Parenthood Through Imagery in "Nettles" by Vernon Scannell

 
‘Nettles’ by Vernon Scannell
 
LO: To explore how Scannell uses
imagery and metaphor to convey his
feelings about parenthood
 
Vernon Scannell
 
This poem is about a father protecting his son.
It’s about the dangers of a dark, menacing world
in which nobody and nothing can be saved.
Nature will attack you, be cut down, grow back
and fight you again… just like the military will
hunt you down and find you if you leave without
consent.
Scannell is protecting his son from a world he
hates and fears.
 
Vernon Scannell
 
Sees war in everything
Was a dark character, 85 when he
died.
Lived through 2
nd
 World War and the
Cold War.
Joined the army aged 18.
He was addicted to desertion, leaving
the army without consent twice.
He was sent to a psychiatric hospital
the 2
nd
 time.
He had 2 children (1 was handicapped
and died as a young child, the other
died in a bike crash as an adult.)
 
Watch the YouTube clip to listen to the
poem
 
My
 
son aged three 
fell in the 
nettle bed
.   
A
‘Bed’ 
seemed a curious name for those 
green spears
, 
B
That 
regiment of spite 
behind the shed:
It wa
s
 no pla
c
e for re
s
t. With 
s
ob
s
 and tear
s
 
Oxymoron – emphasises contrast
between image of stinging nettles
with security of bed.
 
Possession
 
Emotive
 
Inverted commas
suggest
contemplation.
 
Full stop forced reader
to slow down
 
personifies – like a battalion of soldiers
 
Metaphor – bayonets
linked to military/
violence
 
The boy came 
s
eeking comfort 
and I 
s
aw 
A
White bli
s
ter
s
 beaded 
on hi
s
 
tender
 
s
kin. 
B
We 
s
oothed 
him till hi
s
 pain wa
s
 not 
s
o 
raw
. 
A
At la
s
t 
he offered u
s
 a 
watery grin
, 
B
 
Sibilance linked to emphasise
the soothing of his injured
son
 
Alliteration
emphasises small
blisters
 
Shows he’s vulnerable
 
Protective images
 
Oxymoronic image – merging
laughter of comfort with relief of
pain. Reflects changing moods of
children
 
2
nd
 quatrain – language more
tender and protective
 
Dark, violent image
 
Father anxious for
his son to no
longer feel pain
 
And then I took my bill
h
ook, 
h
oned the 
blade
 
A
And went outside and 
slashed
 in 
fury
 with it 
B
Till not a nettle in that 
fierce
 
parade
 
A
Stood upright 
any more. And then I lit 
B
 
3
rd
 quatrain – language changes to being very regimented
 
Military references
 
Personification helps to portray
military images used when
destroying nettles
 
Anger towards nettles / feeling that he is
chopping away at bad memories of the
past.
 
A funeral 
p
yre to 
b
urn the fallen dead, 
A
But in two weeks the busy 
sun
 and 
rain 
B
Had called up 
tall recruits
 
behind the shed
: 
A
My son would often feel sharp wounds again
. 
B
 
Last line = negative image. Maybe about loss of
his son or about pointlessness of trying to protect
your children.
 
Metaphor burning the wounded/ dead. Ultimate end
reinforced by sounds of 
consonance
 
Natural forces
 
New recruits to replace those
who have died
 
Lost at war
 
Surreptitious/ furtive
 
Links back to the beginning/ emotive/ possessive
 
Clue  to deep rooted hatred
towards the military
 
4
th
 quatrain offers clue to his resentment towards military
 
My son aged three fell in the nettle bed.
‘Bed’ seemed a curious name for those green spears,
That regiment of spite behind the shed:
It was no place for rest. With sobs and tears
 
The boy came seeking comfort and I saw
White blisters beaded on his tender skin.
We soothed him till his pain was not so raw.
At last he offered us a watery grin,
 
And then I took by billhook, honed the blade
And went outside and slashed in fury with it
Till not a nettle in that fierce parade
Stood upright any more. And then I lit
 
A funeral pyre to burn the fallen dead
But in two weeks the busy sun and rain
Had called up tall recruits behind the shed:
My son would often feel sharp wounds again.
Metaphors
linked to
military
references
 
Theme: war/ violence/ danger (in
nature and the everyday world)
 
Language
 
Metaphors are linked to the
military/ war/ painful
images.
Anger – there’s danger in all
things. Negative poem.
Physical hurts trigger
memories of mental scars
Protective – natural rhyme
in poem reflects a nursery
rhyme  sung to comfort a
child.
 
Structure
 
Simple ABAB rhyme scheme
Iambic pentameter
4 quatrains
Simple melodic rhyme
scheme reinforcing sense of
nursery rhyme for child.
 
