The Gaelic Language and Crofting in Scotland
AUNT JULIA
Norman MacCaig
IN YOUR GROUPS
•
What do you know about Gaelic?
•
Where do you hear Gaelic being spoken now? Do
you?
•
What is the significance of that?
CONTEXT
Background
Norman MacCaig's Aunt Julia lived on Scalpay, a small island off the
coast of Harris in the Outer Hebrides. Aunt Julia lived a traditional,
hardworking life on a croft and she spoke only her native Gaelic
language.
Gaelic
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Scottish Gaelic, or Scots Gaelic, is a Celtic language native to
the Gaels of Scotland.
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In 1018 after the conquest of the Lothians by the Kingdom of
Scotland, Gaelic reached its social, cultural, political, and geographic
zenith in Scotland. Elites spoke Gaelic although some commoners in
the Lothians retained Old English.
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By the mid-14th century what eventually came to be called
Scots emerged as the official language of government and
law.
•
By the end of the 15th century, English/Scots speakers
referred to Gaelic instead as 'Yrisch' or 'Erse’ (Irish) and
their own language as 'Scottis'.
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Gaelic was no longer the language of Scotland, and has been
marginalised ever since.
DO YOU KNOW ANY ‘SCOTS’?
DO YOU SPEAK IN ‘SCOTS’?
CROFTING
What is a crofter?
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A crofter is the person who occupies and works a small landholding
known as a croft.
What is a croft?
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A croft is a small agricultural unit, most of which are situated in the
crofting counties in the north of Scotland being the former counties
of Argyll, Caithness, Inverness, Ross & Cromarty, Sutherland, Orkney
and Shetland.
The Work
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Croft work was hard, back-breaking work, mainly done by women
which yielded a subsistence living.
THE POEM
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The poem focuses on MacCaig’s Aunt Julia and the language
barrier that existed between them.
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Aunt Julia lived a traditional, hardworking life on a croft and she
spoke only her native Gaelic language.
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The last stanza introduces a tone of regret as it was only after
Julia's death that the poet learned enough Gaelic to be able to
communicate with her.
All of the questions that he would have asked to her must now
remain unanswered, just as her questions to him as a child had
been.
KEY THEMES
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Barriers of communication
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Frustration
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Isolation (felt by speaker & Aunt Julia)
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Spirituality
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Strength of relationships
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Fragility of Scottish heritage, language & culture
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Loss/Mortality
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History/tradition
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Nature
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Place
THE POEM
COPY DOWN:
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It is an autobiographical poem, about the
relationship between MacCaig and his Aunt Julia.
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Discusses the language barrier between them –
she spoke Gaelic and he did not.
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However get the sense that they had a strong
relationship despite of this.
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At the end, Julia has died, and MacCaig
emphasises his regret at not being able to
converse with her.
STANZA 1
Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic
very loud and very fast.
I could not answer her —
I could not understand her.
STANZA 2
She wore men’s boots
when she wore any.
-
I can see her strong foot,
stained with peat,
paddling with the treadle of the
spinning wheel
while her right hand drew yarn
marvellously out of the air.
Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic
very loud
and
very fast
.
I could not
answer her —
I could not
understand her.
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Repetition
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Poet begins with affectionate childhood memories of Aunt.
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However, goes on to discuss the difficulties of relationship.
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Repetition of “very” &“I could not” highlights difficulties
speaker had in communicating with Aunt Julia, & frustration
felt as a result of this.
*
Tone
is
affectionate
here, despite the inability to
communicate, demonstrating that even without a common
language, strong bonds can be formed.
She wore
men’s boots
when she wore any
.
-
I can see her
strong foot
,
stained with peat
•
Word choice “men’s boots” demonstrates her practicality.
•
Suggests her work is physically demanding – she lives a life close to the
soil (connected with the land).
•
Word choice of “strong foot” reinforces great physical strength.
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“Peat” is a fertiliser made up of decomposed vegetables. It is used for
gardening and as fuel.
•
The fact that her foot is “stained” with the material again reinforces
her connectedness with the land – it is a part of her.
