Analyzing Unseen Poetry: Techniques, Themes, and Structure

 
The grade boundaries:
 
Grade 
1
- 8/64
Grade 
2
-16/64
Grade 
3
-26/64
Grade 
4
-32/64
Grade 
5
 36/64
Grade 
6
 42/64
Grade 
7
 48/64
Grade 
8
 54/64
Grade 
9
- 60/64
Paper 1: Grade boundaries June 2016
UNSEEN POETRY
 
How do I use MITSL?
What is each question asking me to do?
How much time should I spend on this section?
What should I do in the introduction?
How should my answers look?
What is that 8 mark question all about?
Meaning
 
what is the poem about?
 who is the 
speaker
? 
- are they dramatized (a character)
 who is being 
spoken to
 or addressed
?
 what is being 
spoken about
?
 
Theme(s)
 of the poem 
- what is it really about?
 
Setting/culture
 
- where’s the poem set? Culture it is from/about?
 where does the poem “get to” from start to end?
MITSL + P
Tone
 How would the poem be spoken? (angry, sad, nostalgic,
bitter, humorous etc)
Structure
 
Rhyme 
- is there a rhyme scheme? Couplets? Internal rhyme?
 Rhythm 
- how many syllables per line? Is it regular or free verse?
Why are some different lengths?
 Stanzas 
- How many? How do they change? Is there a narrative?
 Lines 
- how many are their in each verse? Do some stand out?
 Enjambment 
- do the lines “run on” to the next line or stanza?
 End stopping 
- does each line finish at the end of a sentence?
 Form 
- does the poem have a shape to it?
 Caesuras 
– Check the middle of the lines for punctuation.
Imagery 
Alliteration
 - the repeating of initial sounds.
 
Assonance
 - is the term used for the repetition of vowel sounds
within consecutive words as in, 'rags of green weed hung down...'.
 Metaphor 
- comparing two things by saying one is the other.
 Simile 
- comparing two things saying one is like or as the other.
 Personification 
- giving something non-human human qualities
.
 
Onomatopoeia 
- words that sound like the thing they describe.
 Repetition 
- does the poet repeat words or phrases?
 
Senses – 
Which are used and why?
Language:
What kinds of words are used?
 
Puns 
- a pun is a play on words - “Shear Class!” if Shearer scores.
 Connotation 
- 
associations that words have (as "stallion"
connotes a certain kind of horse with certain sorts of uses)?
 Double meanings 
- “butts in” - putting bottoms in or
interrupting.
 Ambiguity 
- is the word or phrase deliberately unclear? Could it
mean opposite things or many different things?.
 Word order 
- are the words in an unusual order – why?
 Adjectives 
- what are the key describing words?
 Key words and phrases 
- do any of the words or phrases stand
out? Do they shock? Are the words “violent” or “sad” etc?
 Slang or unusual words and misspellings 
- Does the poet use
slang or informal language? Are American words used?
 Intertextuality 
- does the poem reference another text?
 Style
 - does the poet copy another style? (Newspaper, play etc)
 Characters
 - if there are characters how do they speak?
Always
 link everything to meaning. Ask yourself how does this
contributes to the meaning? Why has the poet used this technique?
Personal Response
  Complement, Criticise or say how you felt.
UNSEEN QUESTION ONE AND TWO
 
Question One – 24 marks
Plan and Annotate = 5 Mins
Introduction = 5 mins (The meaning part of MITSL)
PEEL paragraphs = 25 mins – at least 2 PEELS – cover the rest of MITSL
 
Question two – 8 marks
Plan – 3 mins
Write 2 paragraphs outlining the similarities and differences = 7 mins
 
In “To a Daughter Leaving Home”, how
does the poet present the speaker’s
feelings about her daughter?
(24 marks)
INTRODUCTION
 = MEANING OF THE
POEM AND ANSWER THE QUESTION
 
In ‘To a daughter leaving home’ Linda Pasten tells the story of a 
mother and
mother and
daughter relationship 
daughter relationship 
through the specific event of 
teaching her child how
teaching her child how
to ride a bike
to ride a bike
.  This event acts as a metaphor for the 
mixed emotions 
mixed emotions 
the
speaker feels about her daughter growing up.  On the one hand 
she feels joy 
she feels joy 
at
her daughter’s success but on the other hand a sense of 
sadness and worry 
sadness and worry 
at
not being able to protect her daughter and losing control of the relationship.
 
