Unseen Poetry Revision: Exploring Literary Texts, Devices, and Contexts

Please have your planner open on today’s
date
Date: Monday, 08 June 2020
Title: Unseen Poetry Revision
Q1. What are the literature texts that you have studied?
Q2. How many of the 15 Power and Conflict Poems can
you remember?
Q3. List 5 devices that you might look for in a poem.
Q4. List 4 contextual factors associated with Victorian
Literature.
Learning Focus:
To revise unseen poetry.
 
Learning Outcomes:
 
Analyse the effect of language, structure and form
Compare the effect of poetic methods
 
 
 
Engagement
‘spools of suffering
set out in ordered
rows.’
‘till gradually we too
learned to be silent,
to live as though he
had never returned.’
 
Look carefully at these Power &
Conflict quotations. On a post-it-note
can you write the poet’s concept and
message? Can you limit it to 50
words?
Be prepared to share your answer.
What do these words mean?
 
Which do you need to look up?
 
Which do you need to log?
 
As you consider the poems today, think
about which words are most
appropriate.
 
V
o
c
a
b
u
l
a
r
y
 
C
h
a
l
l
e
n
g
e
heaviness
confined
perturbed
despondent
 dissatisfied
 discontented
 
What is a concept?
 
 
 
 
 
         
Woman
Work
‘call my
own’
‘children to
tend.’
‘shine on
me’
Pre-reading activity
sick
cane
rain
food
cotton
 
 
 
 
 
 
You now have 5 minutes to MAGPIE speak to
your closest partner, sharing your ideas
about what you predict the poem will be
about. Please record your best findings in
your English booklet.
Mr Verity’s tip
: Speak to at least 2 other
students in the class!
Woman Work
I've got the children to tend
The clothes to mend
The floor to mop
The food to shop
Then the chicken to fry
The baby to dry
I got company to feed
The garden to weed
I've got shirts to press
The tots to dress
The cane to be cut
I gotta clean up this hut
Then see about the sick
And the cotton to pick.
Shine on me, sunshine
Rain on me, rain
Fall softly, dewdrops
And cool my brow again.
Storm, blow me from here
With your fiercest wind
Let me float across the sky
'Til I can rest again.
Fall gently, snowflakes
Cover me with white
Cold icy kisses and
Let me rest tonight.
Sun, rain, curving sky
Mountain, oceans, leaf and stone
Star shine, moon glow
You're all that I can call my own.
Let’s read 
Woman Work
.
Remember, you will get limited contextual detail in the
real unseen exam. However, Maya Angelou is a fantastic
writer and I want to share a few things about her.
An acclaimed American poet, storyteller, activist, and auto
biographer, Maya Angelou was born Marguerite Johnson
in St. Louis, Missouri, USA. Angelou had a broad career as
a singer, dancer, actress, composer, and Hollywood’s first
female black director, but became most famous as a
writer, editor, essayist, playwright, and poet. As a civil
rights activist, Angelou worked for Dr. Martin Luther King
Jr. and Malcolm X. She was also an educator and served as
the Reynolds professor of American Studies at Wake
Forest University.
Read the poem for the
first
 time.
What is the 
general
meaning
?
Woman Work
 
I've got the children to tend
The clothes to mend
The floor to mop
The food to shop
Then the chicken to fry
The baby to dry
I got company to feed
The garden to weed
I've got shirts to press
The tots to dress
The cane to be cut
I gotta clean up this hut
Then see about the sick
And the cotton to pick.
 
Let’s annotate together
Let’s annotate together
Read the poem for the
first
 time.
What is the 
general
meaning
?
Shine on me, sunshine
Rain on me, rain
Fall softly, dewdrops
And cool my brow again.
Storm, blow me from here
With your fiercest wind
Let me float across the sky
'Til I can rest again.
 
Let’s annotate together
Let’s annotate together
Read the poem for the
first
 time.
What is the 
general
meaning
?
Fall gently, snowflakes
Cover me with white
Cold icy kisses and
Let me rest tonight.
Sun, rain, curving sky
Mountain, oceans, leaf and stone
Star shine, moon glow
You're all that I can call my own.
 