•
Connotations of energy from the fact that peat is used to ‘fuel’ the land
– she a lively and active character.
* Present tense throughout this stanza creates sense of immediacy and shows
how vividly and readily he can still access these memories *
paddling with the treadle of the spinning wheel
while
her right hand
drew yarn
marvellously out of the air
.
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Long sentence emphasises the length of time the spinning
process takes.
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“Paddling” suggests she is constantly moving, again emphasising
her hard-working, active nature.
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Word choice
:
“drew yarn
marvellously
out of the air”
conveys sense of magic or illusion about the task,
entrancing the young boy watching his Aunt work.
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“Marvellously” has connotations of excellence and wonder -
emphasises this sense of spectacle.
STANZA 3
Hers was the only house
where I’ve lain at night
in the absolute darkness
of a box bed, listening to
crickets being friendly
.
OVERVIEW
•
Here we see clearly that the language barrier
has been overcome by the strong bond
between the speaker and his aunt.
•
As a result the young boy feels safe and
secure in the dark island of the box bed in
Aunt Julia’s home.
IN PAIRS
Pick out
at least 2 examples
of
word choice
that show
the speaker feels comfortable in the darkness of Aunt Julia’s
home.
In your jotters, analyse those selected using the following
formula:
Quotation + definition + connotations + relate to question
(how does it show that he feels comfortable?)
Word Choice
Contribution to sense of comfort
Hers was the only house
where I’ve lain at night
in the
absolute darkness
of a box bed, listening to
crickets being friendly
.
•
Word choice: “absolute darkness”.
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“Darkness” has connotations of obscurity, depression & bleakness.
Quite unusual that feels comfortable here.
•
However mention of “
absolute
darkness” changes perception of the
word – it almost becomes a pure, perfect and reliable darkness: these
more positive connotations creating a sense of comfort,
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Darkness= a blanket of protection.
“Crickets being friendly” – again positive connotations
associated with “friendly”. Reinforces sense of comfort and
safety.
STANZA 4
She was buckets
and water flouncing into them.
She was winds pouring wetly
round house-ends.
She was brown eggs, black skirts
and a keeper of threepennybits
in a teapot.
ON YOUR OWN
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Can you find a metaphor/simile within the stanza?
If so, what is its significance? What does it suggest?
•
Where are the references to nature?
What do they symbolise/suggest?
Metaphor/simile?
Nature References
She
was buckets
and water flouncing
into them.
She was winds pouring wetly
round house-ends
Metaphor x 2 – specifically likening Aunt Julia to the element of water.
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Word choice of“Flouncing” & “pouring” = connotations of volatility
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Suggests she is an unpredictable character – forever moving, and yet
unstable.
•
However, where traditionally this instability would be considered
worrying, it is clear that the speaker admires this aspect of AJ’s
personality – admiration further emphasised by the references to
nature.
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Water has connotations of movement and purity.
•
In likening AJ to it, the speaker emphasises her own vitality and
virtuousness (she is a ‘good’ character).
She was
brown eggs
,
black skirts
and a keeper of
threepennybits
in a
teapot
.
•
The poet also links Julia to a collection of simple domestic
objects. These objects show her to be natural, traditional
and careful with money.
•
This links her with the land
and
lifestyle of the
geographical area, instead of just nature.
•
From this AJ represents the way of life of the crofting
islanders who worked the land in a harsh, unforgiving
climate. Despite the difficulties of this lifestyle, there is a
pride and honesty in it, which the speaker obviously
admires.
STANZA 5
Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic
very loud and very fast.
By the time I had learned
a little, she lay
silenced in the absolute black
of a sandy grave
at Luskentyre. But I hear her still, welcoming
with a seagull’s voice
across a hundred yards
of peatscrapes and lazybeds
and getting angry, getting angry
with so many questions
unanswered.
IN YOUR GROUPS
•
Are there any examples of repetition? If so, why do you think
they have been included?
•
What is the significance of “silenced in the absolute black”.
Pick out specific words and analyse them to support your
interpretation.