What is the poem about?
What feelings are presented?
In “To a Daughter Leaving Home”, how does the poet present
the speaker’s feelings about her daughter?
(24 marks)
UNSEEN POETRY PEEL = ANSWER THE
QUESTION AND COVER MITSL+P
 
In ‘To a daughter leaving home’ Linda Pasten presents the speaker’s feelings of fear and
sadness as she watches her daughter ride into the distance.  These feelings are presented with
use of a simile, “The hair flapping/ behind you like a/ handkerchief waving/goodbye,” to
demonstrate how the speaker feels she is losing her daughter as she grows up.  The
comparison to a handkerchief confirms the link to sadness as it is associated with wiping away
tears.  Also the use of enjambment in this quote emphasises the speed of which the speaker
feels her daughter is growing up and links to the idea that the speaker is worried that time is
moving too quickly.  The poet also uses a negative and fearful lexis throughout the poem,
‘wobbled’, ‘crashed’, ‘breakable’ and ‘screaming’ to highlight the concern the speaker has about
the dangers and uncertainty her daughter will face.  The presentation of fear leaves the reader
feeling sympathy for the speaker because they can relate to a mother and child relationship
and in my opinion the poet has successfully developed a melancholy tone to help present the
paradoxical grief a parent feels at watching their children grow up.
 
What feelings are presented?
What do different elements of MITSL show?
What is the reader reaction?
What is my reaction?
In “To a Daughter Leaving Home”,
how does the poet present the
speaker’s feelings about her
daughter?
(24 marks)
UNSEEN POETRY COMPARISON =
ANSWER THE QUESTION
 
In ‘To a daughter leaving home’ and ‘Poem for my sister’ both poets use extended metaphors to
present the sense of fear and concern for someone they love.  Pasten using a bike ‘as you
wobbled’ away’ and Lochhead uses shoes, ‘I wish you could stay sure footed’ to present the idea
that the speakers are worried about their loved ones being safe.
In contrast, in ‘Poem for my sister’ Lochhead uses a more humorous tone to present the
speaker’s desire that her sister doesn’t make the same mistakes she did, ‘I try to warn my little
sister about unsuitable shoes.’ Whereas in ‘To a daughter leaving home’ Pasten presents more
extreme feelings about the child’s safety, ‘I kept waiting for the thud of your crash.’ This perhaps
emphasises the fact that maternal relationships are usually more intense.
In my opinion Lochhead is more successful at presenting feelings about a loved one because her
imagery and tone create a more realistic depiction of the relationship.
 
 
 
What feelings are presented?
Are they similar of different?
Which is better?
IN BOTH ‘POEM FOR MY SISTER’ AND ‘TO A
DAUGHTER LEAVING HOME’ THE SPEAKERS
DESCRIBE FEELINGS ABOUT WATCHING SOMEONE
THEY LOVE GROW UP. WHAT ARE THE SIMILARITIES
AND/OR DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE WAYS THE
POETS PRESENT THOSE FEELINGS?
[8 MARKS]
IN BOTH ‘POEM FOR MY SISTER’ AND ‘TO A
DAUGHTER LEAVING HOME’ THE SPEAKERS
DESCRIBE FEELINGS ABOUT WATCHING
SOMEONE THEY LOVE GROW UP. WHAT ARE
THE SIMILARITIES AND/OR DIFFERENCES
BETWEEN THE WAYS THE POETS PRESENT
THOSE FEELINGS?
[8 MARKS]
 
Blessing
The skin cracks like a pod.
There never is enough water.
Imagine the drip of it,
the small splash, echo
in a tin mug,
the voice of a kindly god.
Sometimes, the sudden rush
of fortune. The municipal pipe bursts,
silver crashes to the ground
and the flow has found
a roar of tongues. From the huts,
a congregation : every man woman
child for streets around
butts in, with pots,
brass, copper, aluminium,
plastic buckets, frantic hands,
and naked children
screaming in the liquid sun,
their highlights polished to perfection,
flashing light,
as the blessing sings
over their small bones.
In “Oh what is that sound”, how does the
poet present the speaker’s feelings about
Poverty?
(24 marks)
 
Yesterday I found a photo
of you at seventeen,
holding a horse and smiling,
not yet my mother.
 
The tight riding hat hid your hair,
and your legs were still the long shins of a boy’s.
You held the horse by the halter,
your hand a fist under its huge jaw.
 