Let’s annotate together
Let’s annotate together
 
 
 
 
 
‘Sun, rain, curving sky
Mountain, oceans, leaf and stone
Star shine, moon glow
You're all that I can call my own
.’
 
Why has Mr Verity chosen this
quotation as being a key,
important moment?
             
Challenge
:
Can you explain what method
the poet has used?
 
 
 
 
 
 
Now, re-read the poem slowly and
carefully, highlighting and
annotating as you go. Try and
answer the following questions as
you analyse the poem together:
D
e
e
p
 
r
e
a
d
 
What is the poem’s message and why did the poet write the
poem?
Who is speaking in the poem and how does the speaker
feel?
What is the tone of the poem? (mood)
How does the poet make the reader feel?
Which quotations help you understand the poem’s
message? (Highlight these)
Can you identify any language or structural methods used by
the poet?
Which key words literally jump off the page because they
give the reader important clues?
 
Think about the question.
Read the poem for the 
second 
time.
Begin to add to your annotations.
You might 
start to pick out methods
and layers of interpretation.
What key language/ structural
methods create impact?
How does
 the poet
present
 the
speaker’s feelings
about her life?
The writer feels like she does not have a second
to rest. The lack of punctuation throughout the
first stanza, as she discusses all of her chores
‘The floor to mop/ the food to shop’ creates a
sense of breathlessness. The enjambment
successfully highlights how the speaker of the
poem is overworked and has to relentlessly
complete many tasks. Additionally, the rhyming
couplets create a song-like quality and effectively
mirror the constant rhythm of the speaker’s life
and the fact that she has no time to stop. The
way that the first stanza is structured
effectively forces the reader to read the poem
with pace; this allows the reader to empathise
with the woman as they try to catch their breath.
 
Response 1
Response 1
The writer uses lots of verbs in the
first stanza. She talks about how she
has to ‘tend’, ‘mend’, ‘feed’ and ‘weed’.
The verbs highlight how she is always
doing something; she is never resting.
Additionally, the verbs are definitely
associated with jobs that are not
necessarily enjoyable. They are jobs
and chores that can be challenging.
 
Response 2
Response 2
Annotate these responses.
What is successful?
What could be improved?
Over to you.
You have 30 minutes to write
up your best three ideas.
TOP BAND CHECKLIST
-Relate to the 
buzz words 
of the question throughout
-Sophisticated style/ phrasing
-Strong evidence (is it embedded?)
-Identify techniques/ methods/ zoom in on key words
-Layers of interpretation (explore the effect)
…this is effective because…
…this successfully highlights…
…this strongly asserts that…
…this is particularly good at…
…this makes the reader feel…
…this creates a sense of…
-Writer’s didactic purpose
How does
 the
poet
 
present
the 
speaker’s
feelings 
about
her life?
 
 
TOP BAND CHECKLIST
-Relate to the 
buzz words 
of the question throughout
-Sophisticated style/ phrasing
-Strong evidence (is it embedded?)
-Identify techniques/ methods/ zoom in on key words
-Layers of interpretation (explore the effect)
…this is effective because…
…this successfully highlights…
…this strongly asserts that…
…this is particularly good at…
…this makes the reader feel…
…this creates a sense of…
-Writer’s didactic purpose
 
Comparing Unseen Poems.
Comparing Unseen Poems.
This is a short 8 mark question so it is important to:
 
Make all your comments comparative
Concentrate on the
 methods 
the two writers use
Focus carefully on the question you’re been asked.
 
No matter how well you have structured
No matter how well you have structured
your response, if you do not compare,
your response, if you do not compare,
you will get zero.
you will get zero.
Comparing
Comparing
In ‘Woman Work’, and ‘Over heard
in County Sligo’, the speakers
describe the lives they are living.
What are the similarities and/or
differences between the 
ways
 the
poets describe their
predicaments?
methods
Read ‘Overheard in County Sligo’ for the
first time so you get a general meaning.
Read it for the second time.
Begin to identify 2/3 key things.
Think about the Question.
Think about the first poem, ‘Woman Work’,
again. How are you going to make
comparisons?
What is the question asking you to do?
Use a comparative statement/word to open
your next paragraph then repeat the step
above for the second poem linking it to the
first.
 