Repetition
Significance of “silenced in the absolute black”:
Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic
very loud and very fast.
By the time
I had learned
a little, she lay
silenced in the absolute black
of a sandy grave
at Luskentyre.
Repetition of first few lines of poem.
Suggests that this is the beginning of a conclusion to the
poem – as though it has come full circle.
Indicates a
change in tone
– changes
from one of
affection, to
one of regret
and frustration
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hear her still, welcoming
with a seagull’s voice
across a hundred yards
of peatscrapes and lazybeds
Metaphor: Almost an attempt at challenging finality of death – “hear her
still” although she has passed.
Demonstrates connectedness to Nature: a bond that death itself cannot
break.
and
getting angry, getting angry
with so many questions
unanswered
.
•
Repetition “getting angry, getting angry” = emphasises speakers
frustration.
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He is both angry
angry at the questions left by the death of his Aunt but
he is also mourning the death of a traditional Scottish way of life.
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“Angry…angry” = Here he is warning us to hold onto the culture and
heritage of the island way of life. He is afraid if we allow it to die, like
Aunt Julia, then it too will be lost forever.
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The final word is left on a line of its own = reinforces the speakers
enduring sense of frustration.
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The ending of the poem = ambiguous.
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The questions he alludes to could represent, literally, her questions
to the boy, which he was unable to answer as he had no Gaelic, or
they could represent all the questions he would have loved to ask but
was unable to until it was too late.
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Moving beyond the literal, the questions could represent the more
universal queries we all have about the meaning and mysteries of life
itself.
RE-CAP
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What are the main themes of the poem?
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How is nature discussed within the poem?
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What does Aunt Julia symbolise?
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Has our understanding of the main
themes changed?
QUIZ
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Write down a brief summary of
Visiting Hour
.
•
What are the key themes of this poem?
•
Write down a brief summary of
Aunt Julia
.
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What are the key themes of this poem?
•
Explain how this metaphor explores the theme of spirituality: “What seems a
corpse/ is
trundled into a lift and
vanishes/ Heavenward
”.
Refer to word choice in your answer.
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What do the lines “carrying their burden/ of so much pain,
so/ many
deaths” tell us
about MacCaig’s feelings at this time
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How do the lines “where I’ve lain at night/ in the absolute darkness/ of a box bed,
listening to/ crickets being friendly” show that MacCaig feels comfortable with Aunt Julia?
Refer to word choice in your answer.
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Explain MacCaig’s use of repetition in the lines “
Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic/
very loud
and
very fast
./
I could not
answer her —/
I could not
understand her”. Why is it used? Is it
effective?
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to
complete!
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1.
Write down
at least two facts
about Norman
MacCaig.
2.
Write down the
key themes
of Visiting Hour.
3.
What is a simile?
4.
What is a metaphor?
5.
What is personification?
6.
What is
juxtaposition
? (if you have never heard of
this – what do you think it could mean?)
5 minutes
to
complete!
NO
NOTES
TASK
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Complete questions 2 + 3 from the
question paper we were working on last
week.
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You will get
10 minutes
to finish these
responses.
8 MARK QUESTION
Textual Analysis
THE 8 MARK QUESTION
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This question asks you to compare the poem you
have in front of you in the exam, to another poem
by the same poet from memory.
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The question will tell you what it wants you to
focus on: it might be a theme, a mood/tone, an
idea, how things are contrasted etc.
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The main thing to remember:
always refer back
to the question!
THE 8 MARK QUESTION
You should split your answer into three
parts, under the headings:
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Commonality
•
Exam Poem
•
Elsewhere
COMMONALITY
(2 MARKS)
This is where you say what the poem you have in front
of you has in common with other poems by the same
author.
You must say what it has in common with regards to
the aspect you have been asked to discuss.
Eg. Isolation, barriers of communication, love, loss,
mortality…
EXAMPLE
Question: Look at Visiting Hour. By referring to poetic
techniques, discuss how MacCaig explores the theme of isolation.
