Analysis of "Valentine" by Carol Ann Duffy: Language, Structure, and Form
Valentine: Carol Ann Duffy
LO: to analyse the poem ‘Valentine’ according to language, structure
and form and consider the effects created.
Form:
Different to traditional love poems, Duffy’s poem is written in stanzas
of irregular lengths, several of only one line, which makes the poem
seem disjointed. Some lines are made up of single words, which gives
emphasis to the forceful tone to the reader.
Activity 1
: In your exercise books, write down examples of form.
Structure:
The poem is in a list of the ways an onion symbolizes love. Words and
ideas are built-up and repeated throughout the poem. This could
mirror the different layers of an onion, as the poem’s meaning is
revealed gradually.
The tone is initially quite playful, but the speaker’s insistence that their
partner accepts the gift could be read as encouraging or
confrontational.
Activity 2
: Write down evidence to prove the point I’ve made on tone.
Language:
Extended Metaphor
: The extended metaphor of the onion is used to represent
love. The speaker sees the onion as a honest symbol- it symbolises joy and intimacy
of love, but also the pain it brings. It is an unusual metaphor, which contrasts with
the more stereotypical romantic symbols of love, like roses and cards.
Direct Address
: The poem is written in first person and directly addresses an
unknown partner as ‘you’- it is very personal. The speaker uses commands like
“_____________”, which may be seen as forceful.
Dangerous Language
: There’s an unusual amount of negative language for a love
poem. Words like ‘blind’, ‘fierce’ and ‘Lethal’ have a dark undertone. The speaker
implies that this is a possessive relationship, while the word ‘knife’ at the end hints
that it might be dangerous.
Themes:
Love
: The poet explores different forms of love. Love can be physical or
emotional. It can be ‘fierce’ and ‘possessive’ and cause pain. There are
also references to marriage and being faithful.
Honesty
: The speaker takes pride in being honest about love. They
suggest that the traditional images of love, like red roses and cute cards
don’t say anything real about love.
Danger
: At the end of the poem, there is a growing sense of danger,
although it is only implied.
Valentine:
Not a red rose or a satin heart.
Immediately clear this is not a
traditional love poem.
Stereotypical symbols of love. The
speaker implies these are cliched
and lack meaning.
Valentine: stanza 2
I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.
It promises light
like the careful undressing of love.
Personal pronouns
highlight that this poem is
for a specific person.
Introduces the gift of an onion,
which becomes an extended
metaphor for love. It’s an
unexpected contrast with the first
line.
The moon is a
traditional symbol
of love and
fertility.
This emphasises that the onion is a
plain, unsentimental gift.
Enjambment breaks these similes
up, making the poem feel
disjointed. The separation also
emphasises how unpredictable the
similes are- the comparisons don’t
necessarily end in the way the
reader expects.
Hints at sexual love and
physical intimacy.
Valentine: stanza 3
Here.
It will blind you with tears
like a lover.
It will make your reflection
a wobbling photo of grief.
The use of ‘It’ makes it
unclear whether the
speaker means the onion
or love itself.
The onion symbolises the way
love can cause pain. Language
like ‘blind’ and ‘grief’ is strongly
negative unlike traditional
Valentine’s Day messages.
Enjambment breaks these similes
up, making the poem feel
disjointed. The separation also
emphasises how unpredictable the
similes are- the comparisons don’t
necessarily end in the way the
reader expects.
Valentine: stanza 4
I am trying to be truthful.
This line is unconnected to any
others and almost divides the
poem in two. It could represent
the ‘heart’ of the poem- the
speaker is trying to find the true
meaning of love.
Valentine: stanza 5
Not a cute card of kissogram.
Alliteration makes these seem
overtly sentimental and makes the
reader seem disdainful of them.
Valentine: stanza 6
I give you an onion.
Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips,
possessive and faithful
as we are,
for as long as we are.
This repeated line presents the speaker as
insistent and forceful, establishing a sense
of unease.
Love is described in physical terms.
There’s also a suggestion that it can
be dangerous and possessive
Echoes the wedding vow “For as long as we shall
live.”
Valentine: stanza 7
Take it.
Its platinum looks shrink to a wedding ring,
if you like.
Lethal.
Its scent will cling to your fingers,
cling to your knife.
The offer of an onion in line 6 changes to a
command. The speaker could be merely
encouraging their lover to accept the gift, or
their tone may be interpreted as
confrontational, which makes the mood
darker.
Reference to a wedding ring
could be a proposal. It’s
undermined by the sense of
hesitation in the next line.
By placing ‘Lethal’ alone on an end-
stopped line, the speaker emphasises the
idea that the onion symbolises danger and
death. This is shocking and unexpected in a
love poem.
The repetition of ‘cling’ on two lines
emphasises the inescapability of its ‘scent’.
The word also has a dark double meaning- it
hints love can be possessive and suffocating.
A powerful, disturbing final image. There’s a hint that it refers to
something more sinister than chopping an onion – but exactly what is
left unsaid. It implies that love has the power to wound.
Comparisons?
Comparisons?