Write a balanced response.
Read the poem for the
first
 time.
What is the 
general
meaning
?
Overheard in County Sligo
I married a man from County Roscommon
and I live in the back of beyond
with a field of cows and a yard of hens
and six white geese on the pond.
At my door’s a square of yellow corn
caught up by its corners and shaken,
and the road runs down through the open gate
and freedom’s there for the taking.
I had thought to work on the Abbey stage
or have my name in a book,
to see my thought on the printed page,
or still the crowd with a look.
 
Let’s read poem two
Let’s read poem two
and annotate together
and annotate together
 
The comparison
The comparison
   bit…
   bit…
Read the poem for the
first
 time.
What is the 
general
meaning
?
But I turn to fold the breakfast cloth
and to polish the lustre and brass,
to order and dust the tumbled rooms
and find my face in the glass.
I ought to feel I’m a happy woman
for I lie in the lap of the land,
but I married the man from County Roscommon
and I live at the back of beyond.
 
Let’s annotate together
Let’s annotate together
In ‘Woman Work’, and ‘Over heard in County Sligo’, the speakers describe the lives they are living. What are the
similarities and/or differences between the ways the poets describe their predicaments?
In both ‘Woman Work’ and
‘Overheard in County Sligo’ the
poets utilise structure to convey
how the women are feeling. The
BABA rhyming scheme mirrors
the speakers monotonous life
and how she feels trapped
whereas in ‘Woman Work’ the
enjambment and rhyming
couplets in the first stanza show
how the woman does not have
time to pause and rest.
In ‘Woman Work’ the speaker finds
salvation in the natural world towards
the end of the poem when it says ‘Fall
softly, dewdrops/And cool my brow
again.’ The writer presents the notion
that nature has the power to create a
sense of escapism and salvation for the
woman. However, in ‘Overheard in County
Sligo’ the woman is surrounded by nature
yet feels ‘trapped in the back of
beyond’; the speaker feels trapped in
her predicament, living on a farm and
her life isn’t how she anticipated it
would be.
 
1
1
 
2
2
Annotate these responses.
What is successful?
What could be improved?
Over to you.
You have 30 minutes to write
up your best three ideas.
TOP BAND CHECKLIST
-Relate to the 
buzz words 
of the question throughout
-Comparative structure throughout
-Compare the EFFECT of methods used
-Sophisticated style/ phrasing
-Strong evidence (is it embedded?)
-Identify techniques/ methods/ zoom in on key words
-Layers of interpretation (explore the effect)
…this is effective because…
…this successfully highlights…
…this strongly asserts that…
…this is particularly good at…
…this makes the reader feel…
…this creates a sense of…
In ‘Woman Work’, and ‘Over
heard in County Sligo’, the
speakers describe the lives
they are living. What are the
similarities and/or differences
between the ways the poets
describe their predicaments?
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Delve into the world of unseen poetry revision by analyzing literary texts, exploring poetic devices, and understanding contextual factors associated with Victorian Literature. Engage in vocabulary challenges, pre-reading activities, and discussions to enhance your understanding of poetry. Enhance your analytical skills to compare the effects of language, structure, and form in poetry.

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  • Revision
  • Literary Devices
  • Victorian Literature

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  1. Please have your planner open on todays date Planner Date: Monday, 08 June 2020 Title: Unseen Poetry Revision Copy Q1. What are the literature texts that you have studied? Q2. How many of the 15 Power and Conflict Poems can Do you remember? Q3. List 5 devices that you might look for in a poem. Q4. List 4 contextual factors associated with Victorian Literature.

  2. Learning Focus: To revise unseen poetry. Learning Outcomes: Analyse the effect of language, structure and form Compare the effect of poetic methods

  3. Engagement Look carefully at these Power & Conflict quotations. On a post-it-note can you write the poet s concept and message? Can you limit it to 50 words? Be prepared to share your answer.

  4. Vocabulary Challenge Vocabulary Challenge heaviness What do these words mean? confined Which do you need to look up? perturbed Which do you need to log? despondent As you consider the poems today, think about which words are most appropriate. dissatisfied discontented

  5. What is a concept?

  6. Pre-reading activity sick cotton Woman Work children to tend. rain cane shine on me call my own food

  7. You now have 5 minutes to MAGPIE speak to your closest partner, sharing your ideas about what you predict the poem will be about. Please record your best findings in your English booklet. Mr Verity s tip: Speak to at least 2 other students in the class!