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In
Visiting Hour
, MacCaig explores the theme of isolation by
highlighting the fact that he is physically and emotionally
separated from his dying friend.
•
Similarly, in
Aunt Julia
, MacCaig explores the theme of isolation
through discussing the language barrier that existed between
him and his aunt. He was never able to fully communicate with
her, creating a sense of isolation from her, as well as from
Scottish culture.
COPY DOWN THESE SENTENCE
PROMPTS:
Commonality Sentence Starters
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Through the poem
X
, MacCaig
identifies/explores/displays/discusses/demonstrates the theme of/idea
of/technique [what is the question asking you to discuss]. This is evident
when/this becomes clear when… [go on to explain where this theme/idea is
evident within the poem.]
•
MacCaig also explores the theme of/idea of/technique throughout his poem Y.
This is noticeable/evident through her discussion of [now explain how this
theme/idea is evident in this new poem].
EXAM POEM
(2 MARKS)
You should discuss the poem you have
in front
of you
with regards to what you have been
asked about in the question.
You answer this question as you would the
analysis questions you have been doing already.
Use the
Technique+Quote+Comment
Structure to achieve 2 marks.
In the poem X, Duffy
identifies/explores/displays/discusses/demonstrates the theme
of/idea of/technique
[what is the question asking you to
discuss].
This is done through the use of
[technique]
in the
lines
[quote].
This shows/suggests that
[how does it relate to
the question?].
This is made clear through the word choice of
[quote word] which means
[what does it mean].
It has
connotations of
[list 2-3 connotations]
which successfully
demonstrates the theme of/idea of/technique
[refer back to
question].
COPY DOWN THESE SENTENCE
PROMPTS:
ELSEWHERE
(4 MARKS)
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This is where you will be required to
recall knowledge
from
other poems
with
similar themes and ideas
.
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It is important therefore that you
learn your key
quotes
for
each poem
.
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You should
Technique+Quote+Comment
on how
these other poems relate to the question you have been
asked.
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You should do this
four times.
GENERAL ADVICE
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Give yourself plenty of time to complete this question.
20
Minutes at least
.
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Work under the headings
you have been given. It will help
organise your thinking.
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Learn
your
key quotations
for all of the poems.
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Make
reference to the question
you have been asked
throughout your answer
. This way, the examiner knows you
have read and understand the question.
•
Practice makes perfect with this type of question. The more
you do, the better at it you will become.
Look at Aunt Julia.
Question
MacCaig often
observes people or places
in
his poetry. Referring closely to this poem,
and to at least one other poem by MacCaig,
show how MacCaig uses observation of
people or places in his poems
.
PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT!
Question
•
Using close
textual reference
, show
how the
theme of isolation
is
explored in the poem
Visiting Hour
,
and in at least one other poem, by
Norman MacCaig.
Norman MacCaig's poem "Aunt Julia" delves into the life of his Gaelic-speaking aunt on the island of Scalpay. The history of Gaelic in Scotland, its decline in favor of Scots, and the significance of crofting, a traditional agricultural practice in the north, are explored. Images and insights offer a glimpse into the cultural richness of the Gaelic-speaking areas in Scotland.
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AUNT JULIA Norman MacCaig
IN YOUR GROUPS What do you know about Gaelic? Where do you hear Gaelic being spoken now? Do you? What is the significance of that?
CONTEXT Background Norman MacCaig'sAunt Julia lived on Scalpay, a small island off the coast of Harris in the Outer Hebrides. Aunt Julia lived a traditional, hardworking life on a croft and she spoke only her native Gaelic language.
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Gaelic Scottish Gaelic,or Scots Gaelic, is a Celtic language native to the Gaels of Scotland. In 1018 after the conquest of the Lothians by the Kingdom of Scotland, Gaelic reached its social, cultural, political, and geographic zenith in Scotland. Elites spoke Gaelic although some commoners in the Lothians retained Old English.
By the mid-14th century what eventually came to be called Scots emerged as the official language of government and law. By the end of the 15th century, English/Scots speakers referred to Gaelic instead as 'Yrisch' or 'Erse (Irish) and their own language as 'Scottis'. Gaelic was no longer the language of Scotland, and has been marginalised ever since.
