slides addressed to Lina, the importance of putting away Bristle Blocks after playtime is emphasized. The blocks, being pointy, can cause harm if left out. Instances of injury and frustration due to untidiness are highlighted, urging Lina to clean up for safety and organization. The slides follow a structured argument with reasons and evidence supporting the thesis. Through a mother's caring words, the message is clear: storing toys properly is essential for a safe and enjoyable play environment.

• Safety
• Organization
• Children
• Toys
• Parenting

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1. Argument Stages Writing Week 6, Day 1

2. Slide 1 September 28, 2017 Dear Lina, You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. The blocks are very pointy, and they can hurt people s feet. When you stepped on a block the other day, you fell over crying because it hurt so much and left a mark on your foot! When you don t put away the Bristle Blocks, you have a hard time finding what you need. Last time you wanted to build, you were frustrated because you could not find enough blocks to build the house you were imagining. Please remember to clean up the Bristle Blocks. You will protect the family s feet and be able to find everything you need to play! Love, Mommy

3. Slide 2 September 28, 2017 Dear Lina, You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. The blocks are very pointy, and they can hurt people s feet. When you stepped on a block the other day, you fell over crying because it hurt so much and left a mark on your foot! When you don t put away the Bristle Blocks, you have a hard time finding what you need. Last time you wanted to build, you were frustrated because you could not find enough blocks to build the house you were imagining. Please remember to clean up the Bristle Blocks. You will protect the family s feet and be able to find everything you need to play! Love, Mommy

4. Slide 3 Stages Thesis: You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. Reason: Reason: Evidence: Evidence: Reinforcement of the Thesis:

5. Slide 4 September 28, 2017 Dear Lina, You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. The blocks are very pointy, and they can hurt people s feet. When you stepped on a block the other day, you fell over crying because it hurt so much and left a mark on your foot! When you don t put away the Bristle Blocks, you have a hard time finding what you need. Last time you wanted to build, you were frustrated because you could not find enough blocks to build the house you were imagining. Please remember to clean up the Bristle Blocks. You will protect the family s feet and be able to find everything you need to play! Love, Mommy

6. Slide 5 Stages Thesis: You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. Reason: The blocks are pointy and can hurt people s feet. Reason: Evidence: You fell over crying when you stepped on a block the other day. Evidence: Reinforcement of the Thesis:

7. Slide 6 September 28, 2017 Dear Lina, You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. The blocks are very pointy, and they can hurt people s feet. When you stepped on a block the other day, you fell over crying because it hurt so much and left a mark on your foot! When you don t put away the Bristle Blocks, you have a hard time finding what you need. Last time you wanted to build, you were frustrated because you could not find enough blocks to build the house you were imagining. Please remember to clean up the Bristle Blocks. You will protect the family s feet and be able to find everything you need to play! Love, Mommy

8. Slide 7 Stages Thesis: You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. Reason: The blocks are pointy and can hurt people s feet. Reason: When the blocks are not put away, you can t find what you need. Evidence: You fell over crying when you stepped on a block the other day. Evidence: You couldn t find all the blocks you needed to build a house. Reinforcement of the Thesis:

9. Slide 8 September 28, 2017 Dear Lina, You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. The blocks are very pointy, and they can hurt people s feet. When you stepped on a block the other day, you fell over crying because it hurt so much and left a mark on your foot! When you don t put away the Bristle Blocks, you have a hard time finding what you need. Last time you wanted to build, you were frustrated because you could not find enough blocks to build the house you were imagining. Please remember to clean up the Bristle Blocks. You will protect the family s feet and be able to find everything you need to play! Love, Mommy

10. Slide 9 Stages Thesis: You should put away your Bristle Blocks when you are done playing with them. Reason: The blocks are pointy and can hurt people s feet. Reason: When the blocks are not put away, you can t find what you need. Evidence: You fell over crying when you stepped on a block the other day. Evidence: You couldn t find all the blocks you needed to build a house. Reinforcement of the Thesis: Please remember to clean up the Bristle Blocks. You will protect the family s feet and be able to find everything you need to play!