The blown trees were still in the background
and the sky was grained by the old film stock,
but what caught me was your face,
which was mine.
 
 
 
 
And I thought, just for a second, that you were
me.
But then I saw the woman’s jacket,
nipped at the waist, the ballooned jodhpurs,
and of course the date, scratched in the
corner.
All of which told me again,
that this was you at seventeen, holding a horse
and smiling, not yet my mother,
although I was clearly already your child.
In “Not yet my Mother”, how does the
poet present the speaker’s feelings about
his Mother?
(24 marks)
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Explore the nuances of analyzing unseen poetry using techniques such as imagery, alliteration, and metaphor. Understand how to decipher themes, speaker, and tone in poems for a comprehensive analysis. Learn to interpret rhyme schemes, stanzas, and structures to uncover the deeper meaning behind poetic verses.

  • Poetry analysis
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  • Theme interpretation
  • Structure analysis
  • Language understanding

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  1. Paper 1: Grade boundaries June 2016 The grade boundaries: Grade 1- 8/64 Grade 2-16/64 Grade 3-26/64 Grade 4-32/64 Grade 5 36/64 Grade 6 42/64 Grade 7 48/64 Grade 8 54/64 Grade 9- 60/64

  2. UNSEEN POETRY How do I use MITSL? What is each question asking me to do? How much time should I spend on this section? What should I do in the introduction? How should my answers look? What is that 8 mark question all about?

  3. Imagery Alliteration - the repeating of initial sounds. Assonance - is the term used for the repetition of vowel sounds within consecutive words as in, 'rags of green weed hung down...'. Metaphor - comparing two things by saying one is the other. Simile - comparing two things saying one is like or as the other. Personification - giving something non-human human qualities. Onomatopoeia - words that sound like the thing they describe. Repetition - does the poet repeat words or phrases? Senses Which are used and why? Language: What kinds of words are used? Puns - a pun is a play on words - Shear Class! if Shearer scores. Connotation - associations that words have (as "stallion" connotes a certain kind of horse with certain sorts of uses)? Double meanings - butts in - putting bottoms in or interrupting. Ambiguity - is the word or phrase deliberately unclear? Could it mean opposite things or many different things?. Word order - are the words in an unusual order why? Adjectives - what are the key describing words? Key words and phrases - do any of the words or phrases stand out? Do they shock? Are the words violent or sad etc? Slang or unusual words and misspellings - Does the poet use slang or informal language? Are American words used? Intertextuality - does the poem reference another text? Style - does the poet copy another style? (Newspaper, play etc) Characters - if there are characters how do they speak? Personal Response Complement, Criticise or say how you felt. MITSL + P Meaning what is the poem about? who is the speaker? - are they dramatized (a character) who is being spoken to or addressed? what is being spoken about? Theme(s) of the poem - what is it really about? Setting/culture- where s the poem set? Culture it is from/about? where does the poem get to from start to end? Tone How would the poem be spoken? (angry, sad, nostalgic, bitter, humorous etc) Structure Rhyme - is there a rhyme scheme? Couplets? Internal rhyme? Rhythm - how many syllables per line? Is it regular or free verse? Why are some different lengths? Stanzas - How many? How do they change? Is there a narrative? Lines - how many are their in each verse? Do some stand out? Enjambment - do the lines run on to the next line or stanza? End stopping - does each line finish at the end of a sentence? Form - does the poem have a shape to it? Caesuras Check the middle of the lines for punctuation. Always link everything to meaning. Ask yourself how does this contributes to the meaning? Why has the poet used this technique?

  4. UNSEEN QUESTION ONE AND TWO Question One 24 marks Plan and Annotate = 5 Mins Introduction = 5 mins (The meaning part of MITSL) PEEL paragraphs = 25 mins at least 2 PEELS cover the rest of MITSL Question two 8 marks Plan 3 mins Write 2 paragraphs outlining the similarities and differences = 7 mins

  5. In To a Daughter Leaving Home, how does the poet present the speaker s feelings about her daughter? (24 marks) Speaker s feelings about her daughter Element of MITSL

  6. INTRODUCTION = MEANING OF THE POEM AND ANSWER THE QUESTION In To a daughter leaving home Linda Pasten tells the story of a mother and daughter relationship through the specific event of teaching her child how to ride a bike. This event acts as a metaphor for the mixed emotions the speaker feels about her daughter growing up. On the one hand she feels joy at her daughter s success but on the other hand a sense of sadness and worry at not being able to protect her daughter and losing control of the relationship. What is the poem about? What feelings are presented? In To a Daughter Leaving Home , how does the poet present the speaker s feelings about her daughter? (24 marks)