DO YOU KNOW ANY SCOTS? DO YOU SPEAK IN SCOTS ?
CROFTING What is a crofter? A crofter is the person who occupies and works a small landholding known as a croft. What is a croft? A croft is a small agricultural unit, most of which are situated in the crofting counties in the north of Scotland being the former counties of Argyll, Caithness, Inverness, Ross & Cromarty, Sutherland, Orkney and Shetland. The Work Croft work was hard, back-breaking work, mainly done by women which yielded a subsistence living.
THE POEM The poem focuses on MacCaig s Aunt Julia and the language barrier that existed between them. Aunt Julia lived a traditional, hardworking life on a croft and she spoke only her native Gaelic language. The last stanza introduces a tone of regret as it was only after Julia's death that the poet learned enough Gaelic to be able to communicate with her. All of the questions that he would have asked to her must now remain unanswered, just as her questions to him as a child had been.
KEY THEMES Barriers of communication Frustration Isolation (felt by speaker & Aunt Julia) Spirituality Strength of relationships Fragility of Scottish heritage, language & culture Loss/Mortality History/tradition Nature Place
THE POEM COPY DOWN: It is an autobiographical poem, about the relationship between MacCaig and his Aunt Julia. Discusses the language barrier between them she spoke Gaelic and he did not. However get the sense that they had a strong relationship despite of this. At the end, Julia has died, and MacCaig emphasises his regret at not being able to converse with her.
STANZA 1 Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic very loud and very fast. I could not answer her I could not understand her.
STANZA 2 She wore men s boots when she wore any. - I can see her strong foot, stained with peat, paddling with the treadle of the spinning wheel while her right hand drew yarn marvellously out of the air.
Repetition Poet begins with affectionate childhood memories of Aunt. - However, goes on to discuss the difficulties of relationship. - Repetition of very & I could not highlights difficulties speaker had in communicating with Aunt Julia, & frustration felt as a result of this. Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic very loud and very fast. I could not answer her I could not understand her. * Tone is affectionate here, despite the inability to communicate, demonstrating that even without a common language, strong bonds can be formed.
Word choice mens boots demonstrates her practicality. Suggests her work is physically demanding she lives a life close to the soil (connected with the land). Word choice of strong foot reinforces great physical strength. She wore men s boots when she wore any. - I can see her strong foot, stained with peat Peat is a fertiliser made up of decomposed vegetables. It is used for gardening and as fuel. The fact that her foot is stained with the material again reinforces her connectedness with the land it is a part of her. Connotations of energy from the fact that peat is used to fuel the land she a lively and active character. * Present tense throughout this stanza creates sense of immediacy and shows how vividly and readily he can still access these memories *
Long sentence emphasises the length of time the spinning process takes. Paddling suggests she is constantly moving, again emphasising her hard-working, active nature. paddling with the treadle of the spinning wheel while her right hand drew yarn marvellously out of the air. Word choice: drew yarn marvellously out of the air conveys sense of magic or illusion about the task, entrancing the young boy watching his Aunt work. Marvellously has connotations of excellence and wonder - emphasises this sense of spectacle.
STANZA 3 Hers was the only house where I ve lain at night in the absolute darkness of a box bed, listening to crickets being friendly.
OVERVIEW Here we see clearly that the language barrier has been overcome by the strong bond between the speaker and his aunt. As a result the young boy feels safe and secure in the dark island of the box bed in Aunt Julia s home.
IN PAIRS Pick out at least 2 examples of word choice that show the speaker feels comfortable in the darkness of Aunt Julia s home. In your jotters, analyse those selected using the following formula: Quotation + definition + connotations + relate to question (how does it show that he feels comfortable?)
