Insights into the Meeting with Two Hawks
Explore the author's first meeting with two hawks, examining instinctive decisions, writing style, and narrative elements such as description, dialogue, and thoughts. Dive into themes of beauty, language for effect, and structural analysis. Writing tasks and exam-style questions are also covered in this comprehensive critique.
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H is for Hawk Thursday, 20 March 2025 Jonathan Peel 2017 JLS
Understanding This passage describes the first meeting between the author and her Hawk. What instinctive decision does she make about the two Hawks? How would you describe the way in which she write s about the two birds? Can you spot examples of: Description, narrative, dialogue, thoughts and feelings, fact based explanation? Highlight them and annotate your anthology accordingly. Jonathan Peel 2017 JLS
Themes Theme Beauty of the bird Example 24-26: she is a conjuring trick a fallen angel like gold Comment Fascination , beauty in colour, worth in colour choice, Satan power and potential destructive power Fierce personality of the bird Emotional response Jonathan Peel 2017 JLS
LANGUAGE FOR EFFECT: Technique or device Lists Quotation glitter on the waves, a diving cormorant Effect Created/Intended The range and detailed precision of the bird s vision Similes Metaphors Short incomplete sentences Precise word choice Other language you have noted Jonathan Peel 2017 JLS
Structure We will divide the passage into four or five sections. Use the table below to help you to do this: Sections 1(look for the shifts into a new stage of the account. Where does the hawk actually appear?) Line to line 2 (is the focus always on the bird itself?) 3 4 5 Content Jonathan Peel 2017 JLS
Writing Tasks In the exam there will not be bullet point prompts, but I have given you some here. You can use them to help you focus ther exam writing when the time comes. Making personal relationships with animals is the only way we can understand their nature . Write a magazine article giving your views on this statement. The article may include: The advantages and disadvantages of the relationships Any other points you wish to make. How does the author present the character of the hawks in this passage? You should write about : Descriptions of appearance Behaviour The language chosne to help the writer to convey the ideas. In all writing, refer briefly to the text to support your answer and use quotations. Jonathan Peel 2017 JLS
Exam Style Questions How does the author use language and structure to portray the birds and setting? You should support your answer with close reference to the passage, including BRIEF quotations. How does the write create a sense of excitement? You should support your answer with close reference to the passage, including BRIEF quotations. Jonathan Peel 2017 JLS