My Last Duchess
Sonnet 43
Writer’s Messages/Intentions:
Assessment Question:
How does the poet portray relationships in the poem?
In "Valentine" by Carol Ann Duffy, the unconventional form with irregular stanzas and single-word lines creates a disjointed effect, emphasizing the forceful tone. The structure builds on the layers of an onion as a metaphor for love, gradually revealing the poem's meaning. The language uses an extended metaphor of the onion to symbolize love, coupled with direct address and dangerous undertones, challenging traditional notions of romance. Themes of love, honesty, and danger are explored, subverting clichéd symbols. The poem's unique approach prompts reflection on the complexities of relationships and the darker aspects of love.
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Valentine: Carol Ann Duffy LO: to analyse the poem Valentine according to language, structure and form and consider the effects created.
Form: Different to traditional love poems, Duffy s poem is written in stanzas of irregular lengths, several of only one line, which makes the poem seem disjointed. Some lines are made up of single words, which gives emphasis to the forceful tone to the reader. Activity 1: In your exercise books, write down examples of form.
Structure: The poem is in a list of the ways an onion symbolizes love. Words and ideas are built-up and repeated throughout the poem. This could mirror the different layers of an onion, as the poem s meaning is revealed gradually. The tone is initially quite playful, but the speaker s insistence that their partner accepts the gift could be read as encouraging or confrontational. Activity 2: Write down evidence to prove the point I ve made on tone.
Language: Extended Metaphor: The extended metaphor of the onion is used to represent love. The speaker sees the onion as a honest symbol- it symbolises joy and intimacy of love, but also the pain it brings. It is an unusual metaphor, which contrasts with the more stereotypical romantic symbols of love, like roses and cards. Direct Address: The poem is written in first person and directly addresses an unknown partner as you - it is very personal. The speaker uses commands like _____________ , which may be seen as forceful. Dangerous Language: There s an unusual amount of negative language for a love poem. Words like blind , fierce and Lethal have a dark undertone. The speaker implies that this is a possessive relationship, while the word knife at the end hints that it might be dangerous.
Themes: Love: The poet explores different forms of love. Love can be physical or emotional. It can be fierce and possessive and cause pain. There are also references to marriage and being faithful. Honesty: The speaker takes pride in being honest about love. They suggest that the traditional images of love, like red roses and cute cards don t say anything real about love. Danger: At the end of the poem, there is a growing sense of danger, although it is only implied.
Valentine: Immediately clear this is not a traditional love poem. Stereotypical symbols of love. The speaker implies these are cliched and lack meaning. Not a red rose or a satin heart.
Valentine: stanza 2 Introduces the gift of an onion, which becomes an extended metaphor for love. It s an unexpected contrast with the first line. The moon is a traditional symbol of love and fertility. Personal pronouns highlight that this poem is for a specific person. This emphasises that the onion is a plain, unsentimental gift. I give you an onion. It is a moon wrapped in brown paper. It promises light like the careful undressing of love. Enjambment breaks these similes up, making the poem feel disjointed. The separation also emphasises how unpredictable the similes are- the comparisons don t necessarily end in the way the reader expects. Hints at sexual love and physical intimacy.
Valentine: stanza 3 The onion symbolises the way love can cause pain. Language like blind and grief is strongly negative unlike traditional Valentine s Day messages. The use of It makes it unclear whether the speaker means the onion or love itself. Here. It will blind you with tears like a lover. It will make your reflection a wobbling photo of grief. Enjambment breaks these similes up, making the poem feel disjointed. The separation also emphasises how unpredictable the similes are- the comparisons don t necessarily end in the way the reader expects.
Valentine: stanza 4 This line is unconnected to any others and almost divides the poem in two. It could represent the heart of the poem- the speaker is trying to find the true meaning of love. I am trying to be truthful.
Valentine: stanza 5 Alliteration makes these seem overtly sentimental and makes the reader seem disdainful of them. Not a cute card of kissogram.
Valentine: stanza 6 This repeated line presents the speaker as insistent and forceful, establishing a sense of unease. I give you an onion. Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips, possessive and faithful as we are, for as long as we are. Love is described in physical terms. There s also a suggestion that it can be dangerous and possessive Echoes the wedding vow For as long as we shall live.
Valentine: stanza 7 The offer of an onion in line 6 changes to a command. The speaker could be merely encouraging their lover to accept the gift, or their tone may be interpreted as confrontational, which makes the mood darker. By placing Lethal alone on an end- stopped line, the speaker emphasises the idea that the onion symbolises danger and death. This is shocking and unexpected in a love poem. Reference to a wedding ring could be a proposal. It s undermined by the sense of hesitation in the next line. Take it. Its platinum looks shrink to a wedding ring, if you like. Lethal. Its scent will cling to your fingers, cling to your knife. The repetition of cling on two lines emphasises the inescapability of its scent . The word also has a dark double meaning- it hints love can be possessive and suffocating. A powerful, disturbing final image. There s a hint that it refers to something more sinister than chopping an onion but exactly what is left unsaid. It implies that love has the power to wound.
Comparisons? My Last Duchess Sonnet 43
Assessment Question: How does the poet portray relationships in the poem?