Word Choice Contribution to sense of comfort
Word choice: absolute darkness. Darkness has connotations of obscurity, depression & bleakness. Quite unusual that feels comfortable here. However mention of absolute darkness changes perception of the word it almost becomes a pure, perfect and reliable darkness: these more positive connotations creating a sense of comfort, Darkness= a blanket of protection. Hers was the only house where I ve lain at night in the absolute darkness of a box bed, listening to crickets being friendly. Crickets being friendly again positive connotations associated with friendly . Reinforces sense of comfort and safety.
STANZA 4 She was buckets and water flouncing into them. She was winds pouring wetly round house-ends. She was brown eggs, black skirts and a keeper of threepennybits in a teapot.
ON YOUR OWN Can you find a metaphor/simile within the stanza? If so, what is its significance? What does it suggest? Where are the references to nature? What do they symbolise/suggest?
Metaphor/simile? Nature References
She was buckets and water flouncing into them. She was winds pouring wetly round house-ends Metaphor x 2 specifically likening Aunt Julia to the element of water. Word choice of Flouncing & pouring = connotations of volatility Suggests she is an unpredictable character forever moving, and yet unstable. However, where traditionally this instability would be considered worrying, it is clear that the speaker admires this aspect of AJ s personality admiration further emphasised by the references to nature. Water has connotations of movement and purity. In likening AJ to it, the speaker emphasises her own vitality and virtuousness (she is a good character).
She was brown eggs, black skirts and a keeper of threepennybits in a teapot. The poet also links Julia to a collection of simple domestic objects. These objects show her to be natural, traditional and careful with money. This links her with the land and lifestyle of the geographical area, instead of just nature. From this AJ represents the way of life of the crofting islanders who worked the land in a harsh, unforgiving climate. Despite the difficulties of this lifestyle, there is a pride and honesty in it, which the speaker obviously admires.
STANZA 5 Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic very loud and very fast. By the time I had learned a little, she lay silenced in the absolute black of a sandy grave at Luskentyre. But I hear her still, welcoming with a seagull s voice across a hundred yards of peatscrapes and lazybeds and getting angry, getting angry with so many questions unanswered.
IN YOUR GROUPS Are there any examples of repetition? If so, why do you think they have been included? What is the significance of silenced in the absolute black . Pick out specific words and analyse them to support your interpretation.
Repetition of first few lines of poem. Suggests that this is the beginning of a conclusion to the poem as though it has come full circle. Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic very loud and very fast. By the time I had learned a little, she lay silenced in the absolute black of a sandy grave at Luskentyre. Indicates a change in tone changes from one of affection, to one of regret and frustration Contrast between the loud, talkative vibrant Aunt Julia in life and the utter, absolute quiet of death = emphasised using enjambment to position silenced at the opening of the line death has silenced her. Absolute black echoes absolute darkness from before, suggesting a they are always connected, even in death. However the darkness is no comfort as it was for the speaker black shows this. It is more sinister than darkness connotations of evil, death and fear, conveying a bleak vacuum of death.
Metaphor: Almost an attempt at challenging finality of death hear her still although she has passed. Demonstrates connectedness to Nature: a bond that death itself cannot break. But I hear her still, welcoming with a seagull s voice across a hundred yards of peatscrapes and lazybeds
Repetition getting angry, getting angry = emphasises speakers frustration. He is both angry angry at the questions left by the death of his Aunt but he is also mourning the death of a traditional Scottish way of life. Angry angry = Here he is warning us to hold onto the culture and heritage of the island way of life. He is afraid if we allow it to die, like Aunt Julia, then it too will be lost forever. and getting angry, getting angry with so many questions unanswered. The final word is left on a line of its own = reinforces the speakers enduring sense of frustration. The ending of the poem = ambiguous. The questions he alludes to could represent, literally, her questions to the boy, which he was unable to answer as he had no Gaelic, or they could represent all the questions he would have loved to ask but was unable to until it was too late. Moving beyond the literal, the questions could represent the more universal queries we all have about the meaning and mysteries of life itself.
RE-CAP What are the main themes of the poem? How is nature discussed within the poem? What does Aunt Julia symbolise? Has our understanding of the main themes changed?
