Relationship Dynamics in "Even Tho" by Grace Nichols
‘Even Tho’ by Grace Nichols
LO) To explore how Nichols conveys
the nature of relationship through
language and structure.
What impression of the poem do you
get from these images?
Grace Nichols
Grace Nichols grew up in Guyana, on the
northern coast of South America, facing onto
the Caribbean. This poem explores the nature of
relationship in this type of environment.
Grace Nichols – creating a ‘voice’
Keywords:
Creole
,
standard English
,
poet's voice
,
language
choice
,
relationships
,
carnival
, succulent
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First, read the poem
Animation
Even
Tho
Man
I love
but
won’t let you
devour
even tho
I’m
all
watermelon
and
starapple
and
plum
when
you touch
me
Standard English
Creole dialect
Shows convergence of
both cultures
Sounds primitive
Shows love + togetherness
With contrasting
feelings
1
st
2 lines show
contrasting
feelings
To consume greedily, she sees
herself as fruit for him to eat,
Gives impression that he has fairly
dominant role
4 line stanza
shows
togetherness of
the two
Exotic fruits-
succulent, juicy.
A metaphor for
herself. Suggests
she’s soft, exotic
for him
Extended metaphor for
him eating her – image
suggests physically
involved.
even tho
I’m all
seamoss
and
jellyfish
and
tongue
Come
leh
we go to
de
carnival
You be banana
I be avocado
Slightly less appealing
image + more orientated
towards taste/ texture rather
than food.
Juxtaposition of these items
is unusual but continues
Caribbean theme.
4 line stanza continues
breaks with 1
st
+ last stanza
reinforces their separate
Identities.
Links to primal
language.
Creole dialect used to
convey convergence with
Guyana culture
celebration
Metaphors – idea of more
balanced relationship as
they are both portrayed as
fruit + go to carnival together
Primal language
used, suggests
instinctiveness
Come
leh
we
hug up
and
brace-up
and
sweet
one
another up
But
then
leh we
break
free
yes, leh we
break
free
Creole dialect
helps to
reinforce
Caribbean
atmosphere
Repetition and rhyme
helps to reinforce their
physical connection
Enjoyable, indulgent
Contrasting feeling
returns
Continued
enjambment
reinforces sense of
‘breaking free’
throughout the
poem
Suggests forcefully disconnect,
repetition of ‘break’ suggests it’s
difficult to do
And keep to de
motion
of
we own
person
/
ality
Links
back to
line 8/9
of sea
Oxymoron –
reinforces contrast
of individuals
together
individual
They stay true
+ strong to themselves
Possibly expressing the
need for individuals to
maintain their own
Identities.
Language:
the combination of standard
English and Creole link colonial roots.
Moves seamlessly from one to the
other, like Nichols’ own comments on
her feeling at home in both cultures.
Guyana enriched by
Caribbean, myths +
landscape + culture. This
poem embraces both
How does the poet use language, form
and punctuation to convey the nature
of the relationship in the poem ‘Even
tho’.
o
show an understanding of the use of language, form and
punctuation
o
demonstrate the ability to make relevant connections between the
techniques used and the presentation of the nature of the
relationship;
o
use the ‘PEEE’ technique to show the link between form and point
of view.
Plenary
•
Have you:
–
understood the ways Nichols has used language and structure to
convey the nature of her relationship;
–
connected with the different attitudes presented.
•
Discuss how successfully the poet conveys the balance of
being close and yet still needing freedom within a
relationship.
•
For English Literature, find another poem in Relationships
that explores a relationship between a woman and a man
through one (or more) strong personal voice. Compare the
impact that the relationship has on them as readers.
The poem "Even Tho" by Grace Nichols delves into the nature of relationships through language and structure, showcasing a blend of Creole, standard English, and primal language. Nichols uses vivid metaphors of exotic fruits to convey themes of love, togetherness, and balance. The poem reflects the Caribbean environment where the poet grew up, highlighting the interconnectedness between cultures and the instinctual aspects of human connections.
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Even Tho by Grace Nichols LO) To explore how Nichols conveys the nature of relationship through language and structure.
What impression of the poem do you get from these images?
Grace Nichols Grace Nichols grew up in Guyana, on the northern coast of South America, facing onto the Caribbean. This poem explores the nature of relationship in this type of environment. Grace Nichols creating a voice Keywords: Creole, standard English, poet's voice, language choice, relationships, carnival, succulent
First, read the poem Animation
Shows convergence of both cultures Standard English Creole dialect Even Tho Sounds primitive Shows love + togetherness Man I love but won t let you devour 1st 2 lines show contrasting feelings With contrasting feelings To consume greedily, she sees herself as fruit for him to eat, Gives impression that he has fairly dominant role even tho I m all watermelon and starapple and plum when you touch me 4 line stanza shows togetherness of the two Exotic fruits- succulent, juicy. A metaphor for herself. Suggests she s soft, exotic for him Extended metaphor for him eating her image suggests physically involved.
Slightly less appealing image + more orientated towards taste/ texture rather than food. Juxtaposition of these items is unusual but continues Caribbean theme. 4 line stanza continues breaks with 1st + last stanza reinforces their separate Identities. even tho I m all seamoss and jellyfish and tongue Links to primal language. celebration Come leh we go to de carnival You be banana I be avocado Creole dialect used to convey convergence with Guyana culture Metaphors idea of more balanced relationship as they are both portrayed as fruit + go to carnival together Primal language used, suggests instinctiveness
Creole dialect helps to reinforce Caribbean atmosphere Come leh we hug up and brace-up and sweet one another up Repetition and rhyme helps to reinforce their physical connection Enjoyable, indulgent Continued enjambment reinforces sense of breaking free throughout the poem But then leh we break free yes, leh we break free Contrasting feeling returns Suggests forcefully disconnect, repetition of break suggests it s difficult to do
Links back to line 8/9 of sea And keep to de motion of we own person/ality Oxymoron reinforces contrast of individuals together individual They stay true + strong to themselves Possibly expressing the need for individuals to maintain their own Identities. Language: the combination of standard English and Creole link colonial roots. Moves seamlessly from one to the other, like Nichols own comments on her feeling at home in both cultures. Guyana enriched by Caribbean, myths + landscape + culture. This poem embraces both
How does the poet use language, form and punctuation to convey the nature of the relationship in the poem Even tho . o show an understanding of the use of language, form and punctuation o demonstrate the ability to make relevant connections between the techniques used and the presentation of the nature of the relationship; o use the PEEE technique to show the link between form and point of view.
Plenary Have you: understood the ways Nichols has used language and structure to convey the nature of her relationship; connected with the different attitudes presented. Discuss how successfully the poet conveys the balance of being close and yet still needing freedom within a relationship. For English Literature, find another poem in Relationships that explores a relationship between a woman and a man through one (or more) strong personal voice. Compare the impact that the relationship has on them as readers.