Compare to: another poem that shows
anger and strength of those feelings
 
 
 
 
 
Nettles
Vernon Scannell
How does Scannell use imagery and
metaphor to convey his feelings about
parenthood?
In your answer explain why Scannell
has chosen to use military images to
explore ideas about parenthood in this
poem.
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Vernon Scannell's poem "Nettles" delves into the protective instincts of a father shielding his son from the harsh realities of the world. Through vivid imagery and metaphor, Scannell depicts the struggles of parenthood, portraying nature as a menacing force akin to the military, all while reflecting on his own life experiences and emotional turmoil. The poem explores themes of love, fear, vulnerability, and the relentless desire to shield loved ones from harm in a world filled with challenges and dangers.

  • Parenthood
  • Imagery
  • Metaphor
  • Vernon Scannell
  • Poetry

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  1. Nettles by Vernon Scannell LO: To explore how Scannell uses imagery and metaphor to convey his feelings about parenthood

  2. Vernon Scannell This poem is about a father protecting his son. It s about the dangers of a dark, menacing world in which nobody and nothing can be saved. Nature will attack you, be cut down, grow back and fight you again just like the military will hunt you down and find you if you leave without consent. Scannell is protecting his son from a world he hates and fears.

  3. Vernon Scannell Sees war in everything Was a dark character, 85 when he died. Lived through 2ndWorld War and the Cold War. Joined the army aged 18. He was addicted to desertion, leaving the army without consent twice. He was sent to a psychiatric hospital the 2ndtime. He had 2 children (1 was handicapped and died as a young child, the other died in a bike crash as an adult.)

  4. Watch the YouTube clip to listen to the poem

  5. Oxymoron emphasises contrast between image of stinging nettles with security of bed. Possession Emotive Full stop forced reader to slow down My son aged three fell in the nettle bed. A Bed seemed a curious name for those green spears, B That regiment of spite behind the shed: It was no place for rest. With sobs and tears Metaphor bayonets linked to military/ violence personifies like a battalion of soldiers Inverted commas suggest contemplation.

  6. 2nd quatrain language more tender and protective Sibilance linked to emphasise the soothing of his injured son Alliteration emphasises small blisters Shows he s vulnerable The boy came seeking comfort and I saw A White blisters beaded on his tender skin. B We soothed him till his pain was not so raw. A At last he offered us a watery grin, B Dark, violent image Protective images Oxymoronic image merging laughter of comfort with relief of pain. Reflects changing moods of children Father anxious for his son to no longer feel pain

  7. 3rd quatrain language changes to being very regimented And then I took my billhook, honed the blade A And went outside and slashed in fury with it B Till not a nettle in that fierce parade A Stood upright any more. And then I lit B Military references Personification helps to portray military images used when destroying nettles Anger towards nettles / feeling that he is chopping away at bad memories of the past.

  8. 4th quatrain offers clue to his resentment towards military Metaphor burning the wounded/ dead. Ultimate end reinforced by sounds of consonance Lost at war A funeral pyre to burn the fallen dead, A But in two weeks the busy sun and rain B Had called up tall recruits behind the shed: A My son would often feel sharp wounds again. B Natural forces Surreptitious/ furtive Last line = negative image. Maybe about loss of his son or about pointlessness of trying to protect your children. New recruits to replace those who have died Links back to the beginning/ emotive/ possessive Clue to deep rooted hatred towards the military

  9. My son aged three fell in the nettle bed. Bed seemed a curious name for those green spears, That regiment of spite behind the shed: It was no place for rest. With sobs and tears Metaphors linked to military references The boy came seeking comfort and I saw White blisters beaded on his tender skin. We soothed him till his pain was not so raw. At last he offered us a watery grin, And then I took by billhook, honed the blade And went outside and slashed in fury with it Till not a nettle in that fierce parade Stood upright any more. And then I lit A funeral pyre to burn the fallen dead But in two weeks the busy sun and rain Had called up tall recruits behind the shed: My son would often feel sharp wounds again.

  10. Theme: war/ violence/ danger (in nature and the everyday world) Language Metaphors are linked to the military/ war/ painful images. Anger there s danger in all things. Negative poem. Physical hurts trigger memories of mental scars Protective natural rhyme in poem reflects a nursery rhyme sung to comfort a child. Structure Simple ABAB rhyme scheme Iambic pentameter 4 quatrains Simple melodic rhyme scheme reinforcing sense of nursery rhyme for child.

  11. Compare to: another poem that shows anger and strength of those feelings

  12. How does Scannell use imagery and metaphor to convey his feelings about parenthood? In your answer explain why Scannell has chosen to use military images to explore ideas about parenthood in this poem.

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