NO 5 minutes to complete! NOTES QUIZ Write down a brief summary of Visiting Hour. What are the key themes of this poem? Write down a brief summary of Aunt Julia. What are the key themes of this poem? Explain how this metaphor explores the theme of spirituality: What seems a corpse/ is trundled into a lift and vanishes/ Heavenward . Refer to word choice in your answer. What do the lines carrying their burden/ of so much pain, so/ many deaths tell us about MacCaig s feelings at this time How do the lines where I ve lain at night/ in the absolute darkness/ of a box bed, listening to/ crickets being friendly show that MacCaig feels comfortable with Aunt Julia? Refer to word choice in your answer. Explain MacCaig suse of repetition in the lines Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic/ very loud and very fast./ I could not answer her / I could not understand her . Why is it used? Is it effective?
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NO 5 minutes to complete! NOTES DO NOW 1. Write down at least two facts about Norman MacCaig. 2. Write down the key themes of Visiting Hour. 3. What is a simile? 4. What is a metaphor? 5. What is personification? 6. What is juxtaposition? (if you have never heard of this what do you think it could mean?)
TASK Complete questions 2 + 3 from the question paper we were working on last week. You will get 10 minutes to finish these responses.
8 MARK QUESTION Textual Analysis
THE 8 MARK QUESTION This question asks you to compare the poem you have in front of you in the exam, to another poem by the same poet from memory. The question will tell you what it wants you to focus on: it might be a theme, a mood/tone, an idea, how things are contrasted etc. The main thing to remember: always refer back to the question!
THE 8 MARK QUESTION You should split your answer into three parts, under the headings: Commonality Exam Poem Elsewhere
COMMONALITY (2 MARKS) This is where you say what the poem you have in front of you has in common with other poems by the same author. You must say what it has in common with regards to the aspect you have been asked to discuss. Eg. Isolation, barriers of communication, love, loss, mortality
EXAMPLE Question: Look at Visiting Hour. By referring to poetic techniques, discuss how MacCaig explores the theme of isolation. In Visiting Hour, MacCaig explores the theme of isolation by highlighting the fact that he is physically and emotionally separated from his dying friend. Similarly, in Aunt Julia, MacCaig explores the theme of isolation through discussing the language barrier that existed between him and his aunt. He was never able to fully communicate with her, creating a sense of isolation from her, as well as from Scottish culture.
COPY DOWN THESE SENTENCE PROMPTS: Commonality Sentence Starters Through the poem X, MacCaig identifies/explores/displays/discusses/demonstrates the theme of/idea of/technique [what is the question asking you to discuss]. This is evident when/this becomes clear when [go on to explain where this theme/idea is evident within the poem.] MacCaig also explores the theme of/idea of/technique throughout his poem Y. This is noticeable/evident through her discussion of [now explain how this theme/idea is evident in this new poem].
EXAM POEM (2 MARKS) You should discuss the poem you have in front of you with regards to what you have been asked about in the question. You answer this question as you would the analysis questions you have been doing already. Use the Technique+Quote+Comment Structure to achieve 2 marks.
COPY DOWN THESE SENTENCE PROMPTS: In the poem X, Duffy identifies/explores/displays/discusses/demonstrates the theme of/idea of/technique [what is the question asking you to discuss]. This is done through the use of [technique] in the lines [quote]. This shows/suggests that [how does it relate to the question?]. This is made clear through the word choice of [quote word] which means [what does it mean]. It has connotations of [list 2-3 connotations] which successfully demonstrates the theme of/idea of/technique [refer back to question].
ELSEWHERE (4 MARKS) This is where you will be required to recall knowledge from other poems with similar themes and ideas. It is important therefore that you learn your key quotes for each poem. You shouldTechnique+Quote+Commenton how these other poems relate to the question you have been asked. You should do this four times.
GENERAL ADVICE Give yourself plenty of time to complete this question. 20 Minutes at least. Work under the headings you have been given. It will help organise your thinking. Learn your key quotations for all of the poems. Make reference to the question you have been asked throughout your answer. This way, the examiner knows you have read and understand the question. Practice makes perfect with this type of question. The more you do, the better at it you will become.