  8. In the first poem, Woman Work, a black woman speaks about her life in the southern states of the USA. In the second poem, Overheard in County Sligo, a woman speaks about her life in Ireland. Woman Work Let s read Woman Work. I've got the children to tend The clothes to mend The floor to mop The food to shop Then the chicken to fry The baby to dry I got company to feed The garden to weed I've got shirts to press The tots to dress The cane to be cut I gotta clean up this hut Then see about the sick And the cotton to pick. Remember, you will get limited contextual detail in the real unseen exam. However, Maya Angelou is a fantastic writer and I want to share a few things about her. An acclaimed American poet, storyteller, activist, and auto biographer, Maya Angelou was born Marguerite Johnson in St. Louis, Missouri, USA. Angelou had a broad career as a singer, dancer, actress, composer, and Hollywood s first female black director, but became most famous as a writer, editor, essayist, playwright, and poet. As a civil rights activist, Angelou worked for Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. and Malcolm X. She was also an educator and served as the Reynolds professor of American Studies at Wake Forest University. Shine on me, sunshine Rain on me, rain Fall softly, dewdrops And cool my brow again. Storm, blow me from here With your fiercest wind Let me float across the sky 'Til I can rest again. Fall gently, snowflakes Cover me with white Cold icy kisses and Let me rest tonight. Sun, rain, curving sky Mountain, oceans, leaf and stone Star shine, moon glow You're all that I can call my own.

  9. Read the poem for the first time. What is the general meaning? Let s annotate together Woman Work I've got the children to tend The clothes to mend The floor to mop The food to shop Then the chicken to fry The baby to dry I got company to feed The garden to weed I've got shirts to press The tots to dress The cane to be cut I gotta clean up this hut Then see about the sick And the cotton to pick.

  10. Read the poem for the first time. What is the general meaning? Let s annotate together Shine on me, sunshine Rain on me, rain Fall softly, dewdrops And cool my brow again. Storm, blow me from here With your fiercest wind Let me float across the sky 'Til I can rest again.

  11. Read the poem for the first time. What is the general meaning? Let s annotate together Fall gently, snowflakes Cover me with white Cold icy kisses and Let me rest tonight. Sun, rain, curving sky Mountain, oceans, leaf and stone Star shine, moon glow You're all that I can call my own.

  12. Sun, rain, curving sky Mountain, oceans, leaf and stone Star shine, moon glow You're all that I can call my own. Why has Mr Verity chosen this quotation as being a key, important moment? Challenge: Can you explain what method the poet has used?

  13. Now, re-read the poem slowly and carefully, highlighting and annotating as you go. Try and answer the following questions as you analyse the poem together: Deep read Deep read What is the poem s message and why did the poet write the poem? Who is speaking in the poem and how does the speaker feel? What is the tone of the poem? (mood) How does the poet make the reader feel? Which quotations help you understand the poem s message? (Highlight these) Can you identify any language or structural methods used by the poet? Which key words literally jump off the page because they give the reader important clues?

  14. Think about the question. Read the poem for the second time. Begin to add to your annotations. How does the poet present the speaker s feelings about her life? You might start to pick out methods and layers of interpretation. What key language/ structural methods create impact? Think SMILE/METHODS. Does she use poetic devices like similes or metaphors to create images? Sensory language? Can you hear the sounds of words? Alliteration, assonance, sibilance? Lexical field of words? Structure like punctuation, line lengths, stanzas, sentence lengths etc. Tone of voice? Harsh or soft? Does it change?

  15. Response 1 Response 2 The writer feels like she does not have a second to rest. The lack of punctuation throughout the first stanza, as she discusses all of her chores The floor to mop/ the food to shop creates a sense of breathlessness. The enjambment successfully highlights how the speaker of the poem is overworked and has to relentlessly complete many tasks. Additionally, the rhyming couplets create a song-like quality and effectively mirror the constant rhythm of the speaker s life and the fact that she has no time to stop. The way that the first stanza is structured effectively forces the reader to read the poem with pace; this allows the reader to empathise with the woman as they try to catch their breath. The writer uses lots of verbs in the first stanza. She talks about how she has to tend , mend , feed and weed . The verbs highlight how she is always doing something; she is never resting. Additionally, the verbs are definitely associated with jobs that are not necessarily enjoyable. They are jobs and chores that can be challenging. Annotate these responses. What is successful? What could be improved?