  7. In To a Daughter Leaving Home, how does the poet present the speaker s feelings about her daughter? UNSEEN POETRY PEEL = ANSWER THE QUESTION AND COVER MITSL+P (24 marks) In To a daughter leaving home Linda Pasten presents the speaker s feelings of fear and sadness as she watches her daughter ride into the distance. These feelings are presented with use of a simile, The hair flapping/ behind you like a/ handkerchief waving/goodbye, to demonstrate how the speaker feels she is losing her daughter as she grows up. The comparison to a handkerchief confirms the link to sadness as it is associated with wiping away tears. Also the use of enjambment in this quote emphasises the speed of which the speaker feels her daughter is growing up and links to the idea that the speaker is worried that time is moving too quickly. The poet also uses a negative and fearful lexis throughout the poem, wobbled , crashed , breakable and screaming to highlight the concern the speaker has about the dangers and uncertainty her daughter will face. The presentation of fear leaves the reader feeling sympathy for the speaker because they can relate to a mother and child relationship and in my opinion the poet has successfully developed a melancholy tone to help present the paradoxical grief a parent feels at watching their children grow up. What feelings are presented? What do different elements of MITSL show? What is the reader reaction? What is my reaction?

  8. UNSEEN POETRY COMPARISON = ANSWER THE QUESTION In To a daughter leaving home and Poem for my sister both poets use extended metaphors to present the sense of fear and concern for someone they love. Pasten using a bike as you wobbled away and Lochhead uses shoes, I wish you could stay sure footed to present the idea that the speakers are worried about their loved ones being safe. In contrast, in Poem for my sister Lochhead uses a more humorous tone to present the speaker s desire that her sister doesn t make the same mistakes she did, I try to warn my little sister about unsuitable shoes. Whereas in To a daughter leaving home Pasten presents more extreme feelings about the child s safety, I kept waiting for the thud of your crash. This perhaps emphasises the fact that maternal relationships are usually more intense. In my opinion Lochhead is more successful at presenting feelings about a loved one because her imagery and tone create a more realistic depiction of the relationship. IN BOTH POEM FOR MY SISTER AND TO A DAUGHTER LEAVING HOME THE SPEAKERS DESCRIBE FEELINGS ABOUT WATCHING SOMEONE THEY LOVE GROW UP. WHAT ARE THE SIMILARITIES AND/OR DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE WAYS THE POETS PRESENT THOSE FEELINGS? [8 MARKS] What feelings are presented? Are they similar of different? Which is better?

  9. IN BOTH POEM FOR MY SISTER AND TO A DAUGHTER LEAVING HOME THE SPEAKERS DESCRIBE FEELINGS ABOUT WATCHING SOMEONE THEY LOVE GROW UP. WHAT ARE THE SIMILARITIES AND/OR DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE WAYS THE POETS PRESENT THOSE FEELINGS? [8 MARKS] Similarities Differences

  10. Blessing The skin cracks like a pod. There never is enough water. Imagine the drip of it, the small splash, echo in a tin mug, the voice of a kindly god. Sometimes, the sudden rush of fortune. The municipal pipe bursts, silver crashes to the ground and the flow has found a roar of tongues. From the huts, a congregation : every man woman child for streets around butts in, with pots, brass, copper, aluminium, plastic buckets, frantic hands, and naked children screaming in the liquid sun, their highlights polished to perfection, flashing light, as the blessing sings over their small bones. In Oh what is that sound , how does the poet present the speaker s feelings about Poverty? (24 marks)

  11. And I thought, just for a second, that you were me. But then I saw the woman s jacket, nipped at the waist, the ballooned jodhpurs, and of course the date, scratched in the corner. All of which told me again, that this was you at seventeen, holding a horse and smiling, not yet my mother, although I was clearly already your child. Yesterday I found a photo of you at seventeen, holding a horse and smiling, not yet my mother. The tight riding hat hid your hair, and your legs were still the long shins of a boy s. You held the horse by the halter, your hand a fist under its huge jaw. The blown trees were still in the background and the sky was grained by the old film stock, but what caught me was your face, which was mine. In Not yet my Mother , how does the poet present the speaker s feelings about his Mother? (24 marks)

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