  16. Over to you. TOP BAND CHECKLIST -Relate to the buzz words of the question throughout -Sophisticated style/ phrasing -Strong evidence (is it embedded?) -Identify techniques/ methods/ zoom in on key words -Layers of interpretation (explore the effect) this is effective because this successfully highlights this strongly asserts that this is particularly good at this makes the reader feel this creates a sense of -Writer s didactic purpose You have 30 minutes to write up your best three ideas. How does the poet present the speaker s feelings about her life?

  17. TOP BAND CHECKLIST -Relate to the buzz words of the question throughout -Sophisticated style/ phrasing -Strong evidence (is it embedded?) -Identify techniques/ methods/ zoom in on key words -Layers of interpretation (explore the effect) this is effective because this successfully highlights this strongly asserts that this is particularly good at this makes the reader feel this creates a sense of -Writer s didactic purpose Purple pen work Use the criteria to annotate your response.

  18. Comparing Unseen Poems. This is a short 8 mark question so it is important to: Make all your comments comparative Concentrate on the methods the two writers use Focus carefully on the question you re been asked. No matter how well you have structured your response, if you do not compare, you will get zero.

  19. What is the question asking you to do? Comparing Read Overheard in County Sligo for the first time so you get a general meaning. In Woman Work , and Over heard in County Sligo , the speakers describe the lives they are living. What are the similarities and/or differences between the ways the poets describe their predicaments? Read it for the second time. Begin to identify 2/3 key things. Think about the Question. Think about the first poem, Woman Work , again. How are you going to make comparisons? Use a comparative statement/word to open your next paragraph then repeat the step above for the second poem linking it to the first. methods Write a balanced response.

  20. Read the poem for the first time. What is the general meaning? Let s read poem two and annotate together The comparison bit Overheard in County Sligo I married a man from County Roscommon and I live in the back of beyond with a field of cows and a yard of hens and six white geese on the pond. At my door s a square of yellow corn caught up by its corners and shaken, and the road runs down through the open gate and freedom s there for the taking. I had thought to work on the Abbey stage or have my name in a book, to see my thought on the printed page, or still the crowd with a look.

  21. Read the poem for the first time. What is the general meaning? Let s annotate together But I turn to fold the breakfast cloth and to polish the lustre and brass, to order and dust the tumbled rooms and find my face in the glass. I ought to feel I m a happy woman for I lie in the lap of the land, but I married the man from County Roscommon and I live at the back of beyond.

  22. In Woman Work, and Over heard in County Sligo, the speakers describe the lives they are living. What are the similarities and/or differences between the ways the poets describe their predicaments? 1 2 In both Woman Work and Overheard in County Sligo the poets utilise structure to convey how the women are feeling. The BABA rhyming scheme mirrors the speakers monotonous life and how she feels trapped whereas in Woman Work the enjambment and rhyming couplets in the first stanza show how the woman does not have time to pause and rest. Annotate these responses. What is successful? What could be improved? In Woman Work the speaker finds salvation in the natural world towards the end of the poem when it says Fall softly, dewdrops/And cool my brow again. The writer presents the notion that nature has the power to create a sense of escapism and salvation for the woman. However, in Overheard in County Sligo the woman is surrounded by nature yet feels trapped in the back of beyond ; the speaker feels trapped in her predicament, living on a farm and her life isn t how she anticipated it would be.

  23. Over to you. TOP BAND CHECKLIST -Relate to the buzz words of the question throughout -Comparative structure throughout -Compare the EFFECT of methods used -Sophisticated style/ phrasing -Strong evidence (is it embedded?) -Identify techniques/ methods/ zoom in on key words -Layers of interpretation (explore the effect) this is effective because this successfully highlights this strongly asserts that this is particularly good at this makes the reader feel this creates a sense of You have 30 minutes to write up your best three ideas. In Woman Work , and Over heard in County Sligo , the speakers describe the lives they are living. What are the similarities and/or differences between the ways the poets describe their predicaments?

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